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Avalon -[v/s]- Amend
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5 Votes No Herbness Check In Due W/E |
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I'll be here later tonight... stop buggin me...
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kid was mad I haven't posted yet... yet the deadline is w/e... fuckin punk...
*waits for this to drop to 18th page... and then drop a verse* |
who were you talkin too.?
you really scare me with this 3rd person shit. . . post when you want, gee golly |
Av does not care that you exist...
^ that is the 3rd person... and you are the 1st person to be that stupid... Let's get it on... |
I'm still waiting. . .night pookey.!
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lol@pookey...
The truth is a fat woman... wearin Nike Spandex this time, n' even that means... the truth is he's stretchin the lines the hottest thing I ever thought... were lines to wow the reader The hottest thing u ever thought of was getting caught w/ a fever Your wack Mend... guess after this youll plummet to straight bottom ...n you’d need a doctorate in math, to solve ya weight problem Im a man of rarity... n’ guess what... this fag is scared of me Cus I got cancer of the fist, and beating your ass is my therapy Your old and fat... yet you think of possibly rippin my crew? Ill read you the riot act…n' let 50 ppl stomp the shit outta you Forget audio... you ain't even that strong in text fag And thats sad, cus you've been here longer than Alldig has don't bitch about the tourney... BYE..! along w/ the other riders doors only opened for mediocre netcees n up... minimal writers n' keep it net... walk away from the scene... leave it text b, cause Av come with clips free... like matrix reloaded... dvds But Amend's back... YAY..! about to start spittin his rhymes, So now we all wait n wonder... Who's fuckin shit will he bite, or recycle and act like he ain't flipped all of them lines. and with Cool n' Chrit gone now, who's fuckin dick will he ride? So if he dare to look my way and starts ta talk, man, he'll get shook and sprayed like a Shasta soda pop can my flow is hot damn! This chump's so fuckin played out, the admins gave amend a bye wishin he would stay out Amend an Amatuer at Text... Says shit 'n get ya skin Fried his House resemblles Hedgehogs... cept The Pricks on tha Inside this kid spins, fade-away, shoot'n panties in the hamper right wanna be great when his will power's run on a hamster's pride Ill lend thoughts..., and doc ya setups prove ya not shit When I send shots, and watch the metal group like rock vid’s u may get more props then Cam n' Evolve cuz them 2 kids, would rather no show then get they ass beat... like u just did. Fuck those rules... match it... |
Wait A Minute... Did You Mention My Name In Your Rap???
Yeeaaaaaaaa... Evolve... Yeeaaaaaaa!!! .................................................. ................................................. |
lmao
You need a hug... I'm so serious... Dammit I'm so sinseer... that's crazy... I listened to the black album like twice... OH WELL..! |
U Fuckin 'Fruit', I'll 'Pluck Ya Roots' - 'Your A Basket Case'
Like 'Choppin Wood', I Gotta 'Crush' On U - Ax Embraced . . You Should Of Left RB, Av, Island. . .Fuck It - I Think Your All Shit No Need To Match, I'll Beat Ya With The Bare Min. Like Evolve Did I Maul Scripts, & Like Retarded Bald Kids - Your Headed Wrong Is. ...Amend'll Leave Ya Up In Smoke Like It's A Cheech & Chong Skit No Need For A Long Spit, & Stop Droolin' - Mend'll Script'cha Pain Probably End Up Like Cam. - Dryed Up Under 28 Different Names Forget Ya Fame, Its Just The Net - & I Know Text Is Cool To YOU But Im Past That, So This Match Is Like Av :shoot: v/s Bullet-Proof Cool It Duke, Dont Get Heat'ed - Or I'll Fog Up Any Clear Solutions Snap, Crackle. . .And I'll Drop Av Like Most New Year Resolutions You'll Need A Squad Of Hope - Cause No Way Can You Merk 'Mend Its Funny, Notice You Key'd 22 Lines But Pre-Wrote The First Ten Want Work Friend.? Be A Ghost. .& Im Known To Diss A Peer, So.. Amend Sees This Battles Like A Protest, All I Need's A Meer Post Steer Close, & You Better Ride This Win - Theres No Alternatives Who Names Themself After An Island Where Dead King Author Is U Lost To Chrit, Witha Flawless Spit - Only Reason For Comparison With The Both Of Us, In Each Battle - Were Both Declared The Win U Dont Scare Amend, Fuck A Shakey Verse - & I Dont Need Props With JUST Text, Your Futures Hairy, Like The Direction A Flea Hops . blah, got shit to do. . . |
Amend has some nice wordplay in the begining of his verse then went to straight punches later on... To me personal punches win battles & Av came with a shit load of those.. but i didnt enjoy reading the novel Av calls a verse...
