J~Dubya Vs. Mezzoforte
 

12 Lines - 6 Bars Max!...
No Beef/Crew/Un-Explained Votes!...
No Biting/Feeding Allowed!...
Drop Time: 9:30PM EST!...
JDub Drops First...

Goodluck And May The Best Verse Win...

yep 4 sho i gotta run down to da street i'll spit in a hour..............1
yo if u wanna spit go head if u wanna wait dats coo 2

Ok, I'll Drop Now... Did It Up Quick-Fast.

J Ya Gonna Get Mangled, Watch As How He Is Left With More Dead Sides Than An Isocele's Triangle...
I Advise Not To Tangle, I'm Morbid So Ya Skin Dangles And Ya Seem To Be As Straight As An Obtuse Angle...
How You Going To Stop This, When I'll Infest Ya By Mearly Stating The Words Ignorance Is Bliss...
Mezzo A Chilled Remiss Will Leave You Abyssed And Ya Flow Is Nothing Like A "Weed-Head" Thats Pot-Less...
Cryptic With Words So Apocalyptic It Enables Me To Rip Shit, Kick It Prolific, Narrowing It Down To Scientific...
Flowing Cataclysmic, More Advanced Then That Of Metaphysics, Even If My Verse Was Your Middle Finger Ya Couldnt Flip-It...
Listen You Better Depart Before Your Skeletal Structure Recieves Incisions Till Eventualy Its Sharply Torn Apart...
I'll Tear The Cards, This Fag Is Soft With His Art Cause J Is Catching-Feelings Like I Tossed-Him-His-Heart!...
Call The Cops, I'm Spitting In "Digital Genesis", Its All Over For J, "Oh Gawd", Leave This Man Nailed...
Watch J Bail As The Hammers Tell The Tail, But Fate As It Be, In This Scripture God Doesnt Previal...(Read That Bar Twice)
I'll Graphic Pains, With The Remains Of J's Vitality Vein's So Call Me "Fire" As It's "Of" Me You "Reign"...(Reign Of Fire)
J Is Relativly Thin With Monotone-Tain's, Just Stick With The No Show Cause Your Missing In This Bout Like The "L" In Reframe...

oo nice drop but remember, we gotta see what he can do, haha may the best verse win btw check it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=karat

"Karat"

Where You At Son?... It's Way Past The Dead-Line, But I'm Not Taking A No-Show, So Hurry Up And Spit Your Shit.

yo i been bizzy but i'm bout to post in a few holla .................................................. .....

Aight, Dont Forget About This Shit Man... I'm Kinda Disappointed Atm... :\ ........................................

built ya ego on a creakin foundation...what a try ya loser, ya battle cry's get a run through mud till ya in-trenched like columbine shooters//1
go spit a verse, to boost ya career but ya plane out of fuels this is a frontlines not a charity fo a mis-spelled molecules//2
now really junior if they served losses in cups you'd prolly sip it soft, I counted his win on my middle finger an then kinda flipped-it-off//3
I'm rip u nigga cuz i make freestylin business, Wit a flow so hot Jehova Couldn't witness//4
The Pain I Enflict Is Un-Escapeable Just Give Up Now Before I Use Voo-Doo//5
Your Similar To A Virgin Screamin Rape Because Your Screwed//6
I'm Lyrically intelligent Consider My Rhymes Hell Sent
Escapin From This Battle Would Be Saving Ya Self Like Catholic's Preparing For Lent//7
Stay Focus'ed as i give tha ingredients for Lyrical Intelligence ya rhymes irrelevant i'ma rip ya verse leavin RB tha evidence//8
Get left with holes worse than Craig Macks acne, then slice your ear drums with swords to leave you more 'Def' than Jermaine Dupri//9
Leave This Kid Brunt With no antibiotics, Wit Punchs That Stay Charged Liked plugged electronics//10
He Spitting Weak Ebonics While Dylec Flow Is Slow Like Dudes Spittin Throw hooked on phonics//11
After This Got Less Signs Of Life Than Posters That Praise abortion bids,Its Not Apparent Your Wack Because Ya Skill Level Has Never Bein Raised Like orphan kids//12

uppin 4 votes............................................. .............................................

