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ANTI-HERO v.s Condom_King
RULES ARE:
1.ILL SPIT FIRST 2.NO FEEDING 3.NO D/R VOTES 4.NO CREW VOTES IF YA PUNK ASS IS IN A CREW 5.NO HATE VOTES 6.NO BITING 7.NO RECYCLING 8.10-30 LINES |
ILL DROP IN 15 MINUTES U BETTER COME STRONG OR U BOUT TO LOSE GOOD LUCK CUZ UR GONNA NEED IT U HERB AND IF U DONT SPIT BY TONITE ILL HAVE A MOD DELETE THIS
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AYO KID IM GONNA MAKE THIS MORE DIFFCULT 10-15 LINES............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................................
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good 30 lines is bullshit.................
^^^^^^^^^^ Checkin in peace @#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@#@# @#@#@#@# |
KING you'll be runnin after I drop you the onslaught of LYICALL sickness n series of hard HITTING BLOWS
cuz you a SUCKA burning after you just took in the WORDS of da KING n you know how da saying goes you ass will be suckin my dick harder than if you were one of da FINE BITCHES I chose Ayo King sit ya SKINNY shwag SMOKING ASS down Bfore I choke you I'm graphically poundin a HOLE THROUGH ya FRONTAL LOBE without usin PRO TOOLS Don't doubt I can SMOKE YOU,you picked the wrong cat I'll flame you and BLAZE through leave you lookin like BONG CASH Get ya VERTEBREY disengaged when I STOMP back this faggot's like unskilled HCKY PLAYERS, he always palms SACK(MUHAHAHAHAH) Hate for me cause KNIVES cut past ya sTOMACH scorns is VINTAGE KING gets torn n instant Ya DROPPIN YA BEST I"ll rip out ya THROAT tissue b4 ya SPEECH PATTERN can even form a sentence damnit Ya vERSEs be wit so many forced ACTIONS YA LINES wit rape scents PUCHES MISSING BLOTS ya thunder |
SRY DIDNT REALIZE IT WUZ SO SHORT WELL JUSS MAKE IT 10 LINES MAX............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..............
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yo.........nice drop
%%%%%%%%%%%% I'm injectin you wit shots as you read each'a ma werds//1 the infection's strong, listerine couldn't clear tha germs//2 This herb's gone, Mistergreen got smoked, im'a sinester feine fo green//3 Don't miss the meaning and make sure it's not joked, ya brains thurough cleaning is needed fo u ta be seen//4 I see you a big fan of Marvel(comics), ya punches would hit hard if they was marble ebonics//5 Tha King cuz i fill da condoms and make bitches sing, only hit raw once in a while, you know me and ya mom got dat thing.......//6 |
OMG THIS CAT SAID HE WUZ GONNA MERK ME LMAO HE JUSS GOT FUCKING MERKED BY ME AND I AINT EVEN TRY SHIT LOL STUPID HERB NEWBE
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iight bull, we'll see how votes go................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................uppn(1)
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I CAN TELL U WHAT THE VOTES R GONNA BE 5-0 AND IM GONNA WIN OBVIOUSLY U GOT WHAT WE CALL A NEWBE SPIT WHICH MEANS WACK ASS PUNCHES AND GAY FUCKING FLOW UR A HERB DAWG U MAY AS WELL QUIT THIS RAPPIN SHIT U AINT NO GOOD
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haahh lol, wasnt a great battle...and anti hero man u juz being so up urself....dat cud one day be ur downfall..
all together i lyked c-kings flow better than i did anti hero...hero juz thought ur lines were too long for my liking, so i didnt really lyk da flow..i think both of u should work on punches and flow quite a lot..i lyked da way c-king used his name to back himself up and da diss bout da marvel comics, but hero's verse actually put more against c-king..which means a lot in battles so my vote goes to hero, but hero once again dont get too overconfident coz it can be ur downfall.. peace |
Anti hero got this with amore complex rhyme.. better punches & meta's
nothin special tho..... good newbee battle ill poll my vote if you poll vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73486 |
condom king had a better flow, i wasnt feelin anti hero much cos of his ginormous lines.... vote = condom king.............................................. .................................................. ...........
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OMG R U FUCKING FAGGOTS SERIOUS OMFG UR SO RETARDED NO MORE FUCKING NEWBE VOTES OR ULL BE BANNED SO IF UR A NEWBE DONT VOTE U MUSS NOW HAVE AT LEAST 4 WINS TO VOTES CUZ U FUCKING NEWBES DONT UNDERSTAND
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hero took it wit punches complexity and flow in this piece props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=73541 |
condom had the flow.... i liked his flow more so im goin wit him... btw hit this up but anti hero had everything else so my vote goes fer anti hero fo sure.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=73606... "Karat" |
Look this was tough to decide, close battle this newb came pretty hard, nice shit man.......anti-hero came hard too nice drop
BREAKDOWN** """I'm injectin you wit shots as you read each'a ma werds//1 the infection's strong, listerine couldn't clear tha germs//2 This herb's gone, Mistergreen got smoked, im'a sinester feine fo green//3 Don't miss the meaning and make sure it's not joked, ya brains thurough cleaning is needed fo u ta be seen//4 I see you a big fan of Marvel(comics), ya punches would hit hard if they was marble ebonics//5***** Tha King cuz i fill da condoms and make bitches sing, only hit raw once in a while, you know me and ya mom got dat thing.......//6 """" cOndom_king's verse, hit real hard wit personals, his punches were good.......anti had betta wordplay i guess, more complex def. but i gotta say tha kid came harder witt his disses and did it alot quicker............and i was feelin his verse more vote=condom king |
HERB^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^
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anyone can make a punch if the line has 40 words in it... i didn't see nothin special from hero
multis-neither disses/personals-king flow-king wordplay-none punches-tie vote king |
HERB^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^
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MY BAD FOR POSTIN HERB TWICE I ACCIDENTALLY CLICKED BACK TOO MANY TIMES AND THOUGHT IT WUZNT SENT B4 MY BAD............................................... ........................
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Man There Alot Of Hate Goin On Here
ANTI-HERO Got This Shit Hands Down Condom_King Aint All That Great I KO'd His Ass But Yea Stop The Beef Wit Anti vote-Anti-Hero |
anti-heros flow was right on, complex but works good if you can fuckin read. i didnt understand some of his shit didnt rhyme like the very end. and pro tools iono if that was supposed to rhyme with i smoke you. if it is you gotta emphasize. im not a textcee but i think you use quotation marks around wordplay and use capital letters to show that something partway through a line rhymes with something at the end. i think what would improve your shit is if you led up to a punch and then skipped a line and started the next part. it would emphasize the shit.
condom king has an excuse for a simple boring flow cuz hes a newb. his one personal made no sense, marble ebonics? ebony is also a type of wood so you coulda used that for wordplay but i realize it wouldnt have fitted. but if you gonna have a simplistic ass flow, you gotta come hard. you gotta make up for it by usin complex words na mean. vote anti-hero peace |
anti hero, u dont need to chuck a hissy fit just cos condom king is competin with u in votes, thats a pussy way to handle the situation
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Ya'll check out my battle with ANTI-HERO
it's pretty tight http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0791#post710791 |
[QUOTE]Originally posted by DaShowStoppa2
[B]hero took it wit punches complexity and flow in this piece props 2 both tho im out holla word^^^^ |
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