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Mortality 08-06-03 01:57 AM

Rappad v.s Mortality
 
Aight lets go

My Rules
You spit first
10-14 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes


Lets get this goin

Rappad 08-06-03 01:58 AM

ok man checkin in gl to both of us im spittin and going to sleep lol
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Mortality 08-06-03 02:01 AM

aight hurry up yo................................................ .............................
Oh yea i'm not gonna feed i forgot to put the no feeding rule in.
Good Luck Kid.....................

Rappad 08-06-03 02:17 AM

shit sorry my comp just fuckin crashed w/e i remember most of my verse

I'm 'kickin' vicious shit so speak and you'll be shittin Timbs for weeks//
Ya rhymes could use some definition so here's a list of synonyms for "weak"//
Timid, slim, and beat; pathetic, ass, scrawny, tired, and hopeless//
Ya mic's wires are frozen cuz ya lyrics is 'short on fire' like roaches//
Be careful cuz death approaches, ya left lying in a herse//
Leaving this earth 'toe-tagged' like playin hide n seek with a smurf//
Now tha beast has emerged, teachin this herb to plot tha blue print//
You must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent//
Here's my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with ur mind cluttered//
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure//
I leave spines ruptured, show you how i attack tracks and score fast//
Call me a weatherman when i put ur norm ass in four casts//
I spin tricks with scorn and anger, while Mortality leaves them suspense-less//
Mortality="I see whack people!!"i guess i got that sixth sense...//

peace

Mortality 08-06-03 02:47 AM

Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//
Late at night all you do is "Blare" People think you crazy but all they can do is "Look and Stare"//
I'm about to make you soar as a "Blister" See i done fucked ya mom now i'm at ya "Sister"//
Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//
Your punches are little mind as well call them "Humane" i have you in terror of death you runnin like "Saddam Husain"//
You wish you had skill you call yourself "Hypochondriac" you read my first 2 lines and you relize you wish you had a 2nd chance to "React"//
See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//
You on my computer is juss a fucked up "Megabyte" After ya done readin my verse you'll notice my shit is "Hella-tite"//
Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//

Done!

Mortality 08-06-03 02:48 AM

That's only 9 lines but oh well
it's good enough
lets get some votes.................................

DaBanga 08-06-03 02:50 AM

yo maortalit go into our batle and drop ya verse........hurry................................ ......................

MoRbId 08-06-03 03:09 AM

wow. mortality is really good. must not be a REAL newb. jus new to RB. lol... i liked these lines:


Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//

Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//

See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//

Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//


lol they made me laugh and overall i think u had the better verse.
ur really good. elevate an come try out for the Executives ! :D

Rappad 08-06-03 03:09 AM

ok nice battle man
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lets get some votes

Tonya~Montana 08-06-03 03:18 AM

hmm,,,,,,on the real....rappad came nice......betta punches..he had creativity in his disses and wordplay....nice flow...

Mortality was iight but his punches did'nt hit that hard...he had some nice oneliners..disses were a lil mediocre did'nt land with no heat...creativity was'nt there.....I can see him progression as a top newbie but just not with this rhyme here....

vote rappad...................................return Fav!

Tonya~Montana 08-06-03 03:27 AM

my bad........tha poll vote is in!!!......................................holla.. .................................................. ...........

ANTI-HERO 08-06-03 03:38 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by MoRbId
wow. mortality is really good. must not be a REAL newb. jus new to RB. lol... i liked these lines:


Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//

Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//

See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//

Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//


lol they made me laugh and overall i think u had the better verse.
ur really good. elevate an come try out for the Executives ! :D


TRUE!`

Rappad 08-06-03 03:40 AM

uppin
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DaBanga 08-06-03 03:42 AM

ya mortality had a crazy verse but rappad was a bit better with the punches...everythin else was tie.......only an honest vote....no beef......

RappinThug4life 08-06-03 03:51 AM

^^^^^FUCK THAT, I SAY MORTALITY GOT THIS SHIT.
NO HATE THOUGH RAPPAD BUT MORTALITY GOT THIS SHIT
DAMN................NICE SHIT VOTE-MORTALITY

Meks 08-06-03 04:13 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Tonya~Montana
hmm,,,,,,on the real....rappad came nice......betta punches..he had creativity in his disses and wordplay....nice flow...

Mortality was iight but his punches did'nt hit that hard...he had some nice oneliners..disses were a lil mediocre did'nt land with no heat...creativity was'nt there.....I can see him progression as a top newbie but just not with this rhyme here....

vote rappad...................................return Fav!

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Might as well took the werds outta my mouth,
i jus think rappad came harder and was more consistent with his disses and personALs so thas ma vote= Rappad

Ppl drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68848

Juvenile 08-06-03 04:21 AM

There seems to be alot of dick rydin goin on here
i swear to god... all this return the favor shit
i say mortality got this anyways
but not enough post

Audo 08-06-03 04:39 AM

pretty close battle, but I think that mortality got it cause he had good metas, punches, wordplay, good shit...

VOTE=MORTALITY

An'][']-[opoLog„ 08-06-03 04:50 AM

I realy like Rappads verse i duno y, just prefered it, beter punches and all, seems more experienced

vote-Rappad

so couldu return the favour and vote on this wit an honest vote

n read both verses, just dont vote for the "vet" cuz hes got higher stats.

peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=5

Rappad 08-06-03 12:41 PM

aight this is some close shit so read through the whole battle before you vote ppl and make sure to drop an honest vote
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ric0 08-06-03 12:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Tonya~Montana
hmm,,,,,,on the real....rappad came nice......betta punches..he had creativity in his disses and wordplay....nice flow...

Mortality was iight but his punches did'nt hit that hard...he had some nice oneliners..disses were a lil mediocre did'nt land with no heat...creativity was'nt there.....I can see him progression as a top newbie but just not with this rhyme here....

vote rappad...................................return Fav!


return the fav?

ric0 08-06-03 12:48 PM

any ways could u lot go and vote ob my 2 battles safe


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ric0 08-06-03 12:55 PM

sorry forgot to leeve the link here it iz

www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=71074

Rappad 08-06-03 02:56 PM

uppin
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MiCsYcKlE 08-06-03 02:58 PM

Vote rappad i thought his was better in all aspects of this battle

both had hot shit but pads came out harder and better


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71314

Rappad 08-06-03 03:01 PM

ok 4-4 this is really close shit next vote decides it whoever wins props to ya man
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d-mecca7 08-06-03 03:02 PM

yo mortility smashed rappad vote mortility dont need to explain rappad got merked but props to both ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


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