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dw vs shadowenigma
10 lines....all rules apply...................verses due in 45 mins.........................ill spit first but u have 2 checkin..............................
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>>>>>>>>>>CHECKIN in ere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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He'll try merk me wit non existent punches so 'I wont see what hit me'/1
Missed me, ill leave him like his played lines, nothin but 'history'/2 With his name he still couldnt get D(the)-W, my Punches will 'Hand' him the 'L'/3 because he cant elevate, if the illerate fool was a wizard he still couldnt spell/4 hes just another wack mc to merk, like misplaced cds im losing track/5 breakin your skull by deliverin 'lines' in your ear, so u can hear the 'crack'/6 Like the iraqi army hes suffered many losses, because he retreats when i attack/7 Theres no contest, even if he decides to 'show up' it would be a 'miss-match'/8 He wore small pants so he could be tight, but now hes feelin the 'rip'9 This boy films gay porn, thats the only time hes 'shooting clips'/10 |
waitin on ur verse............................................. .................................................. ...........................
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Fuck it, i aint waiting on ya for no pre-write shit.............................................. .................................................. ......................................
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soz bout that i had 2 go offline 2 do some shit!
im ere now though n u took 50 mins on ya verse so i'lll av it posted up in that time--peace |
alrite listen--
i rap down ya ear n it echoes over so u get wot i sed/ nothin there so it won't hard 2 keep a CLEAR HEAD in this thread/ mislead 2 believe it was shadow enigma, shud be shadow ENIMA/ cos likes things up his ANAL n still tryin 2 be the UKs eminem/ strap a rack of dynamite 2 ya head jus 2 BLOW YA MIND/ resign gay bitch, cos the only time u BOWING is wiv a homo BEHIND/ line up the paper n make a list, of every battle that u cryed about after you'd been dissed/ wish u didnt exist jus try 2 resist cos these lyrics gonna leave u needin an execist/ got enough BARZ ere 2 arrest a criminal, sayin u ILL but can't connect a SYLABOL/ but u reliable? more like a liablity wiv no ability, the only reason u in spoken legendz is cos amgibous likes ya bed agility/ find ya own facilty cos this thread is mine u must be delerious, im ILL 2 the bone like SKIN CANCER, shame that ain't CONTAGIOUS! alrite uppin 4 votes! |
Both came hard and dope. Dw lacked originality tho..
If i could i'd vote on Shadow... return the feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73829 |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dw........=flow,punches.......................etc
jus felt his shit more.............................................. ......... |
i gotta give this to shadow.. cant vote sooo..
hit this up http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD |
o.k 1-0 to me
uppin this n we will return votes on ur battles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
To me this was DW's battle because he, very simply put...
HIT HARDER! Shadow came ok, just much softer. Dw came with the hard punches, better multi's and flow. There ya go. |
thanx uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was a nice battle
buti think Dw edged it out with better flow dissing and wordplay Shadow should have a come a lil harder than he did No beef and DW how could contagious spit good stuff in my battle when he bit and got cought |
Yeah, Shadow Came Ok - A Couple Decent Lines Here And There But Dw Just Came a Little Harder With His Punches / Wordplay In My Opinion, Nice Battle Though. .
Vote - DW |
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uppin,......................ur verse was unstructured...and half of it didnt rhyme..and unoriginal..........+u took an extra day to post
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^^^^blah blah u readin the same verse bitch cos i don't think so! like i sed ad 2 do some shit plus wen i did come 2 post it was no where near 50 mins like ur shit!
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! 2-0 to me 3 votes 2 close this out! |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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uppin this don't sleep y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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come on y'all don't sleep uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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last uppin can we get some votes ere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2 votes in how long? come on y'all this is a gud battle so check it out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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last uppin y'all plz can we get some votes ere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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yea it was a tight, close battle but plain out dw came HARDER................and he'll win HARDER......lmao vote=dw hit this shit up witta vote, honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0894#post720894 |
thanx 3-0!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2 votes 2 finish this!
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i think shadow just pipped DW to the line in this one, his rhyme was more on point .......................... .................................................. ...............
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ur opinion dawg^^^^bull shit hate vote but ur opinion!!!!
uppin 2 finish this finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
uppin come on 2 votes 2 finish it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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break down
flow even both did good there multis im gonna have to give it to dw sein some from shadow but more from dw punchs shadow by alittle bit i thought dw could have came a little stonger than what he did. punch lines wins battles to me so shadow enigma gets my vote if i could |
o.k still 3-0 to me jus 2 votes 2 finally close this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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uppin 2 votes plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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break down
multis dw didnt see very much from shadow flows was even i just liked dws better punchs dw he came way harder than shadow shadows was kinda weak but nice shit vote dw if i could way better over all |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^hey man why u changin ya vote now?
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To me this was DW's battle because he, very simply put...
HIT HARDER! Shadow came ok, just much softer. Dw came with the hard punches, better multi's and flow. There ya go. |
uppin 1 to finish this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this was close....but dw was abit better in every category
vote=dw drop an honest vote here....need 1 to finish it up....peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...12&pagenumber=1 |
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