XL4Real Vs Vapour
 

10 lines max
no d/r
no hata
no crew (VOTES)
no bitin or feedin

Just spit now no one goes 1st....

Check in for your killin

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One round is all I need to put This Weak Ass Bitch to sleep…
I'll throw this rhyme in your casket, this shit is for you to keep…
I'll make these words hit you like grenade particles when I blow…
You're so stuck on Wack rhymes, when you write yours they don't show…
you write yours they don't show You go off like car alarms, all noise,
but don't cause no harm
Quoting Wackies so much, you're growing ja rule mic on your arm….
Now go get your lucky charm, cuz you's about to get hexed….
You'll read this text all perplexed, cuz I kill when I get vexed…
I don't wanna spit much more, cuz you ain't even worth my time
If I write too many nice lines, you might Try to Bite off mine.

You a herb, battlin me your none the wiser,
I get high from ya hits when I vapourise ya.
I hit you so hard that that ya feel ya WACK,
You couldnt deliver a suprise if had santa's SACK.
You got nottin on me if you were climbing my sides,
You say your poison ivy but you couldnt smother my rhymes.
You wont elevate in no shape or no form,
I'll hit real early so you feel the break of dawn.
Even when you were spittin in school you werent a class act,
and working as a farmboy is how ya got ya stacks.


The only way you giving low blows is when ya on ya knees,
The only way ya cold hearted is in 7/11 deep freeze.
Bitch please, i'll only snap one arm i'll give you a break,
Take it easy with ma stee,z i'll leave ya pretty boy face.

You couldnt hit me up if you were throwin upper cuts,
and you defenately aint lean you givin beef from ya guts.
I'll leave you contemplatin your life as you know it,
and if ya masters got a towel I suggest he throw it........

TEN LINES....LETS BE AVIN YA!!!!!!!!!!!

DONT WORRY ABOUT THE LAST FEW LINES I JUST GOT CARRIED AWAY VOTE ON THE 1ST TEN ONLY 4REAL.........THEN I CAN USE THE LAST FEW ANOTHER TIME YO......

Lol r u blind thats 20lines but w/e .........................10 lines vs 20 heh lets go................................................ .................................................. ..............

YER I KNOW MAN IM SORRY, IMPORTANT EVERYONE VOTE ON THE 1ST TEN LINES OF MY SPIT FORGET THE REST....THER FOR SHOW ONLY YO.....

FUCK THAT IM EXTENDING MY ///////////VERSE//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

One round is all I need to put This Weak Ass Bitch to sleep…
I'll throw this rhyme in your casket, this shit is for you to keep…
I'll make these words hit you like grenade particles when I blow…
You're so stuck on Wack rhymes, when you write yours they don't show…
you write yours they don't show You go off like car alarms, all noise,
but don't cause no harm
Quoting Wackies so much, you're growing ja rule mic on your arm….
Now go get your lucky charm, cuz you's about to get hexed….
You'll read this text all perplexed, cuz I kill when I get vexed…
I don't wanna spit much more, cuz you ain't even worth my time…
If I write too many nice lines, you might Try to Bite off mine….
Yo, your rhymes are as generic as astronaut's dinner plates..
Hope street, home of the whack, where X is getting raped…

Destroyed, stepped over, shot, killed, revived and killed again
start to love the pain

I'll make-this-dike-take-a-hike, like-a-third-and-final-strike….
Rapping you over and over cos I just grabbed my mic.

ok then my verse counts then...........dunno what good thats gonna do ya..............................

lol yoru suck loo how wack this was AND U WERE TRYING TO Sway

I hit you so hard that that ya feel ya WACK,<---lmao
You couldnt deliver a suprise if had santa's SACK.<---Retire Old Man

Yo this was quite close but im saying XL got this......u both had good flow but u went off a bit vapour......punches- xl got this.lmao some funny shit..........................overall xl was better
vote=xl

hit mine up plz y'all
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9450#post709450

d/r he dint look at my verse he just knnos x can vote on his batpin4 some fair votes.............................i merkethis herb.............................................

upin 4some@Fair votes............................................. ...........................ps please look at my verse

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by ShadowEnigma
[B]Yo this was quite close but im saying XL got this......u both had good flow but u went off a bit vapour......punches- xl got this.lmao some funny shit..........................overall xl was better
vote=xl

totally agreein.... vote=xl fo sho'..... hit this up wit a vote dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73606

"Karat"

ANother D/r....................Upin......................... .................................................. .....i mean his verses were WAck................

Fucking hell all i ask 4 is a vote instead i get 2 x4noob fans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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You a herb, battlin me your none the wiser,
I get high from ya hits when I vapourise ya.
No rhymes Bad opener*in my opnion
I hit you so hard that that ya feel ya WACK,
You couldnt deliver a suprise if had santa's SACK.
LOL, nice wordplay, little basic..but nice
You got nottin on me if you were climbing my sides,
You say your poison ivy but you couldnt smother my rhymes.
Wsnt that good didnt feel this one
You wont elevate in no shape or no form,
I'll hit real early so you feel the break of dawn.
nice flow, basic text...nice line tho
Even when you were spittin in school you werent a class act,
and working as a farmboy is how ya got ya stacks.
Nice punch here, liked this line....


The only way you giving low blows is when ya on ya knees,
The only way ya cold hearted is in 7/11 deep freeze.
Bitch please, i'll only snap one arm i'll give you a break,
Take it easy with ma stee,z i'll leave ya pretty boy face.
Nice punchm good flow to it, very nice line...

You couldnt hit me up if you were throwin upper cuts,
and you defenately aint lean you givin beef from ya guts.
I'll leave you contemplatin your life as you know it,
and if ya masters got a towel I suggest he throw it........
Nice finisher aswell
Verse rate 7+

Well this verse had some nice shit to .was a close call, but i think Xl took this on a little harder punches, the flow was iite by both of you...some basic lines here and there, but an overall nice battle...but vote = Xl

Aight Pc upin,,............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

yo uppin this its a good battle worth votin on so vote fair.....no d/r shit iight we dont deserve it..........peace

honest votes will be returned if you drop ya links......

UPPIN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
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uppin this shit no freepostin sucker.......

vote this up guys.............................................. ..........................

xl will you put an honest vote on ma battle wid ragchez and i'll return da favour.................peace

You know the rules you vote then we will check ya battles, only honest votes returned no d/r iight......

UPPIN

DONT SLEEP ON THESE 4REAL............................................. .............................HONEST VOTES WILL BE RETUNED SO DROP YA LINKS.................................

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Vote XL
he had better punches wordplay and flow
thats what you need for a win
good battle guys

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73880

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uppin to win 1 vote needed............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .......................

I have to go with Optik - XL man you need to elevate, you keep battlin cats with madd skillz you gonna get murked

yo shadow I'm cool wit XL too but you don't see me dick ridin like that.... for real dog how could you say he took it? You either a fool or a mf'n d/r

vote = optik

yo is this car's name optik or vapour? wtf

yo man XL I can't believe you got so many votes on this you must have a gang of d/r's

you gotta admit that optik/vapour/whatever the fuck his name is

ripped you up

it's cuz your vocab is too simple, XL if you want some pointers I'll hook you up, PM me

'sall love, just tryin to help you elevate

[QUOTE]Originally posted by ShadowEnigma
[B]Yo this was quite close but im saying XL got this......u both had good flow but u went off a bit vapour......punches- xl got this.lmao some funny shit..........................overall xl was better
vote=xl

word^^^^