24 karat & Focus'd
 

20 lines max
no crew votes
explain votes
i will spit first

24 Karat showin no signs of wisdom/
Or lines with rhythm, no design ta your system/
Only time you "go ta tha street is ta check your mail/
"hell s Courtship" already failed, you lookin extra pale/
Almost ghostly, was intimidated before you approached me/
Couldnt be "over me" if I was midget, you spit soberly/
I spit lifted, my bars well analyzed/
You sanitized & Im grimey, never satisfied/
Your knowledge proves ta have no evidence/
Because you seem a little bit illiterate, readin your bars requires Excederin/
Your slow expands but still never improves/
Ill induce wounds that consume your tunes, placed in a tomb too soon/
Make you a prisoner of your own mistakes/
You hesitate, I create debates that leave you in checkmate/
I like whut you tryna do, challenge tha big dogs so you can improve your status/
But this dog is a rabid-infested savage, leavin you & your cabbage in caskets/
"24" becomes demolished because my steele bars are rock solid/
Spit-shined & polished, get a note pad & gain some Knowledge....Bitch....

my rhymes leave u 'hopped out' like 'bugs bunny' when i 'smoke karats'(carrots)//
i take a 'snapshot' of ur body 'hangin' from a a gold chain so i can 'picture' how u 'wear it'//
Imma take a 'knife' and put it threw your 'neck'//
I'll take a huge 'nail' and 'hamma' it down ur neck... threw the deck//
Yo rhymes are 'fake'..'gay'.. they 'suck'//
U 'accepted' this 'challenge'... now your really outta 'luck'//
You love the drink 'cocktail'...exspecially with the 'cream' (cum)
SHit.. you can 'chug' the most... outta your whole foot ball 'team'!//
You got the balls to 'stay' and 'linger'//
Fuk it... im juss gonna 'break' all ten of those 'fingers'//
Your like an 'ice cube' sittin by 'burnin flames' to me//
You've been 'melted' by 24 karat.... the same ol' 'G'//


"Karat"

good shit dowg...................uppin for votes............................................. .................

UPpin... vote... uppin.... uppin.......... vote vote vote vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! Uppin.. dont go to sleep on this battle... vote!!

"Karat"

.................................................. .vote dont let da battle be wasted.............................uppin.......... ..................

no contest, focus'd won this battle
he had nice wordplay and good flow
was not feelin 24k at all....he needs some work
no hate no beef just my observation

VOTE FOCUS

Uppin... Uppinn.. vote vote vote.... Uppin fo mo votes

............................................
"Karat"

yo karat u did'nt vote so please come back and vote on the battle............................................ ...............................................

yo yo good battle tought ass choice but let me label it like this
punches-focus
flow-karat
diss-karat
so my vote goes to karat............................................. ........................

but i forgot that i cant vote until i get to and 100 posts but when i get there i got u son holla back at that thread ...................

Uppin this shit... come on vote come on uppin
.................................................. ..........

"Karat"

why would'nt you vote for karat he voted for your sorry ass
you guys are both bitches
FUCK BOTH OF YOU DICK RYDERS

focus clearly served this herb and you voted for carrot

i'm not dick rydin dude..... he came and voted fer who he wanted to i didnt say i voted fer u come vote fer me dude.... quit dippin and dappin until u no whats happenin faggot
I dont Cheat


"Karat"

fuck all da shit talkin.....there are battles for dat.....i need votes ....................................one

damn iz there anyone on tonight dat can vote? i dont battle just cuz i like to type................................uppin!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote on this battle dammit!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin..... dont go to sleep on this fukin battle.... peace


"Karat"

vote on this shit please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! upppin dont go to sleep on this battle...we battle to see who wins... so vote uppin


"Karat"

Nice Newbe battle
This was some close shit
both came pretty weak tho
but i'd have to give it to Karat
his verse made me laugh a lil bit
but both of you need to elevate some
vote=karat
This is not a dick ryde vote neither
i vote fairly, if anyone talk shit
i'll tear your ass up in a battle!

nice spit by 24 karat.. i think he took it


vote
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD

i think karat took it wit punches props 2 both tho im out holla

.................................................. .......................................

yo karat holla ta ya boi wit da vote against jko holla............................................. ..........................................

yo i dont dick ryde..... btw he did a lot betta then u.... so i voted fer him.... he was betta... peace.,,,, HOlla


"Karat"

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
i agree, not a bad verse tho 24................elevate
no hate just bein sincere
drop an honest vote on this battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1092#post711092

karat gets this one

more punches that hit harder
better flow
not much word play
more metas
he got more creative

Thankx ya'll.....keep votin!!!
.................................................. .......

"Karat"

i agee focus had it.....drop a poll vote here...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...1634#post711634

Yo, I cant Vote yet.. and as newbs ya'll did tha same thing that i'm doin now, so help a new guy and hit this up.. it'll take you 2 minutes.. THanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1639#post711639

^^^^^^^^^^word.

DONT GO TO SLEEP.... VOTE ON THIS BATTLE NOW... LOL... JUSS VOTE PLEASE

.......................................
"kARAT"

This is a real close battle, some nice punches from both, neither flowed very well but i think karrot won it on punches seemed to have that little bit more complexity...very tite...focus your dope man...oNe

vote-Karrat

word^^^^