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Axiom 08-07-03 12:07 AM

~HoTTie~ vs. Ambiguous
 
This bully accepted my BITCH slap... lol, jk.

10 lines MAX.

You spit first, ima hit this up tomorrow.

You know the rest of the rules.

~HoTTie~ 08-07-03 12:09 AM

lol i'm no bully..i'ma go ahead and write..but spit tomorrow cuz i don't want this thread full of freeposting

checkin in by the way

~HoTTie~ 08-07-03 09:50 AM

i'ma go ahead and spit cuz i'ma be gone all day today. Good luck Ambiguous If you kids don't get the wordplay or vocab don't vote. Grab a dictionary if you have to

Killer Opener[/B[
Hottie’s skill is massive while this dorks minimal, ambiguous and his chances of winnin leaves him more quizzical but the only time ambiguous gettin to play is if he gets pissed on like cups in sports physicals//

[B]Ya merking

This kid spits weird when my Wind Decks(Windex) i'll leave ya Wits Cleared i found a link to ya Illness its Click Here

My rhymes in tact, hottie spits the facts, Cuz posting this against you only time im near wack
ur nothing on my list see how i bust ya back, U only make hits when u punch a track//

ambiguous must be shoppin for house openings cuz he gettin shown the door spit so deep i rose the floor the max limit is: 5 Barz! Fuck that hottie KO-u-in-4//

Ya Finished
My hooks land and inspire fans, u couldn’t even deliver hot punches wit fire in hand ur lost like a black guy in the klu klux klan, New to rb? hottie’ll leave ya on a early retirement-plan//

~HoTTie~ 08-07-03 09:53 AM

my bolding was fucked up on the last one and it wouldn't let me edit so here is my verse again


Killer Opener
Hottie’s skill is massive while this dorks minimal, ambiguous and his chances of winnin leaves him more quizzical but the only time ambiguous gettin to play is if he gets pissed on like cups in sports physicals//

[B]Ya merking
This kid spits weird when my Wind Decks(Windex) i'll leave ya Wits Cleared i found a link to ya Illness its Click Here

My rhymes in tact, hottie spits the facts, Cuz posting this against you only time im near wack
ur nothing on my list see how i bust ya back, U only make hits when u punch a track//

ambiguous must be shoppin for house openings cuz he gettin shown the door spit so deep i rose the floor the max limit is: 5 Barz! Fuck that hottie KO-u-in-4//

Ya Finished
My hooks land and inspire fans, u couldn’t even deliver hot punches wit fire in hand ur lost like a black guy in the klu klux klan, New to rb? hottie’ll leave ya on a early retirement-plan//


no beef ambiguous..me and u coo

~HoTTie~ 08-07-03 10:00 AM

fuck the boldin i'll never get it back..i went over by 1 line so u can match it or jus go to 10 lines ..either way good luck

Axiom 08-07-03 05:05 PM

Aite... i only did 9... but they sorta long... so it'll even out.

Her real name is sha.

Next to the plate, number seven… sha, hottie must be good with the stick… ‘cuz she always has her eyes on the balls//

Accepted my call out… ‘cuz she’s a bitch that needs to be slapped, she must have a keg for an ass… ‘cuz it’s quick to be tapped//

Watch me work as i merk, i'll make hottie’s head turn faster then rims that spin, how can i diss her when… she likes to take it on the chin//

Illest & Hottest Fem… come on, why you gotta spread lies, with your looks… you scare off even the most desperate of guys//

Sha needs to box cuz she’s good at handin’ out blows, i can guarantee you that… she’s missin’ more then her marbles//(virginity)

Hottie’s got loose lips… and i’m not talkin’ bout her mouth, you don’t wanna “fuck” with her… cuz she’s dirtier then the south//

I’ll drop this hoe quicker then gardeners with parkinson’s disease, she says she’s hot… but her thighs are filled with cottage cheese//

Makin’ this quick… ‘cuz i know you need to take a load off your chest, i requested the best, but sha answered… so i had to settle for the rest//

She’s RB’s self-proclaimed-pimpette… need i say more? i could call her a whore… but it’s uncalled for, her orifices i still need to explore//

LOL... i had fun with this, let's get some votes.

J~Dubya 08-07-03 05:17 PM

hottie better disses and punches but i cant vote so good luck to ya both...........peace and love Holla

Born To Kill 08-07-03 05:20 PM

Hottie's opener was just that...

Fuckin killer...

I wish I could say the same about the rest of her verse, but I can't.

The second bar left me like, what? (I got the link joke, but still)

Third bar had a kinda played line about "being next to me"...seen that alot. (did like the "punch track" line though)...

Third bar, tight, nice closer to that.

Finisher was tight, and hit hard, but didn't leave me wowed or anything.

Amby...

I thought he worked the personals well.

Opener ok...
"Tapped line" pretty good, funny.
"Chin" line ok, concept kinda played
"Illest Fem" line was nice, personal, and funny.
"Marbles" line, kinda weak, hardly anyone's a virgin, I'd imagine.
"South" line, ok...kinda predictable.
"Cottage cheese" line really nice, double diss, and made me laugh.
"Best/rest" eh...stretchin with this one.
Closer...pretty good, kinda insinuates that since ya know her name ya might be on track ta get laid...good personal...but at the same time, why'd ya wanna fuck someone as nasty as ya described in ya rhyme?

Gonna vote for Amby...
Made me laugh more.
Had better personals.
Good solid punches with humor.

Peace

Holla back...
Hit me up!