i think j~dubya got dis one

nice metas and punches

vote=j-dubya

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Well You Missed The Deadline, Fed Off My Verse, 2 Minutes After You Drop You Have An Un-Explained Vote For You... Riiiiggghhhhtttttt

Vote jay dubya he had some dope shit
GOOD PUNCHES AND DESCENT METAS

Mezzo you had some good stuff but wasnt feelin the first few lines

Hit up my battles there under the name synikill

Synikill vs spitacular and
synikill vs prince ocalot

HE DID FEED

I DIDNT CHECK THAT AT FIRS BUT YEAH

THATS RETARDED
I HATE FEEDERS
I WISH I COULD CHANGE THE VOTE NOw

It's Even In The Rules... This Is B/S...


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here its is u said i still can spit so whatchu talkin bout and tha dead fo every battle is 24 hours and that set by mods and how did i fed off u?????

And Talk About Played Punch-Lines.... Wow, Maybe I Should Do Some Re-Search Of Who I'm Going To Battle, J-Dub Did Ya Even Write Those Lines, Cause I Know I Have Read Atleast 3/4's Of Those Before, Or Atleast The Exact Concept.

My Verse:
Flowing Cataclysmic, More Advanced Then That Of Metaphysics, Even If My Verse Was Your Middle Finger Ya Couldnt Flip-It...

Your Verse:
now really junior if they served losses in cups you'd prolly sip it soft, I counted his win on my middle finger an then kinda flipped-it-off//3

Yeah but mezzo Isosoles and obtuse

a weed head pot less all those things are wack

you sound like ya tryin to be CANIBUS with the big words you tossin around

i would still change my vote but your not that good

it said i got his vote fo metas and punches

Mic, Do You Know The Wordplay That Holds? Because I Dont Put Everything In Parenthisis Or Explain It Doesnt Mean It Isnt Wordplay, And So What If Im Educated? Is It A Bad Move To Use An Extensive Vocab?...

Personally I don think theres anything wrong wit feed, I always allow it in my battles....Anyway J dub got this wit better Punches and Metas, Nice verse from both of U though........

J Dub hit my battle up against Kracka

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72680

thats not feedin i can say middle finger in my flow cause i'm no commin off of urs............................................... ...................

Woah... The Voting Up In This Piece Of B/S. Is Anyone Reading The Verses, Or Atleast Trying To Understand It? Judb, You Ended With The Exact Same Words As My Line, You Countered My Line, That Is Feeding, If You Cant See That Your Blind!

MEZZO
i am educated to but your shit would get laughed it infront of a crowd

you werent funny
your shit was elementary even with BIG words

SO i dont know what else to say

Why Dont You Break Down Exactly What Was Elementary About My Verse, This Isnt Ifnront Of A Crowd, This Isnt Meant To Be Written To Rap Too. This Is A TEXT Battle... Your Supposed To Get As Creative As Possible... And Mine Was A Tad More Creative Than The Played Punches J Was Using. And You Cant Even Deny You Havent Seen Half Of Those Used Somewhere Else...

Yeah It aint all about who got the biggest words and most Vocab, U gotta Understand, U tryna Appeal to a crowd of people......Some muh Fuckas prolly didnt even understand half the shit U said.............I did, I'm educated enough to know what U said word for word......And as for feedin, I don't know if U've been to real battles but real MC's feed off verses all the time.........Shit thats just one of the disadvantages from goin first..
U should see my verses my vocab isnt as complex as yours but I bet My punches hit harder......Just check out that Quote in my sig from my battle wit CoNsTant in the Lethal Lyricists League.....His Record 14-44 and look how I ripped on em wit out usin them big ass words.

yeah i have

BUT I STILL THIN YOUR SHIT IS WACK


J Ya Gonna Get Mangled, Watch As How He Is Left With More Dead Sides Than An Isocele's Triangle...

I thought that was wack

I Advise Not To Tangle, I'm Morbid So Ya Skin Dangles And Ya Seem To Be As Straight As An Obtuse Angle...

that was a lil better

How You Going To Stop This, When I'll Infest Ya By Mearly Stating The Words Ignorance Is Bliss...

