Reborn2KillAgain vs. Focus'd
 

Rules as they were in Bitch Slapped...

300 + posts to vote.
NO EXCEPTIONS

14 - 16 lines

All regular rules apply.

He agreed to spit first.

Check in and drop.

I'll be here.

Good luck

checkin in.........i will drop soon .................................................. .................................

For sure....who want war with this angry young black man/
Got babies by three different ladies and they all LITTLE MEN/
So trust that I rhyme with the STRENTGH OF MY SONS, indeed/
So let me impregnant this thread and birth a new style like a SEED/
Dis nigga still think u can surpass me? you’re higher than helicopters/
You aint got the patience to outlast this lyrical doctor
rhyme M.D. mixing styles together getting reactions like chemistry/
Ya phony alchemy imitates but doesn’t flatter me /
Metaphors and similes assault and batter ya whole anatomy/
Ya minds frail and tattered g, bout as powerful as a 9 volt battery/
Kats as wack as reborn end up tragedies/
Tryin to battle me? couldn’t win in scrabble, If I spotted ya my whole vocabulary/
My styles vary that’s why every adversaries temporary/
Ya need balls to come at me, ya bout 1/10th my left testicle/
If ya had alzheimers I’d still be unforgettable/
Inept vegetable leave ya rotting in a trash receptacle/
Think you the NEW rap DON? hit you with roast beef that’s indigestible/
Ya bit off more than you can chew, I’m spittin on you like my fans do/
Ya shit is bland dude, in fact most cats cant even stand you/
Now it’s agreed that I succeed where sucka punks fail/
I just ripped ya up like fuckin junk mail/

damn that shit was tight

reborn that's gonna be hard to beat

I'll be back to vote when reborn drops, hit this up:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=73429

sorry to freepost, there's already been seven votes on this and it won't close... hit it up and vote honestly

That was nice stuff, man...

Kudos

Lemme throw my reply...

Be with ya in just a bit.

Hang tight.

Ya can't 'Focus'. How ya gonna see? Ya just aim and fire unsuccessfully.
Blind as a bat, can't aim ya gat, leashed up like ya sig cuz ya brain holds ya back.
Spittin from 'da end of imagination' couldn't be a better explanation for why this man failed evaluation...
Out of ideas, only flow is diarrhea, ya couldn't spit any flatter if ya spit out tortillas.
I do 'fear the beast within you'...it's looking at my zipper wantin it ta undo...
Back off, get off, but hey, not that way, don't wanna get hit with ya homo spray.
I understand why ya full of embarrassment ya whole life is a Jamie Kennedy experiment...
Constant humiliation ya foundation gives you the formation of someone in need of donations.
You disturb with verse absurd, jumbled letters that barely form words, only way they'd elevate is if ya tied them ta birds...
Despite what ya heard ya just a net nerd gettin served like a fucked up martini shaken AND stirred.
It's like ya road map to glory got all ripped cuz ya headed for fame but found Bum Fucked Egypt...
Ya rhymes come unglued with delivery all crude so readin them is painful like seeing Roseanne Barr nude.
Don't matter ya religion, I made the decision and hurled incisions at ya eyes that cut up ya vision...
Ya copped Goliath's misfortune cuz I've killed you in biblical proportions like God himself performed ya abortion.

whoa focus'd came through with powerful punches it's gonna be a tough decision if reborn comes through the same good luck to both of y'all and hit my battles up thun aight ~1~

dat wuz real "cute" reborn good spit.....uppin for votes............................................. .........................................

uppin for votes............................................. ............lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok...

Fine...

Fuck it!

Let everyone vote...

Post count be damned.

Let's just do this.

And be done with it.

Peace

ya gys are obviously not newbs

Props to both

But i mean Focused killed u dawg

thanks it

can ya'll vote on this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74346

lets keep da votes commin.........................uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! good lookin mob!!!!!

uppin
uppin

focus has the rhymes but no content, no punches or fuck all, born2kill definatly took this battle............................................ ......................

good lookin com we need more votes.................................... uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dont sleep on dis we both spit some shit......so vote on it uppin !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[2]dont sleep on dis we both spit some shit......so vote on it uppin !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo wuz up can i get a fair vote here???????????????????? drop a link and i will vote fairly in ur battle...................................but vote

2]yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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man i cant even battle till i get these 3 open battles closed so wuz up can i get some votes on dis or what? uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wuz up my fellow Mc's can i get some votes here.............................................. ....uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote=focused

simply cuz i thought he had an overall bette verse than the other cat


Focused please hit this up, READ BOTH VERSES cuz im gettin mad dr/ votes, thanks man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=1

Yo i aint votin on no more battles till peeps start votin on mine,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so idf you want me to bote you know what to do...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75456
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75326

Yo this battle Goes to Focuesd.............. i had to read his twice to "get it" on some lines But over all it was Phat..................



the other dude was off the heezy too.........

but im'a go wit tha gut and hall

Vote Focused

reborn takes it, better punchs, thats the only reason............................................ .................................................. ...............................

aaaaaaaand yes^^

man i cant even battle till i get these 3 open battles closed so wuz up can i get some votes on dis or what? uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the battle that refuses to end...

It will haunt us forever.

Never to be closed.

No matter how many days pass.

I miss the good ole days when you could have 4-5 battles a day cuz they were voted on that fast.

People used to participate.

Damn , this was tight , I read one of Rb2K's spits last week , and he on da MONEY in a big way , so after Reading Focused verse 1st , I admit as good as it was , I was thinking RB's would beat him , but HONESTLY I think Focus'd held the court here , he had alittle bit of everything mixed in his verse , and eventhough in my heart I was hoping to vote for RB , I think Focus had the better verse , so he gets ma vote .........FULL PROPS TO BOTH , your post counts may show your Newbies , but yu both spit like VETS , no beef , just the way I saw this one.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75277
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73771

If you could drop an honest vote on dese , I would appreciate it , they were started like 4 days ago , and Im having a hard time getting votes

CE

yo man if i could vote i would and dont be free posten on the post wen you vote and put ya explanation down then put ya links down it will be appreciated by all of us thanx nigga holla

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
ya gys are obviously not newbs

Props to both

But i mean Focused killed u dawg

thanks it

can ya'll vote on this please

I can't poll vote cuz im in his crew but im just pointin out the obvious...

yo lets go wit da votin........why battle if yal aint gonna vote? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wuz up dont stop votin dis close to a winner............................lets go uppin for votes here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
[B]ya gys are obviously not newbs

Props to both

But i mean Focused killed u dawg

werd, focus took this shit with ease, better punches, wordplay, flow, overall better verse.....

poll vote- focused..


yep...