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Jay Pana 08-19-03 01:46 PM

EnVy Ny vs. KH
 
16 line max
no crew, dr, hate, beef, or any otha bull
no feeding or recycling
due tonite
atleast 400 posts to vote

come get ur loss...

EnVy Ny 08-19-03 03:01 PM

checkin hur...verses due by 12 tonite

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Jay Pana 08-19-03 11:23 PM

blah...quick key...

Spoken Legend?, Seriously I Can't Be Hearin This...
When It Comes To Verses, Nobody's Fearin His...
It's Like A 6th Sense How I'll Leave My Mark On His Record...*
He's Spit More Played Lines Than Customers At Eckerds...
Tryna Change Rules To Your Advantage, You'll Still Receive A Loss...
You Beatin Me Is Like Ya Crew Bein Established, A Lost Cause...
You're Not Gonna Win, Sorry, Tha Chances Are Mini...
Only Way He's Legendary Is If He Lives In Tha Same Building As Biggie...**
Your Punches Are As Played As Ya Harlem Shake Avy, Sadly...
You Want This Battle Over With Quickly?, I'll Do It Gladly...
I'll Hand You A Loss Faster Than Lethal Injections...
You're Wack, You Do Nothing But Add On To Tha Congestion...
You're Changin Styles? Here's A Suggestion, Quit Rappin...***
Quick! Answer Tha Door, Your 6th Loss Is Tappin...

My Verse For Dummies:
*6th sense= 6th loss
**He's from brooklyn...biggie is from there
***On AIM he said he switched his style

EnVy Ny 08-20-03 12:51 AM

BROOKLYN AND RB STAND UP U GUNNA LOVE DIS 1

Knuckle is like old men that dont take viagra his wordz dont seem to rise to the occasion
People with hemroids are the only ones that give you a ovation
They say you are what you eat Knuckles mouth must be full of verses
Like fat people trying on small shoes Knuckles verse gets exert forces
Hes gonna reject the loss like cats takin a shower
Knuckle seems to lose cents (sense) when he speaks I bet the man was asking 13th Disciple for help every hour (payphone-lose cents wen talkin)
Similiar to Muhhamad Ali's first pair of boxing gloves he starting to get out~dated~hits
Imprint my knuckles on ur head is what his name meant having him sayin Envy please quit
Regime is so wack costin me my last loss like a chicken slaughters ill break ya neck
Break into the humane society n kill you all so u can no longer be classified as vets
Knuckles is gonna be like being trapped in a game of chess after dis battle hes not makin move
Brooklyn knows ill use your own punch and blow ur mind to ur brain runs smooth

NOW FUCK U NIGGA 10 LINES

READ IT SLOW N LOOK AT HIS NAME IF U DONT UNERSTAND

bak to my old self its a wrap...

Jay Pana 08-20-03 12:57 AM

^lol...i love stretched bars

looks like sumbody can't count...u spit 12 lines...

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EnVy Ny 08-20-03 01:02 AM

LOL stretched? no there just complete sentences and I miscounted my bad...


UPPIN FO VOTES

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Meks 08-20-03 01:05 AM

punches - envy
flow - tie
vocab - envy
personals - KH
overall - vote - envy

drop a vote on this battle, being slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74333

13th Disciple 08-20-03 01:22 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by EnVy Ny
BROOKLYN AND RB STAND UP U GUNNA LOVE DIS 1

Knuckle is like old men that dont take viagra his wordz dont seem to rise to the occasion
People with hemroids are the only ones that give you a ovation

^WTF?! was this line about?....wack!...seriously!
They say you are what you eat Knuckles mouth must be full of verses
Like fat people trying on small shoes Knuckles verse gets exert forces

umm..no...his mouth must be full of verses?!....u wack fag!
Hes gonna reject the loss like cats takin a shower
Knuckle seems to lose cents (sense) when he speaks I bet the man was asking 13th Disciple for help every hour (payphone-lose cents wen talkin)

not only was this wack...u had to explain ur wackness...and
why in gods good name is this shit extended so fuckin much?


