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WurdzOfWizdom VS Soldier (600+ posts 2 vote)
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~2 vote you must have at least 600 posts and have been signed up for at least 2 months~ no crew votes no hate votes no d.r votes 10 lines mix.. 15 lines max no bold characters or quoting.. so voters be on tha lookout 4 inconspicuous meta's I spit 1st.... Words has 40 mins 2 spit after me or str8 DQ. No bitchin/ herbing in my thread :) LeTz Go..... |
*adds rules to his post he forgot to put....
no dashes - - - - - ok and all votes must be explained no quoteing votes ALSO NO STRECHED LINES OR BARs...IF SO...u will be forced to delete them this is my check in ^^^ WurdzOfwizdom...aimed me and told me to put that hes still banned |
*No explanation of lines.. punches.. meta's or whuteva ok*
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Wordz Of Wisdom....lol w/e... we kno' who u R...
This fool RE registered thinkin' he'd get points for clever word play.. The best things in life are free? Then what do we owe for reading your verse, 'Aye?/ Thinkin' he sicker now, its like wurdz can't come out once i hit his mouth.... This nigga clowns, you wouldn't be on a .. winnin' Regime.. if u hacked.. um lets say.. Chrits Account! .. haha/ Wurdz's beginning was bleek; Since you lost strip poker you havent had a ....winning streak... Sorry! Battling wacks is not right, n last time he ... dropped nice... he had attitude counsellors listening as he begined to speak!/ ~::Ok Switch Up On This Always Spittin 2nd.... Skurrd 2 Post....Alias Homo::~ Soldier Advance And Attack, Give Wordz No Chance To React To Enhance And ComeBack, I Put A Trance On This Cat And Crush This Wanabe Herb Like Fake Plants Gettin Smashed!.../ No Respect Given', Il Staple His Vocal Chords To His Lungz Until He Holds His Breath To Them, No Interlect In Him, My Lines Punch Out His Back Teeth ..So...No, His Wordz Dont Posses Wisdom!..../ Old Vet? Nah Nothin's Left To Fight, But He Still Makes Dent In,e, Opponents... He's Repped To Bite! His Wisdom Wrecked By Might, I Spit & Murder Words... Like Death And Die../ He's Banned And Even His New Rep. Is Doomed N He Mad, N After Years Of Spittin 1st This Fool Still Booming To Brag, I Subtract Health... You Now Showin Less Sign Of Life Then Funeral Ads..../ OK your 40 MORE MINUTES to post start now ... *cough bitch*.... |
OK ur up...
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WurdzOfWizdoms verse......................................
^i cant belive this nigga like broke half the rules...he used dashes...--- then had the neve to break another and HAVE STRECHED LINES OUT THIS WORLD....UR A EMBARISMENT to RB...u should be banned..for being so wack...ur sapose to be a vet..vets dont use STRREEECCCHHEDDDDD LIIINNEEEESSSSSS...wack fuck call me a soldier two,so this battles even,well post verses in camo ur swingin blanks,like test rounds at stations,ur emty with ammo just cuz u got 1000 posts dont make u a vet,ur still a newb and its not cuz im older make way for d/r,everyone knows hear comes groupies when they see posts by soldier he needs to know that wack rhymes,cauz wacknes and will be producing his loss not even masterbating with a crusifc will help save him,thats just missusing the cross he only beats newbs,so i presume hes never beatin a vet call me hungry for wackness,so i guess ill be eating his text u couldnt toss sickness,if u threw test tubes with aids so ur retireing,but u couldnt finish in a blast if u stood next to granades u wouldnt need to retire,id bann u,if this battle was for ur slip like hiv infectants,u could at least retire then,knowing ur sick ill pull his verse out his ass,so try not to faint kid n put his bouws under vizion to prove that he aint shit |
LOL ok but erm.... Carcuz ask him wher i used dashes????
