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SmokaJoka666 vs. Dj kRuNK
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no dickryde/bias/hate votes no playin off of verses due date tonight by midnight... peace 4:20 |
checkin in
let's try to get dis done within da hour let's do dis [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[100 shit]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]] |
My flow can’t be contained, break through your "rib-cage" and make your "lungs" wet/
Smoka strikes out with girls, can’t be "French" that’s why he always "tongue-less"// Rhymes are old they never get noticed except when u change lines to bold/ U shooting-blanks, so when I’m hit, like virgins having sex u can’t find-the-hole// I spit flames when I face you, that’s the reason my rhymes never back-fire/ Shit in a bulls-eye I’m untouchable, u couldn’t "find-your-mark" even if you "tracked-tires"// Text is cold and chilly, every-time u enter tournaments you known blown-it/ Cause like "Duncan" missing the final shot, u always fail at the "Spur-of-the-moment"// Your skills "can’t be found" like "tracing evidence" on "hacked sites"/ My losses and wins are even, u'll try to sway priests to vote just so they can bap-ties// ur turn |
uppin 4 dis nigga to spit damn taken all day
only took me 18 min 4 mine hope ur not pre-writtin |
my bad yo...i thought we had agreed to do this by midnight tonight....i didn't read this after i made it i got off...i'll post ASAP....
peace 4:20 |
if this bitch stood beside "LIL JON" he wouldn't be "KRUNK", ur SOFTER than "dying TREE TRUNKS"//
i'll "chase u through a FOREST" u need to "listen to JENNY" and "pick up the speed GUMP"(Run Forest Run!!....lmao)// i'll leave u in more "SPASMS" than a "DEMON" who "seen MONKS", if u were a "CARPENTER" with a "HOOKER" u wouldn't "NAIL" close// this kid has "attempted PUNCHES" like a "BOXER with ARTHIRITIS in his ELBOWS",like "TRIPPIN PROSTITUTES" u "FAILED HOE" (fell)// u got "TIGHTER SHIT" than a "PRISON INMATES BITCH", like "feedin PIDGEONS IN JETS" ur "PRECISION EMULATES SHIT"// don't "THINK TOO HARD" cuz ur "DECISION'S STIMULATES DICKS", i'll "STICK TO YA WORSE" than "SLIMY BOOGERS U CAN'T FLICK"// ur as TALL as an ANT'S DICK, my rhymes are "ILLEGAL IN AMERICA" and it seems i'm workin with "TWO MINDS" like a "SCHIZOPHRANTIC HISPANIC'S" antics// u wouldn't "ROCK THIS WORLD" if u "had ur own PLANET", i'll "GET ON UR NERVERS" worse than "DEEP CUTS"// ur stupider than a PIMP WHO NEEDS SLUTS, like a "BUTCHER SHOP IN BOSTON" this kid "MEAT'S BUTTS"//(Boston Butt & Meet) i'll make sure u don't sleep much, like a "WHORE'S MOUTH ON DRUMS" ur "BEAT'S SUCK", this kid is so "MUCH OF A FAGGOT he UNZIPS HIS OWN PANTS" to "FREE NUTS"// took me about 13 minutes....sorry for the waste of time yo...i got off earlier homie.... peace 4:20 |
uppin this shit for some votes......this is my first uppin.....nice verse from u though DJ....the last one i battled sucked....lol....
peace 4:20 |
This was a nice battle guys
But smoka had uppa hand with his structure flow and wordplay He had some nice punches goin on tooo Vote SMoka You hit my 2 battles up there a few down |
aight coo.....i'll go check yo shit homie.....anyway....keep votin peoples..........
peace 4:20 |
I'll give the edge to Joka cuz of his relentles wordplay and complex punches...
The other cat came close, as he brought wordplay as well... Punched nicely... But I'm leanin towards Joka for the complexity. Everything else was about even. Peace Holla back... Born to Kill vs. HooDz |
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=71226
hit that up then i will hit this up when ur done aight |
Smoka got this one
this kid has "attempted PUNCHES" like a "BOXER with ARTHIRITIS in his ELBOWS",like "TRIPPIN PROSTITUTES" u "FAILED HOE" (fell)// hahahaha that shit was funny very good line aight Vote=SMOKAJOKA666 |
aight coo...uppin for a second time......two more and we can get this shit rid of.....
peace 4:20 |
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yes he did i'm gonna have to go wit dj he had the better overall verse 2 me harder punches and more complex vote=dj krunk |
uppin 4 sum votes
damn smoka i know u pre-writ dat it took u atleast 5 hours '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' uppin 3-1 |
sorry kid....i don't pre write u can obviously tell that i didn't pre write this shit if u read all of my other battles...this is probably the quickest verse i've ever done on this site....except for my battle i had with nebo....
peace 4:20 |
damn dis was ur quickest it took u half a day to write dat
u must be a slow ma'fucka well uppin 4 votes ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ |
smokajoka666 got this battle by a long shot better punchs wordplay and flow but props to both ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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thanx 4 votin
i guess i lost dis one 4-1 uppin ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
we'll do this again yo...i don't pre-write homie...but good battle....aight.....
peace 4:20 |
aight let's get the last vote in this bitch so it can be over with....uppin for the third time.....
peace 4:20 |
aight close battle and props to both but smoka won this better punches flow and wordplay
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