Back to the wack again

Mezzo A Chilled Remiss Will Leave You Abyssed And Ya Flow Is Nothing Like A "Weed-Head" Thats Pot-Less...

that was absolute garbage

Cryptic With Words So Apocalyptic It Enables Me To Rip Shit, Kick It Prolific, Narrowing It Down To Scientific...

That line was ok

Flowing Cataclysmic, More Advanced Then That Of Metaphysics, Even If My Verse Was Your Middle Finger Ya Couldnt Flip-It...

That was weak to many fillers

Listen You Better Depart Before Your Skeletal Structure Recieves Incisions Till Eventualy Its Sharply Torn Apart...

That was a good line

I'll Tear The Cards, This Fag Is Soft With His Art Cause J Is Catching-Feelings Like I Tossed-Him-His-Heart!...

That was kind of pointless


Need i go on

I dunno man put down ya dictionary and revamp ya shit a lil
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Dawg, Before You Speak Stop And Think. This Is A TEXT-Battle! Not Straight Off The Dome, Its A Known Fact You Dont Feed Off The Others Verse. There Is Too Much Time To Write Out Something Perfect. And I'm Sure, Almost Positive Alot Of You Havent Got My Punches, I Really Dont Care About That. The Fact Is I Put It In The Rules No Feeding, He Should Have Adhered To Them. Notice How JDub Isnt Even Defending Himself When It Comes To The Claims Of Him Biting? I Have A Funny Hunch He Bit... And The Voting Is Pretty Fucked Up Here To. Thats All I Got To Say...

SO GO BACK TO THE SITE YOU CAME FROM

IF YOUR THAT GOOD DEAL WITH IT

I LOST BATTLES I KNOW I WON

I DEALT WITH IT

Mic, How About You Blow Me. Honestly, Your Putting Down My Work, And Saying Its Wack, When There Is Nothing Wack About It! I Honestly Think You Dont Understand It. I Came To This Site In Hopes To Have Some Fair, Honest And Decent Battles. I Could Rip You Without A Vocab, I Dont Need It, I Like To Use It, Cause It Gives A Leg-Up, Thats If I Have Voters Who Understand What Is Being Said. Either Way, What The Fuck Ever...

ya'll drop that shit u freepostin is cloggin up are thread dog u look stupied aruging wit vets shut up they voted fo me not u now o well hush its over....

UPPIN 4 Votes

Dawg, Dont Tell Me What To Do Ok? I Could Careless If They Are Vets, Does That Make Them Better Than Me? No... Does That Mean There Opinion Is More Valued To Me? When They Are Putting Down MY Work... I Dont Think So, I Like How You Keep Avoiding My Accusations Of The Biting And Feeding Though, Keep Your Head Up JDub, Earn The E-Respect You So Deserve... Herb.

J took this 1 in my oppinion just prefered his punches and the flow was pretty tight........yo holla bak on my battle and return the favour....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0738#post700738

w/e tha only reason i'm not responding is cause i'm not on ur kiddy shit when ur bout to lose hurry and make excuses and i could care less what u think so shut up fo u get banned fo freepostin

UPPIN 4 VOTES

They Can Ban Me All The Fuck They Want... Think I'm Going To Cry Over Not Being Allowed At A Message Board? Excuses? Dawg, I Have Read Each One Of Those Punches Somewhere, If I Could Find Where I Would, They Are ALL Played. Except For The One You Fed... Whatever Though...

i think that j took this one, it just had harder punches aswell as it flowing better............................................ ..................................

uppin4 votes............................................. .................................................. .

WHOA! Very close.. I like Mezoforte's Geometric lyricism.... but both emcees were dope... i cant vote, and even if i did, i know this bitch would be a tough one to pick a winner.... Definetely dope, im gonna have to step my game up a tad if im gonna compete with this...

Dope

Big D

[QUOTE]Originally posted by MiCsYcKlE
[B]Vote jay dubya he had some dope shit
GOOD PUNCHES AND DESCENT METAS

Mezzo you had some good stuff but wasnt feelin the first few lines

word^^^