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WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:04 PM

audo vs makeng know centz
 
no line limit when you check in i wiill have 20minutes the same for you.... we post when we both ready
any vote counts
this is for fun.
lets go

Audo 08-07-03 08:07 PM

yup...check in...spit aight...have fun...

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:10 PM

start now

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:21 PM

are you ready

Audo 08-07-03 08:26 PM

who spits first??? or do with just both have 20 mins???

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:29 PM

we both had we drop at the same time are you ready or need some times

Audo 08-07-03 08:31 PM

oh ready, i'll just do a 20 line keystyle...good luck

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:33 PM

so do i post now then?

Audo 08-07-03 08:41 PM

okay...lemme do this...

I spit to break limbs, and twist the oppositions minds/
you ain't no emcee, you speaking silent like mimes/
I'm a lyrical sniper, scope you out from a remote distance/
and ain't nobody at the scene of the crime, theres no witness/
cause I keeping morgues open 24 hours daily/
I give them business, thats 24 bodies daily/
and don't worry, cause the death I deal will be painless/
you must be losin your mind, cause you winning is brainless/
I burn you 10 degrees, sick acid in every direction/
you could be hard even if you had an erection/
you ain't got no street cred, the pavement laughs at yo ass/
the streets is talking nigga, they telling you to watch you back/
cause I'll clap you out more than American Idol audiences/
I see wack emcees, like it was my sixth sense/
I'll rip out your spine, so your punches can't connect/
they still wouldn't get through even if you dialed 1-800-COLLECT/
I got connects, I'm the neighborhood lyrical pushaman/
I dispense dope lines, cause its what I live for man/
cause you sniff dope lines, you never spit dope rhymes/
I musthave stole your clock, cause you lost this time/

okay...go...

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:45 PM

Picture me…loosing to AUDO cause I have to see it-to believe it-
Ths kid is anemic-so if I force feed him this beaf he couldn’t eat it-
Im strategic-when I leave this quadraplegic-parapalegic- id wont dick ride you so when I say “FUCK YOU” I heteroly mean it-
Im o-3 son I can concieve it-but you 17-18 meaning and your more than 50 percent garbage and 50/100 believe it-you a pussy so I’ll dick you in this battle and leave you with a cli~tor~I cleavage-
Dawg im bound nby honor you only bound t this by handcuffs- no wonder you say you TEN DEGREES cause your rhymes aint hot enough-
I spit the non fiction-you say you hot and can flow~ but don’t though~ so you basically a contradiction-definition-
you ass back~wards~ your words- are a bluff- you a fag that brush-
then floss in anal lube-rapping with an attitude-praying your mouth get’s stuffed-
to survive like a prostitute-
Nobody will take you serious cause we see your fasaud~ is a fraud-you so far- from hard-
You whole life is as animated as your avatar-
This is for fun but it’s still a battle my first win-comes from beating one of my own friends-im feeling like god battling satan- after your fail and your career fell-I’ll tell you to go to hell-
Place on a t-shirt fuck it buy a vowel and make it an AUD~I~O so you can hear it and if you don’t feel it put it in brail- my rhymes stay off the scale-
Like most of your ex lovers-the type of bitches that recycle Ziploc bags for they snacks and rubbers-
Its odd cause if I win and mentally I already lost it- then you can say my rhymes are insainly STRAIT but that’s your dick riding way to come out the closet-
Basically poetically im just 2 advanced dude-advanced enough to eliminate you 2-
2-2= rapbattles is my home there is 0 room for you-
20mins is up what is the delay im waiting to shit on you through my prostate-
put your name in the middle of my line now like your post count either way you get 8-
{808}
YOU KILLEN ME… BUT METAPHORICALLY ONLY-respect you mutually-out of that… ill give your area code a shout out but only at your ulogy-

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:48 PM

damnit it screwed how my bars were supposed to be designed godamn microsoft word!!!!!!lol oh well my fan club of haters should be here soon good spit twin.

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 08:50 PM

and my fucking 808 line is supposed to say loacation not post count i cant edit it

Audo 08-07-03 09:01 PM

yo Wordperfect, check your PM box....................

Dj kRuNK 08-07-03 09:10 PM

Let me break it down........

Punches-w.p.
flow-audo
diss-w.p.
complex-w.p.
overall-w.p.

vote=word~play

-no beef-audo

Dj kRuNK 08-07-03 09:11 PM

There isn't a fuckin poll

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WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 09:19 PM

i know we did this with no beaf so no poll was needed it was a test to me

Destruction 08-07-03 09:40 PM

Word Perfect you verse was thouroghly good...I like the way u use vocabulary that i have never seen in a battle before
and your wordplay was also excellecnt...One thing i didnt like was the structrure becuase if u had any multis in there or not i couldnt see them...But overall good flo....
audos verse had good structure and flo but his punches werent hittin hard enough...He to should work on addin in some multis..overall this was a good battle...but my vote goes down to audo his punches were not that good but good flow sturcture and wordplay to me and that wins the battle most of the time...
holla atcha boi
holla atcha boi

WORD~PERFECT 08-07-03 09:44 PM

i disagree punches win battle in live battles structure hold none and if you read every line i used was personal punches and also mulit's but i respect your vote none the less thnx

Audo 08-07-03 10:06 PM

WORD~PERFECT is right ya now...but you actually need both...sometimes it is the opinion of the voter...some can't read bars with no flow...but I also think that punches are more important than flow...

WORD~PERFECT 08-08-03 12:17 AM

UPPIN

WORD~PERFECT 08-08-03 01:38 PM

UPPIN

WORD~PERFECT 08-08-03 03:23 PM

up

Ðïªßø£îç·§l‹8ë® 08-08-03 04:39 PM

i say that word perfect took it...ths strait punch about his dick and the closet was well though of.....audo came though with some nice flow.....but like destruction said i think u should work on multi's catch you cats l8erhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=71842

please vote on this battle we only have one vote thanx .

WORD~PERFECT 08-10-03 04:24 PM

UPPIN

WORD~PERFECT 08-10-03 07:52 PM

UPPIN

WORD~PERFECT 08-12-03 08:00 PM

2-1


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