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Castle00 vs ~YOUNG P~
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No h8/DR/Crew votes I'll drop first No feeding No biting No Recycling no bitching POLL VOTE then drop your link, i dun want no DR shit happenin', if you say return favor or anything, you will be repported.... Good luck homie... Pce |
checkin in young boul.....
should be a good one...... spit when ya ready...... .................................................. ......................... |
Check it... 1,2...
Look.. I highlight this bitches "negatives", like retarded kids attemptin' maths problems// I'm a kick this kid off a cliff, while his spittin jus so people think his lyrics can off-end// This kat is fake, cause its obvious he mustn't be able to REAL-eyes// That i see right through you, like a lawyer when he constantly lies// Thought it was blood stains, but jus red mascara runnin' down his cheeks as he cries// Tyin' to defeat me son, is more "impossible" than playin hide 'n' seek with the lord// You can call me a carpneterthe way i permanently lay down cats when im board[/b](bored)// Gettin' Serious I slash cats like pussies getin shaven, punches leave this kat in fits, like he was on Xtacy while ravin'// I'll make your "emotions" cave-in, "Sorry Doc but looks like we aint "savin" this boi from the HERB removal operation// I know you wanna be hard, but face it your "not"cause your skills like someones dick with syphylis, their beggining to "rot"// Your front is starting to "frey"like skin when its "shot", cause you gettin found out worse than when you slipped your coin in your bruthas slot// ^ Not feelin' that lacked flow, not as good as usual :(..... Spit now dawg.... Pce |
Hurry up dawg, you checked in then went off-line, better not be pre-writtin' ya shit man...
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chill i aint pre-writing.... i went ta bed...i live in philly and it wuz like 4...... damn....aight should be spittin soon..............................
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i'll vote on this when it's done..
if yall wanna vote on ma verse wid audo it would b greatly appreciated... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
Yo....ready..... ayo, ayo
Thinkin ya "super", "man", ya betta "jet-son", you and ya crew tryna be "heroes"// Like a "reckin-ball" i'll kill ya "castle" and leave ya wit "zeros"// 00 My punches "scarrin" you, and i know dis battle will "leave-a-mark"// You could high-"light" ya whole verse but i'd leave ya in da "dark"// Da flow is "explosive", "repulsive" cuz i'll beat u till ur domes corroded// Check da notion, ur words couldn't "kill" me even if it was "murder" who wrote it// If ya eva had "beef" wit me dis verse should "seal-da-meat"// Cuz ya "flow" and "punches" are "dis-crete"// Sound like a "retarted-paraplegic" tryna to da da "grindin’-beat"// Like "watered-down-margarita" ya verse is "weak", "punches" leaving no "im-pact"// Afta dis "ballistic-beating" dont cry ta ya mom, check if ya "limbs" are still “in-tact”// "In-fact", my "fiction" is "twisted-and-cracked", derre’s no "lettin-up"// SMACK!, Quickly "de-feet" you so ya "cant-stand" "gettin-up"// "Think-of-dat"... no more time wasted on dis "elementary" kid talkin "A-fo-apple" rap// My "thinking-process" is "sureal" and "ineffable", somethin u wont find on a "snapple-cap"// |
sorry i took a lil longa den expected wit da verse but i wuz gettin ready fo an oldhead party..... lol..... nice drop castle.... letz get sum votes..........
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damn castle.i was expectin u to come way harder than that..were u havin an off nite? and wrote that...its all good tho.....u came iight but jus not good enough..for u this was my favorite part
This kat is fake, cause its obvious he mustn't be able to REAL-eyes// That i see right through you, like a lawyer when he constantly lies// Thought it was blood stains, but jus red mascara runnin' down his cheeks as he cries// Tyin' to defeat me son, is more "impossible" than playin hide 'n' seek with the lord// You can call me a carpneterthe way i permanently lay down cats when im board[/b](bored)// dope ^^ but my vote goes to young p..he stayed consistent wit his punches..wordplay was on point..but only thing wrong is that ur structure is like a newbie...castle had the better structure..cats see it and expect his drop to be hot cuz of how its set up jus work on that vote - young p |
Aight yo Hottie.... i'll werk on dat.... thanx fo da vote.....but wheres all da otha votes..... cum on ya'll ...... where ya at???
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Yea thnx hottie, yea i dunno, i've just been really busy lately, plus couple of fmaily issues, but my verse was alot weaker than usual i felt...
Fuck It lets get some more votes in... Pce |
dam cant vote on this me and young n the same crew
tight battle overall but cant vote this one sorry guys yo castle00 can u hit this up for me though thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71659 |
Uppin'^^^^^^^
^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^ Honest votes guyz n we'll chekc them linkz out Pce |
uppin.....
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~Young P~
~MAN, MYTH, & LEGEND~ Posts: 588 Joined: Jun 2003 From: Kenzo, Philly Status: Online Battle Record: 19-4 uppin..... ~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~~<^>~ __________________ ~YOUNG P~ Man, myth, and legend... Uppin' Get some votes in people CUMON!!! need votes Pce |
explain your votes people, who ahd flow who had
punches not he tok it over all or he had the beta verse or he took it easy, good explained votes people... PCE |
yOo i'm gonna have to say over all young p took this wit betta flow and wordplay... that def, wasn't young's best it was kinda original... but props to both of yah'z good battle... and young when the fuck are u gonna battle me ... don't be scared ..... p m me or somethin ...
vote:young p |
Breakdown of my vote:
Vocab=Young P Flow=Young P(some sick lines man......keep it up......really felt it...an transition from line to line was also wicked) Punches/Disses=Young P(u hit way harder then castle....but castle u had some nice punches too....i just liked Young P's punches alot more) Meta's=Young P(again some sick comparisons......keep ya style like that man its a really nice format) Multi's=Young P(it was close but how Young P's multi's and meta's flowin together so smoothly thats what mad me choose him) Variation in rhymes=Young P(definitely showed complexity along with matching up tha syllables in tha words that rhymed....real nice) my vote=Young P props to u both however.......it was a nice battle.....but i think castle u need to come out harder then u did in some areas but still it was nice... and can u peep these battles of mine please and poll vote too.... MY BATTLE AGAINST DASHOWSTOPPA2: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71983 MY BATTLE AGAINST EMCEE ABILITIES: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71992 peace |
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uppin.... no dickridin fatal lyrics........
aight yo..... cum on................................................ ......vote........................................ ..................... |
uppin niggaz............................................ ...where iz ya'll at................................................ .................................................. ..............
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tite, tite, battle...........
flows-young multis-young punches-young werdplay-young young had dis, castle sucked hell in dis battle, respect and props 2 ya young vote-young |
this want all that great of a battle but here's the break down
Flow=Young~P Wordplay=Castle Punches=Young~p vote=Young P |
if i could vote, i'd go for Young - P..............he was Wayy better
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