Similiar to Muhhamad Ali's first pair of boxing gloves he starting to get out~dated~hits
Imprint my knuckles on ur head is what his name meant having him sayin Envy please quit

this is why u wanted to battle in frontlines so bad...becuz wack
lines like this will get noticed as good...seriously...try rappin audio
to those loooonnnngggg ass lines!...it'd be impossibe


Regime is so wack costin me my last loss like a chicken slaughters ill break ya neck
Break into the humane society n kill you all so u can no longer be classified as vets

where does this wackness originate from?....u can't actually be
this fuckin wack!...i mean...ur punches is so fuckin lame


Knuckles is gonna be like being trapped in a game of chess after dis battle hes not makin move
Brooklyn knows ill use your own punch and blow ur mind to ur brain runs smooth

at this point....i'm convinced u got dick ryders...cuz u honestly
suck pure grade asshole

NOW FUCK U NIGGA 10 LINES

best punch in ur verse

READ IT SLOW N LOOK AT HIS NAME IF U DONT UNERSTAND

..still explainin ur self i see...

bak to my old self its a wrap...



all in all....i know....that this is pure fuckin garbage...and if
yall actually read this shit...u will see it too....damn...what the fuck
is he even doin wit a vote?!....punches make no sense...extended
then a bitch.....damn....am i the only one seeing this?...Envy......
u should be banned for droppin this verse

EnVy Ny 08-20-03 01:24 AM

well since ur a herb u think dat way lol ur boi was pure trash from the streets no wordplay or vocab........but good battle

UPPIN FO VOTES

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Axiom 08-20-03 01:30 AM

Aye 13... blah, whatever, you're cool and all... but don't come into the thread and swayin' the vote for knuckle head... i could disect his verse and point out all it's flaws too but i won't cuz that's vote swaying, you guys always bitchin bout stretched lines... damn, that's his style leave em alone.

Ehm... back to the votes.

youngblood 08-20-03 01:47 AM

yo this is bullshit, the regime alwayz swayin and votin 4 each other, they always think their crew beats everybody....lmao,let me break it down

punches-envy
flow-both
complexity-KH
creativity-envy
wordplay-envy
multi's-kh
meta-s-both
comedy-both
overall-envy ny

this is not a hate vote at all, i just know what i see in my eyes and i sure everyone else will also, but good battle ya'll

stay up

Jay Pana 08-20-03 01:25 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Ambiguous
Aye 13... blah, whatever, you're cool and all... but don't come into the thread and swayin' the vote for knuckle head... i could disect his verse and point out all it's flaws too but i won't cuz that's vote swaying, you guys always bitchin bout stretched lines... damn, that's his style leave em alone.

Ehm... back to the votes.


^i don't bitch bout stretched lines...put that shit as an audio and u'll see it ain't gonna flow to well...i don't get ppl to sway votes for me either...if i wanted votes to be swayed i'd do it myself but i don't even do that...so shut tha fuck up and stay out my thread...

AMEND 08-20-03 01:30 PM

Punches- Envy
Flow- Knuckle
Personal- Knuckle
Structure- Knuckle
Multi's- None
Wordplay-Envy

This Was Overall A Wak Battle, Knuckle Head Had A Little Verse With Few Played Concepts But Alot Of Personals, Envy Didnt Have As Many Personals But His Overall Verse Was A Lil Better Except For The Fact That The Flow Was Fucked Up With The Strecthed Bars. . .And Thats What Did It For Me, I Hate Stretched Shit Vote Knuckle Head

Sir Cedrych 08-20-03 01:34 PM

could yall post a vote in this battle and i pormise to hit this one up wit a vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74357

thxs

IceBerg420 08-20-03 01:39 PM

Personally I think NVNY won this shit, despite the vote swaying by the 13th dickhead up there..........He had some great personals in there and 13th made it worse by postin his 2 cents, which made his punch seem a lil more true............Overall his punches were hittin harder.....The hardest Punch Knucks had to me was that Biggy line..................Other than that he had a nice flow goin though..........

