Burnt Bridges
 

Burnt Bridges
-Baron Mynd-Clockword Orange-Phrantik-Axl

I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions.
shown notions of better life, the wedded wife, a wealthy man
so now im allowing fate to Lend a Hand to my Self Demands.
my Selfish Plans too Travel Far and Wide, Re-Start my Life
and decorate each Darkened Night w/ a stars Sparkling Light.
Dark Inside as i write down the Worst of my Worries in song,
& feel its time i began the Rest of my Journey - and moved on.
The Moods Wrong, i start jotting down lines in a rhyme book
ideas Spring from the Spaces, Filling the Pages w/ my thoughts.
Ive taught the Baffled Swarms to look in Apples Core, find love
but i Resent the Gimmicks i was Sent to Mimic and rise above.
Fly doves for symbols of peace, im the symbol of all thats lost,
so i'll burn my Bridges to make sure im never Double Crossed. .

My bridge's reduced to ash's,all that remain's are backflash's
Now the only way is forward,Heading the way the wind lash's
An eternal struggle, my journey for my promised land begun..
I cannot run, but only take my awaited problems as they come
Once a wealthy man, i had left all reality behind in the past..
A life bulit on cash, & now its a question, of how long will i last
I've disturbed the god's,.. a storm gather's up in the cloud's
Dark & twisted, should evil prevail, releasing out hell's hound's
I feel no remorse, my thought's flood with regret & hatred..
A force to strong im left face to face with the devil's patriot
But perhap's now is my time, all my sin's must end here...
Sick of running from fear,my burnt bridge's must remain clear

and it ends with ashes- the way it was back then
dust to dust- make ashes by lightin the fuse again
obsessed with pyro- i need some mental help
cause burning bridges is the only way my pain is felt
flickering flames used to express tortured beliefs
and the bellowing smoke escapes my life long grief
a hobby gone mad- the fire encompassed my heart
and now the burning inside is ripping my chest apart
i've burnt bridges to leave all my emotions stranded
and i burnt myself to leave all my memories branded.
a past i cant escape- a love for heat with deep lashes
and so it ends like the bible- dust to dust- ashes to ashes

...its not over yet...

I burn bridges, in fact I always love to start fires
I even met the word gullible and it called me a liar
I think I'm the best, I'm being humble, yes
A bless with my text until I corrupted the net
Used to get high enough to jump off the sun and dunk
Then low on verbal abuse until I always turned punch drunk
And knock out ya adam's apple with a punch or three
Just to prove that the apple never falls far from the tree
Repeat my words in flatter, my prose do matter
I put Nabisco out of business, cuz I'm the best ritzy cracker
Ah but again I boast my own talents and flaunt my skills
Then I'll put on my armour cuz aGG is always dressed to kill
aGG is ill, grab a word and lets go and start to rumble
And remember I'm being honest when I say "I'm Humble"

that was iight

needs a hook doe

real responses??

Lmao...U need too be banned for dat small response...Anyways Phrantik this drop was Nice , Ur Rhyming/Flow was on point , u had a heavy amount of multies , U just know how too put ur emotions into lyrics , The tittle was really creative..And it did described what this open mic would be about.....U put real thought into this....Great Lyrics man....I was feelin it....U get a 10/10

I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions.

^^^^That was 2 Sick starting Lines....When I read the first 2 lines , I knew this piece would be Great....It's like u fed off these 2 Lines...

Upping for Phrantik

^ Opening verse was me, phrantik did the last verse. .

not bad... I hate boring deep shit like this.... but I gotta give props 4 the multi's an' vocab... how come you get a sticky, I want one... ne way, blah, blah, blahdy, blah... keep spittin... baron mynd/ camarac had the best verse.. that's the one I was giving props too... peace

word baron and clockwork are dope.

this was dope throughout...the metas were off the hook.
I'll have to say I liked Cams verse most cuz it was sick like malaria, but it was also longer too.

Sween came with a nice flow, I think he had the best lines in the whole thing...these stuck out


I loved those lines...can't really say why, but the devil's patriot is a really strong title, and it show fear just in the text.

Tik, your verse was really nice, I havn't seen that much of your stuff, so I can't really compare it to anything else.
I liked the constant references to flame, and it really reminded me of life right now.
I'm in Kamloops and the whole province is burning down :(

Dope piece.
One

^when i go to bc i might stop in there.
pm me your number.. ill hit you up.

Wow... all three verses blew me away, and shit.. this was one of the best drops on here...
Camarac started off with a good verse, he showed me what i was missing in my open mic, it was good for me to learn from that

I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions

loved those lines.

Clockwork had a great verse which was really good, and improved on the whole piece unlike in some open mics, some are weaker than others, you just had an overall great verse

I've disturbed the god's,.. a storm gather's up in the cloud's
Dark & twisted, should evil prevail, releasing out hell's hound's
liked those lines.