An'][']-[opoLog¥ 08-07-03 05:22 PM

Yea I agree wit Born to KILL

Amby had funnier hits, it ammused me lol

vote-Amby

hot battle ppl

can ya'll return the favour and vote this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71388

Axiom 08-07-03 05:47 PM

2-0, thanks for the votes, i can't vote though, sorry bout that, let's get some more votes.
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SIC~WIT IT 08-07-03 06:04 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
Hottie's opener was just that...

Fuckin killer...

I wish I could say the same about the rest of her verse, but I can't.

The second bar left me like, what? (I got the link joke, but still)

Third bar had a kinda played line about "being next to me"...seen that alot. (did like the "punch track" line though)...

Third bar, tight, nice closer to that.

Finisher was tight, and hit hard, but didn't leave me wowed or anything.

Amby...

I thought he worked the personals well.

Opener ok...
"Tapped line" pretty good, funny.
"Chin" line ok, concept kinda played
"Illest Fem" line was nice, personal, and funny.
"Marbles" line, kinda weak, hardly anyone's a virgin, I'd imagine.
"South" line, ok...kinda predictable.
"Cottage cheese" line really nice, double diss, and made me laugh.
"Best/rest" eh...stretchin with this one.
Closer...pretty good, kinda insinuates that since ya know her name ya might be on track ta get laid...good personal...but at the same time, why'd ya wanna fuck someone as nasty as ya described in ya rhyme?

Gonna vote for Amby...
Made me laugh more.
Had better personals.
Good solid punches with humor.

Peace

Holla back...
Hit me up!


^born to kill...explained this perfectly..even tho aint feelin that fag..he took this battle..good drop kid....
vote ambigous..

GridLockDaFelon 08-07-03 06:09 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
[B]Hottie's opener was just that...

Fuckin killer...

I wish I could say the same about the rest of her verse, but I can't.

The second bar left me like, what? (I got the link joke, but still)

Third bar had a kinda played line about "being next to me"...seen that alot. (did like the "punch track" line though)...

Third bar, tight, nice closer to that.

Finisher was tight, and hit hard, but didn't leave me wowed or anything.

Amby...

I thought he worked the personals well.

Opener ok...
"Tapped line" pretty good, funny.
"Chin" line ok, concept kinda played
"Illest Fem" line was nice, personal, and funny.
"Marbles" line, kinda weak, hardly anyone's a virgin, I'd imagine.
"South" line, ok...kinda predictable.
"Cottage cheese" line really nice, double diss, and made me laugh.
"Best/rest" eh...stretchin with this one.
Closer...pretty good, kinda insinuates that since ya know her name ya might be on track ta get laid...good personal...but at the same time, why'd ya wanna fuck someone as nasty as ya described in ya rhyme?

Gonna vote for Amby...
Made me laugh more.
Had better personals.
Good solid punches with humor.

Peace




Born to Kill summed it up perfectly.........my vote as well goes to Amby.....


peace out....

Axiom 08-07-03 06:09 PM

^Wow, i'm suprised, i was gonna ban him from voting cuz i thought he would hit me with a hate vote, 3-0
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Axiom 08-07-03 06:41 PM

UP(1) we go.
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Axiom 08-07-03 07:14 PM

UP(2) we go.
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A2Z 08-07-03 07:36 PM

uppin for my boy amby.............................................. ..........................................

MiCsYcKlE 08-07-03 07:36 PM

HA HA thtas funny i usedsomthing similar to the windex line the other day
My Line
ya' LUNGS composed of Plexi-Glass..when Syn "sprayz"..ya' Wind'z-Decked{Windex}///

Hottie had some good shit
But i felt ambig came real hard and wanted to win this one

Ricochet. 08-07-03 07:45 PM

LOL battle was hilarious
1st of hotties verse was str8 up funny... she tryed 2 spit as jokes.... but yo no i wasnt stupid enuf 2 clik dat link lol!

and Ambig.. you shit was kinda funny too but damn how many times can you diss a girls sex... sexuality etc... im begin 2 get curious about you!... nex time u battle a femcee.. dont concentr8 on te fact that its a girl.. you prob not used 2 girls i kno.. but it makes it played!!

ok br8 down so im not accused of dick/clit rydin lol~

Flow - Hottie but nuthin special
Personals - Ambig More Hard Hittin Even tho Hottie Was Funnier
Punches - Hottie str8 up
Metas - Ambig nothin special tho
Wordplay - Hottie

SHIT thats a tie.... ummm.....errrr ...ummm U MEAN I DID THAT BIG ASS EXPLANATION 4 NOTHIN... 4 A TIE!!!!

fuck you alll!!!.. las time i try and do a good vote

assholes

Ricochet. 08-07-03 07:47 PM

^^Meant to add

Complexity - Ambig

sorry.. freepostin?? STFU im uppin the shit 4 u!

*Soldier... who u shoutin at?*

Axiom 08-07-03 07:54 PM

^LOL... you're right bout me not bein' used to girls... to battlin them! i had fun with this so yea, can i get that final vote
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murderous_method 08-07-03 08:01 PM

ambiguous got real fuckin personal...i guess thats a good thing. but i was feelin hotties flow a little more. rhymes were better. ambiguous kinda got me confused. had a line bout somethin, then he'd talk bout somethin else, then go back to what he was talkin bout before. really confusing. but hottie, i liked ur verse. it was hot. so you got my vote girl.

MyNd. FuLL 08-07-03 08:02 PM

amby got this with better flow and personals that were pretty funny,hottie got skillz though she came wit some heat, those first couple of bars were pretty tight
wordplay=hottie
personals=amby
flow=amby
complexity=amby
vote=amby but it was pretty close
good battle yall


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