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*BlankZ* VS *Killa*
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no dr no hate no crew no feed no bite |
like holiday im inn............wen do we post........ who posting firsst......... i hate this 100 character shytt.............
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just spit, time limit is 20min. dat way we dont have 2 c who spits first............................................. ...................................
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I make ya pay for touchin this, by givin ya hand, thumb tax//
Like a siemen on a cancerous spine, ya got weak cum backs// Like an impotent penis, after I humiliate ya struggle to keep ya head up// The only way you could elevate in this battle, is typin uppin to move da thread up// 1 And 0 Battle Record?......Not Bad I Guess, But Let Krimzen Tell U What// Goin Around And Callin Out For Pink Slips........Whatcha Gonna Do When They Happen To SHow Up// Lyk ya sig says, *I'm~Seeing* anotha one of my casualties// Dis just anotha fatalitie, ya shootin *blanks* into fags lyk *priests* and *R-Kelly*// Ya can't beat this kat, ya too young, ya experience totally lacks// Ya can't be an emcee, when ya ignorant bout beats, see, ya think jerkin off's what's meant my "doggin the wax"// |
u over ya limit by 7 minutes dawg.................................
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what da fuck, first u ova ya time limit, den u get offline!?
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Your verse will surprise me if theres any personals...if rapping was a job u'd get laid off like GM personelle/
put into a 'jail cell'..is tha only tyme krimzen is 'behind solid bars'...only tyme your crews ILL is when yous quarenteend for sars/ I pray to GOD, dat krimzen believe's in Miracles cuz ILL 'standing up' to me is equivilant to 'christopher Reeves' at 'Urinals'/ bLaNkz tha type to drink Overproof with ma Cereal...then hook up a hose to 'sewar pipes', so i can 'sHiT' on all of ILL at ye Funeral/ Krimzen lacks tha 'aggressivness'.... so your punches are labled 'passive hits'... like 'deaf' kids 'tossing salad'.... i ain't hearing ye 'shit'// ::sTrAiGhT:+:sPiTTeN:: |
ma computer crashed....... nothing i could do......but i rushed ma verse as fast as possible.....lets get tha voting started...............
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who went around calling out Pink slips...i kno i didn't sooo...... i don't kno where u got that line from dawg...so i bring up tha ?uestions...was your verse partially pre-written......i'll leave that up to tha people voting.....
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o aight, if dats what happen no problem dawg
1st uppin................................ ................................................ |
tight battle but i think blankz took this with punches flow was bout even wordplay to blankz
no hate and props to both Vote=blankz ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
1-0 for me........... uppin one time^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
good luck.................... :+:sTrAiGhT::sPiTTeN:+: |
blankz took this props 2 both of u niggaz
blaknz won this shit cuz he had betta punches ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~ |
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^ yo nigga sorry for freepostin but you wanna battle me huh????
if u are tell me and i will set the thread i dont give a shit how much lines..you can set the rules nigga |
not right now, i got a busy schedule for tha next few days............but i'll pm you when im bak on RB...........
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i wuzz feelin krimzonz verse but then i read blankz........
krimzon..... Like an impotent penis, after I humiliate ya struggle to keep ya head up// The only way you could elevate in this battle, is typin uppin to move da thread up// ur best lines^^^^ but other than those two i wuzznt really feelin anything else so im gonna give this one to blankz for flow and punchz....but i still think ur wu-tang sig. is da dopest one i ever seen vote-blankz |
*BlankZ* VS *Killa*
LOL Funny ass Battle lol overall it was good though - i like reading battles like this Overall: both punches were good although *BlankZ* end of his verse declined a little bit wordplay - goes to blankz ! he switched it up but overall i give it to *Killa* no hatin jus opinion |
i like ur style blankz u an ill newbie u gonna go far on this site i dont know what but i like ur wordplay and structure and style and how u flow ur shit is tight man PROPS O n E
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by DE$SKILL$CUMN@T
[B]i like ur style blankz u an ill newbie u gonna go far on this site i dont know what but i like ur wordplay and structure and style and how u flow ur shit is tight man PROPS VOTE = BLANKZ |
mad respecks mane.........................can't ever stop elevating^^ ...........................uppin for some votes....amke sure u also POLL vote................................
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both kinda had some played lines..blankz flow was alil off but he had some good punches...wordplay was iight..brought some heat but you need to be a lil more creative....other than that good shit...
kk was iight but you had some real old played lines like from 2000!! disses were so so... you had some good oneliners but your punches did'nt quite follow up good.....did'nt really spark enuff...but work on ya shit and bring it up to date... vote blankz....................................... return fav |
thats kinna tha battle...K'Oed guy, wasn't allowed to poll vote for some reason...but if he was than that would bring tha POLL vote to 5-1............................good battle Krimzen................................
respeck :+:sTrAiGhT::sPiTTeN:+: |
wow... yeah.. i was surprised. this newb iz good. i like ur style. props espicialy for writin it so quick an shit. yup...
fow an all tha too. ya... |
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