And finally Phrantik...i already expected this from you and shit, a good verse and just took away any possible way that i could judge all three verses. All three had equally good verses and thats all i couldv'e said but i extended upon this. i didn't see any problems in this drop as far as i saw.

obsessed with pyro- i need some mental help
cause burning bridges is the only way my pain is felt
i was feelin that line. Shit was ill.
peace

And yes. . it has now become officially un-fuck-witable. . I'm on the last verse now. AH HA.

^ lol.

AxL i would quote your whole verse, cuz it was funny. It was a good verse, even for cockiness and braggin and shit, still made the reader enjoy the verse...good shit. peace

wat a great open mic

U hate boring deep shit...Maaybe none of yall shit get stickied because it aint deep....


aNY way this was a dope peice really enjoyed it.........U guys dope as fuck...............Keep spittin and will somebody please Bann Blunt......

^ Lol, He Cant Be Banned For His Opinions, But Thanks For The Props!

Great collabo fellaz.
Everyone brought a crucial aspect to the table, different yet similar in overall themes..

Baron~

"shown notions of better life, the wedded wife, a wealthy man
so now im allowing fate to Lend a Hand to my Self Demands.
my Selfish Plans too Travel Far and Wide, Re-Start my Life
and decorate each Darkened Night w/ a stars Sparkling Light."

Great multi's. Stunning Imagery also.

"Fly doves for symbols of peace, im the symbol of all thats lost,
so i'll burn my Bridges to make sure im never Double Crossed. ."

Nice symbolism and reference to the title...really set the stage for the next couple stanzas. You are an amazing writer.

Clockword~

"My bridge's reduced to ash's,all that remain's are backflash's
Now the only way is forward,Heading the way the wind lash's"

Once again, great flow and picture perfect imagery..especially in this line:

"I've disturbed the god's,.. a storm gather's up in the cloud's
Dark & twisted, should evil prevail, releasing out hell's hound's"

You added a great flair to this collab. Nice writez, no doubt.

Tikki~

"i've burnt bridges to leave all my emotions stranded
and i burnt myself to leave all my memories branded."

Wow..really powerful line there..while the first two verses seemed more focused on the physicality of the "burnt bridges" yours seemed more centered on the emotional half..if that made any sense at all..

"a past i cant escape- a love for heat with deep lashes
and so it ends like the bible- dust to dust- ashes to ashes"

Great way to end the verse..reference to the bible adds to the intensity of the overall feeling of the verse. Nicely done.

AxL~ After the second or third line of this verse..i was like, what the hell does this have to do with anything?? It seemed like you got off topic to me, but maybe it relates in some way I'm just missing..It was a nice verse, good flow and bars, just didnt seem to fit in with the tone of the previous 3 verses...

So Anyway...
Nice collab..Great concept, well executed. Propz to all participants. It was a pleasure to read.
peace.

da first verse wuz da greatest shit i seen in a while...every verse wuz real ill but da first stoodout a lil more den da othas...best flow... da last one wuz funny, braggin and humblness and all dat... whos wuz da fist tho??

it started off good like:

"I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions."

thats good word play, i like that type of rhyme sceam. but when i started reading more it fell off, not in the sence that it got weak but it didnt get better, it more or less just stayed the same.

the second verse......something about wind lashing on a bridge, then:

"An eternal struggle, my journey for my promised land begun..
I cannot run, but only take my awaited problems as they come"

thats iight but corny at the same time. then there was something about gods and it being dark with demons, then to cash, then evil......i dunno, i droped tha blunt an burnt myself, after that i lost track of where i was and went to the next verse.

1 of my favorite mc's is "Kool G Rap" i love his rhymeing style, so i liked this verse the most out the whole thing:

"I think I'm the best, I'm being humble, yes
A bless with my text until I corrupted the net"

i was feelin this 2:
"Used to get high enough to jump off the sun and dunk"

hahahaha.............L's an blunts stays geekt. all out, i feel that the 3rd verse had the best medophores, an ended it nicely.

even tho i aint feel deep shits an this was deep shits, this was "good", and its an iight collabo.

real critic
hater need love to

my feedback:

not bad from all of you, but if verses had an ass camaracs literally shitted on the other ones.
lol

he others were ok, u want honest feedback thats it...

camaracs had stunning multies and imagery.

you are the weakest link,

godbye...

^ Thank You My Man, But Yeah, Its Kind Of Tradition I Outshine Kids In Collabs = )

Damm... I remember when I got a sticky... I miss those days... lol... oh shit, yo man, this shit was hot... I was definitely feeling the concept of it, liked the whole metaphore with the tittle and shit... pretty deep, the story was structured well and all, had strong vocab, and it flowed nicely... did kinda get me a bit bored at points... but thas just me, I still see it as a tight drop...

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everyone has read this already, sloth ticklers!

[unsticky]

^hoe ass nigga.com

but word, this was stickied waaaaaaaaay too long. .