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Cerebral Assasin vs M.dizz-ill
Dawg go ahaeh and spit
your shit you know the rules. ......................O-N-E |
try again stupid ass theres no poll and its nota battle..
read the intructions when u set up a battle thread |
lool oh jus kiddin mah badddd
spittin ina few............................................... ........................... |
Ayo,I know it's yo bad .Think before
you just saying shit that pops up in your head.Gone call me a stupid ass HUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=704055
its 4-0 me drop an honest vote here i will return all honest favors |
lol
yo im takin out this assassin like a date wit max pain/ ur lyrically insane...only cuz ur name is crazy in tha brain// dawg..u cant rap str8...quotes n highlights got ya lines crooked/ have ya jaw penetrated like a fisherman hooked it// id like to fry ur mind wit skill..but ur saute'd wit wackness/ so why are u here? well...i only get better with practice//:) this killers failed his trade...ur dead in ur prime losin ur spark/ always end up dissapointed..like a elf in a amusement park// im takin ya cerbrum and fix'n it wit a metal poll.... to bad u didnt know..fixn' it meant rippin u a brand new hole/ only time u kill without heart is when u beat our ur lil soldiers/ assassin touches his toes like a calf-fiend name shoulda been folgers// game is wack in all asspects..like u got mad and sat on ur glasses/ damn ya'll im stickin it to C.A. likes his finger it bitch ass's// ...but thats a female dog u'd never cop a real feel... ...unless i offer u a contract and u think its a real deal... ...sign tha lines playa my mouth is cool like a chin-chilla.. ...assassins life is passed cuz dizz is tha real contract killa... |
vote on this............................
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=72551 |
Ayo,check it
This cat about to ~feel it ~ like he ~ejaculating~// On the fact you hatin',the only time you in~heat~ is when you're on the ~back of satan~// Let me get the facts straightened,my rhymes ~sick~like I'm i~ill with the flu// When I'm finish with you,I doubt you'll still be in your crew// I spill blood,my pen is stainless// Your rhymes painless,you must be brainless// Your a ~big asshole~like a ~fag's anus~// This cat's name is M.dizz-ill// Huh,You can suck my dick.izz-ill// Crack ya dome,and watch the blood out ya head spill// You trying to go against me is going ~nowhere~like tring to ~race on a treadmill~// Ill leave your fingers crossed and have ya group wishing// I'ma ~serve~this cat like ~women in soup kitchens~// Dawg you ripped,And I don't care what ya friends think// It should been defeatable not killa instincts// Send someone against a I'll grind ya man// Could'nt ~spit~a metaphor if it dwelled inside ya ~saliva glands~/ |
Uppin 4 votez if ya'll ain't sleep
He gone be embarrased if he lose look at age difference.. O-N-E |
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Multi: Dizz Wordplay:Cerebral Punches:Dizz Flow: Dizz VOTE: DIZZ cerebral...I didn't really see to many rhymes at all...you just had wordplay....holla back http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73119 |
^*sniff sniff* i smell dickrider
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^^^^^i dont even think u know wat a dickrider is...
it means he voted for me jus becuase he wants to see me win and has somethin against tha other guy and is not voted from his idea of who had tha better verse...and why..i must ask...do u think w.l. would d/r me? i dunno who tha fuck that kid is.... stay tha fuck outa my thread if u aint gonna vote |
This is how I will break it down...
First Good battle... Second NO HATE!!!! Unfortunately there is something worng that I am not able to vote but if a moderator or an administrator see this please vote for me for Cerebral Assasin.... This how its broken Down Punches = Cerebral Assasin Multi's = Leaning towards cerebral assasin eventhough it was close Flow = Cerebral Assasin based on that I rapped it and it flowed better... Complexity = Tie Vote = Cerebral Assasin. Feedback/Comments/Pointers: Keep battelin create a structure with all of your battles and stick with the structure at least for each bar also use more metaphores, complex words, and raise the bar and keep elevating your shit... Aight Peace.. Return tha Favor and hit my Battle against chris wood three Heres is the link address http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=704616 |
lol^^^^wat?????
oh geez thanx for tha vote.............................................. ................ |
m took it wit punches and flow kinda close battle tho props 2 both im out holla
peep mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73110 |
up-see-daaaaaaisy
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UPPPIN FOOOOR VOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTES
from u................................................. .call ur mom she can vote too........oh wait nvm she might vote for me DICKRIDER LOL.........................ya votes |
Ay, uppin 4 votez
Don't ignore the battle Come on .......................................O-N-E |
C.A. took this no doubt..
I've been here for a while...Just checkin' up on things.. <--Check when i registered... Thought i'd vote..Cuz it's a decent battle.. Multis- C.A. ...Whoever said the Dizz had better multis is ignorant really..Not hatin'..You just don't know what multis are if you think that./.. Disses/Personals...I'd have to say dizz had more of a in your face kind of style..So him... Actual punches/Creativity/Metaphors/Wordplay...All to C.A. ..Even tho it made his style a little generic in my opinion..Plus those damn retarded ass slash marks are pretty..Preschool..But he had more punches...One played line from you@The treadmill line..If you've been doin' this long you know that shit's been played since 3.0 ... But due to an overall better verse and better flow..Vote goes to C.A. Critique?...C.A. your style is a bit more complex than your opponents..Work on your structure and making it YOUR style..Because you're right on the edge of being real nice and still being a rookie..IN MY OPINION...But maybe i just expect more..Nothing to wrong tho.. Dizz...Work on creativity and flow..Nothing in your verse was really eye catching..The content was straight..Not TOO much filler..But enough to make me bored with readin it.. 1ne |
hmmm....
nice battle.............. I think m took this, he had some funny punches in there and i was feelin' his verse but both of you had nice shit no hate and props to both Vote=mdizz ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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yo peep this http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=D&pagenumber=2 |
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i thoguthactually cerebal assain took this
m had sum ahrd hittin pucnehs an wut not but cerbal ahd a cooo verse good wordplay an flow was tite vote cerabal assain http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73826 ^^^ hit this up man ...its a bigg battle for me |
Thats was good stuff cerebral assasin
But M.dizz-ill you suck. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Peace |
Ay , I wish you could vote man,
but thanx any way. uppin 4 votez .................................................. ..... |
Man Don't Sleep On The Votez Ya'll
Uppin 4 Votez............................. Uppin 4 Votez >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>One<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
hmmm i suck.....maybe so
nice vote likewise best one on tha thread shame u cant vote p.s. i dont suck lol |
ahhh Dizz got this cerebral need to elevate..
dizz actually had some fomr to his verse with punches. vote=Dizz |
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