Shockthaworld vs IceBerg420
 

10-20 lines
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no biting
no recycling
no hate votes
U SPIT 1st

alright I'm siging in .. -- verse will be done in a couple minutes probably - since this isnt really LONG



stay posted !!!~!~!!~!!!

:: believe::
..Like "HeteroSexual-Glocks" Im Bringin "Strait-Heat"/
..Berg Like "Daydreaming-Prisoner's" Cuz Ya "CON-template-Defeat"//
..Concentrate-Or-Eat? Fuck Im "Molesting-Ya-Time" Like "Raping-Clock's/
..Optomitrically "Knockin-Out-Ya-Eye's" So Ya Can Be "Thinking-Out-Tha-Box// ~lol
::tha::
.."Linking-Ya-Shot's" Cuz The Only Way Ya "Gettin-Win's" Is Ta Be "Bitin-Line's"/...YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!
.."Fightin-Crime's" Ya Get "Pistol-Whipped-With-a-FLASH" To "EnLIGHTen-Ya-Rhymes"//
..Attack Like "Heroin" Ima "SHOOT-A-Deadly-SMACK" Leave You Looking Like Stewy with a "Fatal Injection"/....( sig)
.."Label-DISECTION" Cuz Ima "CUT-Open-Ya-BRAIN" To "Enable-INTELLECTION'S"//
::kid::
.."Stabbin-Finishers-In-Ya-MEMORY" So You Can "VISION-Fatalitie's"/...
.."Incision-VALUE's-B" Cuz Ya "Lackin-The-MORAL'S" Like "Tension-N-Familie's//
..Look At The "Calendar"..Cuz Ya "Registration-Date" Is "PAST-ME"/
..Cuz "May" Gonna Lose "8-to-28" From A "KO"...Votes Are gonna start off "ZERO~To-THREE"//....SICK!!!...his reg date...May 2003
.."Please-FORSEE" Cuz Like "DAZED-PSYCHIC's" "THOUGHT'S" Of Ya "Winnin-Is-BLURY"/
::is::
.."SPINNIN-The-Jury" Cuz Like "SHARK-Judge's" Ya In A "FINNIN-Hurry"//
.."Split-Ya-SPINE" Cuz Like "Fat-Bitches-Tumblin" Im "Bendin-Ya-BACK"/
.."Sayin-Ya-WACK" And Ya Get "JERKED-More-Than-WEBSTER's" And That "Is-A-FACT"//...
..Ya Got "TIRING-Line's" I Think I Got "NARCOLEPTIC" Just From "EnDURING-Ya-Verse"/...ZzZzZzZz......
.."BURNING-A-HEARSE" Da Only Way Ya "CIRCULATING-DEADLY-FLAMES" By "TURNING-Ya-CURSE"..... im done
:: to hott ::

^OMG has to be one of the gayest verses I've ever saw......

Announcer: Please stand by merking will commense in 20 minutes.

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Bitch U couldn't 'ShockdaWorld' even if u were the planets biggest 'Outlet'/1
U wanna spit dope lyrics, but "Rappin 4 dummies" hasn't came out yet/2 (The Book)
Bitch ya Punchlines are so 'old' that 'jesus' could recognize em/3
There all bein "cut-off" at the "head" Like I just "Circumsized" em/4
Yes I'm verbalizin this kill so the cops can't trace it/5
Your basic skills got ya lil monkey ass waisted/6
Face it, U couldn't "top" me even if I was a "bottle"/7
You couldn't "hit fast" even if u were "punchin-full-throttle"/8 (get it) (LoL)
Shock be "Ridin Fat Chicks" but swear his girls a "Model"/9 (Avi)
Even though he be 'suckin-fat-dicks' like Nipples and Baby Bottles/10
Shock stop thinkin u got skills that dont exist/11
Like the past tense of "Pee", U leavin the People "Pissed"/12
Your "dismissed" and no I aint talkin bout the MTV show/13
Ya lyrics are like tryna "hold-ya-shit", them bitches 'gotta-go'/14 (LoL) (Get it)
To let u know, ya wordplay is worse than what herb's say/15
Your words played like your virginity on ya 21st birthday/16(Aint neva gettin no pussy)
U TYPIN WIT CAPS AND "QUOTES" HOPIN PEOPLE WILL FEEL U MORE/17
These people wouldn't 'feel u' even if u were 'a million bucks' on the floor/18
Consider yourself merked, like The Hussien family/19
Ya raps didn't work, better try another stratedgy/20

Its over.......I'm callin it right now 5-0 K.O. IceBerg victorious

iceberg gets this one better flow,punches,word play

will both of u guys go drop a honest vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6389#post686389

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YEA MAN ICEBER420'A VERSE WAS NICE...BUT I DONT GET WHY UR RECORD IS WORRIBLE....CUZ THAT WAS NICE MAN..PEACE

my vote goes to Iceberg420 on this.......u took it very easily....in all areas(flow, vocab, punches, meta's, n multi's)



MY VOTE=ICEBERG420



peace

appreciate ya'll votes even though they dont count. But sill its good to see that people recognize when someone's gotta new asshole ripped in em. LoL

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Yeaz Iceberg takes dis shit , Shock da world came with a hard verse , lots of wordplay and multi's , but I think Ice was more personal , and his shit was tight all around. .... It was close , but Ice came correct and did the better MERKING ....... No beef !!!

Crazye

iceberge took it wit punches props 2 both tho im out holla

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Yeah...

I'm a little disturbed by Shock's verse...

I'm gonna call it an amazing display of metas...

Were they all good and effective.

No.

Try concentrating on some directness with your punches.

Wordplay is great, metas, too...

We all need that.

But like everything in the universe...

Ya gotta use balance.

Iceberg did just that and took the match.

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ice berg took this harder punches wordplay..good verse an batle..vote iceberg..came pretty strong on it....can u hit this up......anyone..been madly slepted on ..pc

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71510

^^^ya this now...late

^4got to poll vote

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ok ice won this soooo easy....good job on both verses...better punches wordplay and m,ulties...you name it....and can you guys hit up my battles with lyrical disaster and xce...something....please....thanks