v. Av Close Battle |
1-0 Av
Thanks For The Fair Vote.! Upperz ................................. ................................. ................................ |
Wow. For a few headline vets dat wasnt great. It wuz quite annoying having to read all those lines but i have made a decision. AMEND, tho not by much, takes this one. Neithers punches or personals were outstanding, but AMENDs were a bit betta, and mostly everything wuz close. Av's closer/finisher wuz not to bad, but his overall verse wuz not super impressive. Punches were ok, and aside from a few good personals, the rest wuz boo. I'd have to say AMEND took this one, although i'd like to see both come betta on da next battle.
Vote is AMEND. |
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Avalon wins cuz Amend said "gee golly"....GameTime.......
blah...here it goes..... opener+1-Amend closer+1-Av punches+2-Amend personals+2-Av multis+1-Amend wordplay+1-Amend complexity+1-tie originality+1-tie cornyness-2-none enjoyment+1-Amend overall------Avalon (+5)....Amend (+8)----Winner..no hate...can u please drop honest vote in link below..thanx... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97367 |
aight i thought i would drop a vote on this...i've read through it few times would you believe...knowin avs battles i thought he would come harder...he had some great wordplay, i do like his style it is interesting...something different then everyone else, i think thats great...i do think amend came really well..at the start there was some nice wordplay, as i got into the middle lines i felt the punches and was amazed by some of the wordplay...i think av had some nice personals...it was a close battle...i do think amend had better wordplay and punches which took me on this.....
vote=amend great battle and props to both....i really enjoyed the read... plz hit up the link below on a honest vote thanx yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1 |
Well, After 7 Trys I Beat You Av. YAY ;)
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damn close battle in some ways....but Avalon had some lines that i've seen before..no hate to ya duke....but some of ur lines were kinda old...for example
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honestly...i think Amend got this with harder punches and better creativity and wordplay....here's the line that killed it Quote:
BREAKDOWN Punches - Amend (hit harder) Flow - Avalon Complexity - Amend Personals - Tie Creativity - Amend RhymeScheme - Amend Vocab - Tie Structure - Avalon Wordplay - Amend (more updated wordplay) Overall - in my honest opinion Amend got this like i said just with much harder punches and a more original/creative verse....good read from u both though...no hate..just a vote.. peace 4:20 |
Damn KO on The Polls, 4-1 Though
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yeah i voted....drop an honest vote with the rather quikcness please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97367 |
Uppin This To End And Polls Updated. .
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Opening: Amend
Punches: Avalon Personals: Avalon Flow: Amend Wordplay: Avalon Vocab: Amend Structure: Avalon Closing: Avalon Overall: Avalon I expected to see more from you amend but oh well good batttle.. |
ROFL...I got this shit backwards on my vote..I read wrong verse for avalon and amend...So can a mod please change my vote to amend...
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good battle...
Punches: Av Wordplay: Av Flow/Structure: Amend Multis: Amend Closer:Av Verdict: AV Good battle. Dope shit..Funny to read...even though long... Peace |
opener amend
closer AV punches av harder hitting personals av definitly wordplay amend overal av harder punches nicer personals and that is word |
Avalon - I was really feeling some of the punches in there. I thought it could have used a little more personals, but the verse was still good. Your didnt fall off, it was consistant. Nice wordplay, and use of vocab. It was an all around good diss, it had my attention through the whole thing.
Amend - You had some punches that were real nice, but not as much as Avalon had. You had way better word play I thought. Your vocab was good, not to much and not to little. Both of you had good structure. I liked your opener, and thats what is making this a hard decision. Vote - Avalon Conclusion - I was feeling his punches more. I felt he brought more intensity into the battle. Amend, still did a great job. So I give my props to both of you. But, I gave it to avalon because of Harder punches. That is what I though... Nice Battle to Both... ( Can you please return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig. It would be much appriciated... ) OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
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that makes it 1-5(Amend) lol@only a minute between whitelightning and emerge. . . Mods fix the polls and close this please |
Hey Amend,
Can you please return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig. I would like to know your opinion in that battle, much appriciated. UPPIN |
real vote right here...
good battle between both no doubt....but long story short...Av took it....he had better punches which were delivered well consistantly....thats real. vote-avalon |
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