Vote = Envy

Can Ya'll drop a vote on my battle against Tru Skillz, its a 10 line battle should be easy to evaluate.........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74354

EnVy Ny 08-20-03 01:55 PM

Amend structure shouldnt determine the whole battle but whatever....we all have our opinions

UPPIN FO VOTES

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13th Disciple 08-20-03 02:16 PM

wasn't swayin....just pointin out the obvious.......but eh.........
its the frontlines...didn't expect no less....and iceberg....u walkin
on thin ice......i think i'm forseeing a slip........

IceBerg420 08-20-03 02:20 PM

4 see this dick bitch....................13th dickhead
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NewPort 08-20-03 03:14 PM

yo this is bullshit, the regime alwayz swayin and votin 4 each other, they always think their crew beats everybody....lmao,let me break it down

punches-envy
flow-both
complexity-KH
creativity-envy
wordplay-envy
multi's-kh
meta-s-both
comedy-both
overall-envy ny

this is not a hate vote at all, i just know what i see in my eyes and i sure everyone else will also, but good battle ya'll

stay up




^^ Exactly

EnVy Ny 08-20-03 03:19 PM

Knuckle looks like you gotta go back and tell 13th your mission IS INCOMPLETE nucca

UPPIN FO VOTES GIMME MY WIN

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Jay Pana 08-20-03 03:20 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ThuG WhytE
yo this is bullshit, the regime alwayz swayin and votin 4 each other, they always think their crew beats everybody....lmao,let me break it down

punches-envy
flow-both
complexity-KH
creativity-envy
wordplay-envy
multi's-kh
meta-s-both
comedy-both
overall-envy ny

this is not a hate vote at all, i just know what i see in my eyes and i sure everyone else will also, but good battle ya'll

stay up




^^ Exactly


^doesn't count...come up with ur own shit herb...

An']['hropoLog¥ 08-20-03 03:24 PM

Vote=Envy

Nice flow, kida strecthed his bars but it went together like eminem, Nice punches and similes and with sum multies
good shit Enve

other kid, ya flow is kinda choppy, dont make yo lines so off, like dont make oone sentence long, then the other way shorter cuz it throws it off ya know, try to even this out, ya got potential dog

anyway can ya'll hit this up in return for this feedback, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=1

James Bondage 08-20-03 03:24 PM

Knuckle Head owned, easily!

More effectiove lines / creative punches / wordplay, less played, less stretched, 6th loss lines basically killed this newbie - lol.

Vote: Knizzucle Head

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NewPort 08-20-03 03:25 PM

lol fine...

Knuckle u came nice.. no doubt of that.. good shit.. just
that envy seemed to come harder than normal and i was
expectin this to be close (which it was) but envy edged it
out.. like u spit suttin and envy came back just a lil harder
than you did...

Vote - envy

Taktik 08-20-03 03:41 PM

Vote KH

Seen it like this

punches = both
flow = Knuckle head
complexity = complexity
wordplay = envy
personals = knuckle
structure = knuckle
overall=KH

Envy your lines were stretched.......but you took wordplay and complexity.....punhces were even......KH took the rest........personals were tight......structure better......short lines
Vote KH

EnVy Ny 08-20-03 04:16 PM

^^ ok.... everyone has there own view....

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pot1ent 08-20-03 04:37 PM

This is a tite battle...i'ma break it down

Envy ny...you had mad nice wordplay and this strengthened your punches, liked all of them as usual...your flow was a bit off tho but this didn't impact on my decision cuz it wasn't too bad...you lacked persoanls but used the hard punches instead...dope verse

KH...your flow was tite with some wordplay, you came with way more personals than envy, i felt his verse more for the reason his punches hit harder..and yes i no you used personals but his had some real dope lines that was real consistent...your verse was tite

overall...this is a very good battle...props to both battlers...hard to compare the two styles but thats my opinion..no hate

vote-envy ny

EnVy Ny 08-22-03 03:17 AM

Here's the cheap Regime shit taking away my win........You need to give me my righful win back for real...

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