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GridLockDaFelon Vs. Focus'd
unlimited bars
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iight im checkin in..............................about to spit shortly if tha power at my place doesnt go out again before i get tha chance to iight so peep this when i do spit...........
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I optically blind your mind to withstand the test of time/
spitting a perfect rhyme where metaphors are metafives/ Nobody leaves the stage alive, knockin teeth from your gums/ blazing up your eardrum with the moves from my tongue/ One breath from my lungs, followed by vicious rhymes/ lyrics so sharpe they fracture vertebrate and spines/ Nothing has as many lines, it's like a lyrical trilogy/ modern day sililoquoy that rips you metaphisically/ drop rockets destroyin ya optics, you cant see me like empty eye sockets// hotter than hawaiin tropics you aint pikachu but i got you in my back pocket// you unfit for conflict make the CRIPS foe drip, i got a grip on ya nuts bitch// go head call me a faggot i handed you a dis but like skee-lo you can only wish// chump, my skills like redwoods you cut shorter than tree stumps// punch drunk 8 bars into round WON from a style sent to jenny craig for weighin a ton(phat)// Felon your only refuge is bellview, nuthin can help you, ya shit stink like pepe la pu// wu told you protect ya neck, you aint listen now these verbal twenty-twos CARREY like DREW// lines tighter than miniskirt hems i drop gems and leave flowers for the dead// combust heads, fill trunks with lead, you was hungry? well you gettin fed// exposed to the ice cold, shit was OVER before this lethal DOSE// top of the line like bose, rap pyro burn challengers with a kink in they hose(no flows)// what type a caliber you expect? rap charity and im wack exempt// redirect ya verse and save ya breath you cant test the text game It's over whos NEXT |
dont be fuckin wit my time iz u gonna drop or are you gonna let da battle get burried like 5 pages deep?
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imma be droppin shortly.............just got up right now and i be writing it fresh off tha top of my dome right now so just hold on iight................
peace |
Now prepare for my revelation as i demonstrate....tha omni-present reasons why steppin to me was ur sealin' tha envelope of ur fate//
I cant re-itterate tha expression i leave on ur face....destroy u into miniscule reminents N leave u in disgrace// Taste tha blood leakin' from tha holes rivoted in ur body....N ur still frontin like ur tha one who shot me// Ha, thats real funny, ur rhymes r like a stand-up comedy....they dont belong on this site, u shouldnt have even dropped them u see// Im intelligent i got tha intellect N vocab to rap my way around text....eradicatin meak feeble inferior kats u dont have tha ability to fuck wit tha best// Test me wit everything u got N everything u can positively muster....come on kid is that all ur capable of releasin' cuz like every otha fucka i'll use my words like a cleaver N cutter// Slice u in half as even ur homies point N laugh....cuz just admit if this was a craft or race competition u would always come in last// My disses deal out blow afta blow of unrelenquished terror N horror....N like a bad apple my intentions are rotten right down to tha core// N no matter what I got all my shit in order....cuz unlike u who even wit GPS in ur hand u couldnt find tha state border// Ur constantly searchin thru Webster's for explinations....to my spits which in contrast make urs seem worthless as i stay tha same while u become just anotha abbreviation// Why am i honestly wastin time on a kat im evidently superior to....he could b a world class athlete N i would still lap him numerous times so what he gonna do// Go N find more lyrics to bite or write mine down on paper....whatever he does he couldnt match me, not now, not in tha past N definitely not later// fuck writin shit as soon as u get up wit a hangover is alot harder then i thought.....LMAO.......anyways there is my drop and nice spit Focus'd.......Nice format.....propz.......may tha best MC win... peace |
uppin(1) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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Lets go uppin.......................................holla at ya boy............................................... ..................
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damn iz there anyone on tonight dat can vote? i dont battle just cuz i like to type................................uppin!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for some votes....................................lets go!!!!!!!!!!...................................... ..................
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dawgs, vote here.... it dont matter what i think of this battle cuz i cant vote neway
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD |
uppin(2) for votes......come on peeps lets get this going, get some poll votes here man.....
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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................................ .........uppin!!!!!!!!!!!
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votes needed dont let dis one go to waste............................................. .................uppin!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin(2) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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good battle,but I will have to go with gridlockdafelon. focus'd,you're good it's just that you didnt say anything really about your opponent...well..I mean personals.That verse could have been for anybody.plus grid had better punches.
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uppin(3) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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Flow: Focus'd
Punches: Both Multies: Focus'd Vote: Focus'd took this one cuz he had a much better flow, seriously, I was about to fall asleep during GridLockDaFelon's verse cuz I couldn't find tha flow...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
uppin(4) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!v ote on dis shit on da real.............................................. ......................................
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^^^everything i would have said and more |
o and sorry to freepost but can you guys hit up my battle with meks....honets vote
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iight thanx fo tha votes peeps and like i said drop links its easier to be linked to a battle then tryin to find it and searching
uppin(5) for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace |
Grid got dis
nice flow, hard punches, better vocab better overall verse honestly vote here http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74311 |
uppin for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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vote=focus'd, harder punches, better vocab and flow, cant poll vote sorry...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74453 |
^^^^^^^^^^said exaclty what i thought VOTE FOCUS'd................................. .................................................. .................. ............................
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uppin for votes...........need poll votes on this battle iight so peep this and vote on it and drop a link and i will peep ur battle after u vote on this one and no fuckin freeposting iiight......so peace
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lts go uppin for votes and dont just say who won put ur pole vote in................................................ ............................
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good lookin com we need more votes.................................... uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wuz up dont stop votin dis close to a winner............................lets go uppin for votes here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[2]wuz up dont stop votin dis close to a winner............................lets go uppin for votes here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo wuz up can i get a fair vote here???????????????????? drop a link and i will vote fairly in ur battle...................................but vote
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yo wuz up can i get a fair vote here???????????????????? drop a link and i will vote fairly in ur battle...................................but vote
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yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wuz up my fellow Mc's can i get some votes here.............................................. ....uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo wuz up can i get a fair vote here???????????????????? drop a link and i will vote fairly in ur battle...................................but vote
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