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Rappad v.s. Solar Eclipse
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no hate/crew/d/r votes no feedin' i spit first and its cool just spit when u get a chance aight dawg |
ok here we go
I got the UN at my front door, wanting inspections// Coz my deadly words are spreadin' like germs, causing infections// I make an STD call and Solar's momma answers// Oh that's right....she's one of the whor...i mean dancers!// Your mind capacity causes a rhyme catastrophe// You inflict as much damage as bowow bashin' me// Solar's a moronic alcoholic smokin' on some narcotics// You're an exotic dancer and I heard you find males Erotic// You catching chronic homo colds, you know AIDS is symbolic// You a disorder of the mind, you start to decline and need to be refined// Can’t comprehend nothing the first time, have to go back and rewind// Solar got an introduction to total destruction don't need no instruction// He knneds some reconstruction because of an eruption about the time of his abduction// Makin you think a "square root" is "herbal mathematics"// My spitz "takes your breath away" like ephedra in "chronic asthmatics"// moving to the finish I told you u ain't no soldier or even veteran piss// Im gonna scold ya and mold ya and maybe ull be better at this// Your punches hit as hard as a letterman diss// Finisher You're a thug but u never comitted a felony// Hmmm your eyes are watering.....do you have an allergy???(lol)// |
heres my verse....
Battle just begun and ur already on ur knees, beggin God please to spare you from me, u couldn’t spit sick if I injected you with a disease :: chainin u up and throwin away the keys, you couldn’t “roll with me” if u were Christopher Reeves (think) // 1 Deny your skill, mentally instill ways to kill, seems the only way to get ill is if you were Dr. Mario “poppin pills” :: eat my entire verse and still wouldn’t have ur fill, skills “run of the mill,” ur bars couldn’t be more flowery if u spat out daffodils // 2 Cast lyrical magic to infest inside ur chest cuz ur battling with one of the best, couldn’t “pass the grade” cuz u failed this test :: invest my skills to lock ya heart up like “cardiac arrests,” guess these bars are too “heavy to handle” like a weighted bench press // 3 Rappad thinks he’s a man when he really sports a clit, it seems fit how you couldn’t “handle my heat” if you had a catcher’s mit (heat-fast pitch) :: inhibit flame you couldn’t tame if you bit, you could be a gourmet chef and still end “serving up shit” // 4 How do you expect to beat the heat that I secrete, can’t tell ”beef” from true feuds and a piece of a meat, takin candy from this baby is like gathering Halloween treats :: I must be a physic the way im envisioning ur defeat, cuz these lyricals come sicker-lookin than porno movie theater seats // 5 vote on best one.......peace........... |
solar took this ismy eyes but good battle no beef..............................vote=solar drop avote ere peeps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73060 |
tight battle......props to both.... i thoguth this was a close one but i was feelin rappads a bit more.......but at the end of solars he came really hot.....
vote= rappad can you guyz hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73048 |
Damn, this was a good battle, both of you had good punches through and through. Each verse had some good personals, but the deciding factor has to be the flow and multis that solar was throwing out. Vote Solar
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ok 1-2 uppin for votes......................
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upppppin this battle.................................remember to post some feedback on the verses, not just some short crap and then a vote................................peace.
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^^yes what he said
uppin btw nice battle man ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
might as well up this one more time since its getting slept on.......
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VOTE
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ok uppin for the last time.........................
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vote on this folks....................
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this right here was pretty close in my opinion....so props to u both.....nice battle verse from Rappad....and nice shit from Solar......Rappad had some funny punches....but his vocabulary kinda made it less effective....Solar had some nice wordplay and punches also....but his vocabulary was also weak.....nice shit from u both though....but i think i gotta go with Solar on this.....he had a little bit more complexity with his verse....no hate though.....
peace 4:20 |
upppppppppppppppppin for some more votes on this.............................................. .................................................. ...........
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SOMEONE VOTE...............
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SOMEONE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE ALREADY.......................geez its so hard to get votes these days.......vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
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MY SWEET JESUS LORD SOMEONE VOTE.............................................. END THIS FUCKIN BATTLE ALREADY........................................... .....................
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Man...
This is a nice battle. Giving it to Solar for the flow and complexity. More humorous and inventive punching. Great work by the other guy, but someone's gotta win. Kinda felt like Rappad's verse fell in the center, created some filler for me. Other than that, it was pretty good. Solar Eclipse |
close shit.. but solar pulled it out wit more direct punches...........................
Vote - Solar return tha favors http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73758 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73026 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73771 |
kinda hard to vote on this but rapped jus took it by a little bit
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punches/disses: tie
flow: tie multi's: solar vocab: rappad metaphors: solar creativity: tie originality: tie wordplay/complexity: solar opener: solar closer: tie - solar was funny and rappad was decently nice vote: solar advice -- solar make your bars proper 2 lines = 1 bar 'cause battling people who count properly, it will be like cheating rappad -- don't separate your bars with those silly headings -- also solar don't separate bars -- have crossover multi's to help you flow and it's bad some times to change from multi's to one word end of line rhymes which at one point i think you did -- what else improve (-- because that's the point of participating) good luck to you two -- come harder in following battles, look at what's filler and get rid of em |
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