Doctor J vs GChand
 

aight yo,
10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no feeding
no biting
no pre-written
no ghost-write
2hr time limit

ima drop in a few

checkk in dawg

checkin in

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u ready to be merked

Here’s some advice//1
You betta run as if you were a “draftee” in tha “mili-taree”//2 (military)
Stay back kid, cuz you don’t want no beef with me//3
I’ll “fuck you up”, “cut you up”, and “pimp smack you up”//4
Cuz, dawg, you’re outta “luck”//4
Your name is Doctor J, what tha “fuck”?!//5
You think you Julius “Erving”//6
But to me, you’re just a another “serving”//7
You suck dick like a fat ass “plummer”//8
Don’t you wish roll wit a pimped out “Hummer”?//9
But instead, you roll wit a piece o’ shit in tha “summer”//10
I’ma pull out my gak and shoot you in tha face//11
Cuz dawg, you ain’t never ever gonna win this race//12

U Couldn't "Drop-Hot-Bars" Even If I Handed U "Soap-Inflamed",
U Think U Hard Even Though U And Ur Crew Spit Da Same... Extremely Lame//2

Ur 1-1...I'll Leave Ur Rap-Career-Done...Even-Before-It-Begun,
I'll Automatically Transform U Wit A Million Holes From My Lyrical Sub-Machine-Gun//4

Look At Dis Bitch He Didn't Even Counted,
His Verse More Elementary Then A,B,C blocks Mounted//6

Don't Fuck Wit Me Herb...I Can't Be Touched,
Unlike U I Never Went To A Catholic School Aimin To Get Butt-Fucked//8

U A Little Faggot That Always Ends Up "Verbally-Raped",
U Never Woke Up And Knew U Was Gettin Merked Manually Today//10

uppin 4 votes

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Good stuff Doctor J you merked this cat

If I could vote Doctor J you would have my
vote

One

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gotta go with doc on this one
he had better wordplay and some nice punces
tha other dude had no flo...very weak
doc will win this one with a TKO

VOTE DOC

thanx 4 votin

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nice drop doc J................................................. ....................................

thanx u wasn't bad yaself

uppin 4 sum votes

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I smell a biter
Line 4 from GCHand is bitin from Tupac Change

Dont let them Jack you up pimp smack you up

Anyways either from that this is how its broken down

Floe = Doc
Multi's = Doc
Creativity = Doc
Meta's = Doc
COmplexity = DOc
Vote = Doc

You have been merked man... anyways ggood luck next time...

Thanx 4 votin

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anybody can come up wit dem rhymes i don't think there bitten

even if they were it ain't nuttin big to get him banned over

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uppin 4 votes............................................. ................................






dont sleep yall..................... (1)

doctor got this

his verse was more complex, better rhyme form or structure, and good flow...hard punches

vote=doctor_j

quote:
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Originally posted by Doctor_J
Thanx 4 votin

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uppin 4 votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (2)

vote here too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72551

chand came harder wit his punches, u suck dick like a plummer line was funny as hell though

no hate vote

vote=g
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it was a close battle but doctor j took this by the punches and wordplay.......................................... .................................................. .............................

upppinnnn 4 votes.... vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and vote here 2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72551

uppppinnnn for vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin dawgs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(4)
damn 100 characters.....................

i'm gonna have to go wiv GChand on this one, it was close but i think that he took it................................................ .........................

vote=GChand

can u hit this battle plz............................................... .................................................. .........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72832

vote = doctor J

it's obvious, GC had no punches at all

yo GC to elevate, just add some punches in your shit. Your flow ain't really bad, but your vocab needs work. Just make up a dis about the person then tie it in to your rhymes.... keep using dissis over and over and that's punches kid. It's easy but the shit you are doin now you ain't gonna ever have a good record. You want some help I will teach you, but you gotta be humbel before you can be great