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Tha Remix Vs Zeesh
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10 lines max No d/r votes No Crew votes No hate votes You spit first |
where u at dogg?............................................. ........................................
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sorry....i wasn't online...didn't see your reply either.....i'll spit now............................................... ......................................
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like a razor blades i scrape your legs straight from the waist and then my lazor rays make you say "DAMN, ZEESH GOT MAJOR WAYS, of taking the stage and making it his"/ i rule this biz, my fade aways make you hate and make you take your lame mistakes to the trash fast as i blaze with rage/ i can write a page, go on for days, i pave the way for emcees to play, i save the day from you gravely gayish swayed shit as dense as hey/ i make you pray, still i am your fav, i'm brave and stay on top of this game/ your a shame, lame, strange, de-arranged, pain-inflicted man (Main), un-tamed fame seeking, brain wreeking ensane little fan (fain)/ the thangs you say and games you play make you stay and try to say comebacks thatll maybe save your ass from my razor blades/ but make the way cuz not today, i'll rape you onstage through my mic and the mix/ i know your not liking this diss cuz it's making you pissed but shit's spit in this battle, so go back to your mix/ i'll never throw a fist but i will throw a classic hit that'll rip charts and hit hard through your shit/ this is my last line, i'm out of time, at the limit, my lines will win it, i don't need a finish, cuz you write dim shit, so dimwit come hit this without take 45 minutes to write your ten lines
yall know he can't come close |
don't take 5 hours to write yours........hurry up.......no rhyming dictionaries either.....spit hard but spit true...............UPPIN FOR VOTES
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where you at "Tha Remix"?................................................. .................................................. ............
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i wanna vote on this wheres your verse dawg.............................................. ..................
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Where's "tha remix" at??? spending 5 hours on a battle rap, i ain't havin that so hit me back, not wit shit that's wack.............................................. ..................................................
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where you at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
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where u at
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oh shit dogg my fuckin' bad i forgot bout this.......i been gone all day i'll spit asap! sorry bout this dogg!............................
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...:::HOT ASS OPENING:::...
Slappin' this faggot zeesh of disasta while his dickriders askin' dogg can i just vote honestly this time?// I'm sure u seen me in all those sigs in front lines under "People who've merked me ta tha point that i cried"// Hyperactive waves blazin' thru this like sun-rayz i know u curved so i'ma merk ya straight// (curved as in not straight as in gay) I'ma spit venom into you like a snake then you'll die in fright how many hours will it take?// My lyrical flows will infect you so bad you rushed to tha "ER" worse than influenza// My razor "tongue" is so "fresh" as if i "swallowed" "winterfresh gum" it will make tha out-come her-en-DUS// (herendous) ...::::ILL EXPLOSION::::... Lyrical passion' passin' thru your stomach of vile contractions i'm concluding your extraction// Maximum rashes from poisonous gases flowing thru your intestines burnin' your ashes// Lashin' and slashin' thru this sad-kid rapidly in fact this rap is gonna leave u sayin' what happened// Graspin' for a grip and gaspin' from tha lyrical chemical re-action ya easy to tear like plastic wrappin'// |
Damn
Tha Remix that shit was hard as hell Zeesh ya shit was aight but Tha Remix killed yo ass sorry man vote-ThaRemix |
it took him like 5 years to come up wit that.....or should i say, 5 years to type his prewritten lyrics with fill-ins.......
his rhymes are off......can't stay on one subject but switch from line to line......and his lines don't make sense..... vote for the worthy emcee |
damn zeesh had the flow but remix had a kinda intelectual edge i heard enough flowin
vote=the remix but the ither guy wasnt bad at all |
read all of mine with attention and you'll get what i mean
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lmao^ i guess they took your advice when u said "vote for the worthy emcee" lmao u killed yourself when u said that........oh and my shit ain't prewritten dogg :-D
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vote me on this one............................................... .......................
i deserve it................................................ .................................... |
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STFU! u dont deserve shit you is wack god damn u can't tell people to vote for u that's D/R we are voting for the better verse which on this battle was THA REMIX's |
THANK YOU MORTALITY ^^^^^^^........................................... ...................................
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dude.......................seriously read the verses.......even if i said i deserve it, there is an underlying purpose.........clearly i had the better verse, and according to you, "the better verse wins".........chill with the quills
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Quit bein sorry for yourself you can't say who had the better verse the voters do and um... u can't vote and dont talk shit yo Zeesh....Suck-A-Me-Ballz |
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^agreed Vote=remix nice battle though keep elevatin zeesh we all start out like that |
thank you dogg ^................................................. ..............................................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72277
yo sorry for freepostin but can you hit this up with an honest vote? thanx ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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uppin' for votes, read my quotes, i choked his throat in the verse i wrote
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pretty close battle, I think that zeesh came hard, but so did tha remix...the remix edged him out in vocab, wordplay, and structure...close battle...very close...
VOTE=THA REMIX |
This battle was decent first zeesh your shit is in prapagraph form people around here hate that put in seperate lines much easier to read... You had some tight rhymes and your flow was wicked good to the old time i had to scroll back and forth that that kinda sucks and off set the tone,....
The remix - you had better punches, vocab and better flow overall you always come hard with shit... i want to battle you sometime man you would give me a good match... overall- remix gets my vote his sick was easy to read and flow with and his pucnhes would knock mike tyson out lol jk.... vote- the remix |
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