and he sed this not even masterbating with a crusifc will help save him,thats just missusing the cross that line was not more stretched than ANY of mine lmao u suck (not u carcuz lmao) votesssssssssssss |
I'ma just holla at yall with my opinion...but now i have 600 posts..i'm poll a vote
...Solider you had some nice wordplay in your lines, Wurdz seemed to have more punches and i preferred his lines more...Wurdz seemed to edge on flow, his wasn't too great but neither was soliders...they were a lil stretched but i seen your battles a few time and sorta got used to it... solider i liked this punches..best line you dropped No Respect Given', Il Staple His Vocal Chords To His Lungz Until He Holds His Breath To Them, No Interlect In Him, My Lines Punch Out His Back Teeth ..So...No, His Wordz Dont Posses Wisdom!..../ wurdz i liked this punches..gaawwd daammn...best line you dropped he only beats newbs,so i presume hes never beatin a vet call me hungry for wackness,so i guess ill be eating his text By skill i think wurdz edged Solider but it was close, by choice i liked wurdz more...oNe..Peace, my 2 centz..that all. ...not my 2 centz anymore...it's a vote vote-wurdz |
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Soldier This fool RE registered thinkin' he'd get points for clever word play.. The best things in life are free? Then what do we owe for reading your verse, 'Aye?/ okay personal.. not very tho Thinkin' he sicker now, its like wurdz can't come out once i hit his mouth.... This nigga clowns, you wouldn't be on a .. winnin' Regime.. if u hacked.. um lets say.. Chrits Account! .. haha/ Good Personal.. Good Line Wurdz's beginning was bleek; Since you lost strip poker you havent had a ....winning streak... Sorry! Battling wacks is not right, n last time he ... dropped nice... he had attitude counsellors listening as he begined to speak!/ Sum Good Wordplay.. The Rest Fell Soldier Advance And Attack, Give Wordz No Chance To React To Enhance And ComeBack, I Put A Trance On This Cat And Crush This Wanabe Herb Like Fake Plants Gettin Smashed!... Good Flow.. Really No Good Punch Tho No Respect Given', Il Staple His Vocal Chords To His Lungz Until He Holds His Breath To Them, No Interlect In Him, My Lines Punch Out His Back Teeth ..So...No, His Wordz Dont Posses Wisdom!..../ Good Wordplay.. Nice Punch Old Vet? Nah Nothin's Left To Fight, But He Still Makes Dent In,e, Opponents... He's Repped To Bite! His Wisdom Wrecked By Might, I Spit & Murder Words... Like Death And Die../ Ehh okay He's Banned And Even His New Rep. Is Doomed N He Mad, N After Years Of Spittin 1st This Fool Still Booming To Brag, I Subtract Health... You Now Showin Less Sign Of Life Then Funeral Ads..../ Good Punch.. Nice Finisher Metas - 6/10 Flow - 6/10 Wordplay - 8/10 Punches - 8/10 Personals - 9/10 Total - 37/50 Overall - Naht Bad.. I've Seen Better.. but shit naht bad..If tha flow went wit harder hitting punches.. it would have upped your score.. personals really kicked in too play here.. The Wordplay worked in this battle.. good job WurdzOfWizdom call me a soldier two,so this battles even,well post verses in camo ur swingin blanks,like test rounds at stations,ur emty with ammo Ehh.. Basic Punch just cuz u got 1000 posts dont make u a vet,ur still a newb and its not cuz im older make way for d/r,everyone knows hear comes groupies when they see posts by soldier Flowed Well Here.. Nice Punch/Personal he needs to know that wack rhymes,cauz wacknes and will be producing his loss not even masterbating with a crusifc will help save him,thats just missusing the cross Failed Attept at the Wordplay.. but not too bad he only beats newbs,so i presume hes never beatin a vet call me hungry for wackness,so i guess ill be eating his text Decent Punch u couldnt toss sickness,if u threw test tubes with aids so ur retireing,but u couldnt finish in a blast if u stood next to granades Wordplay Wurked.. Nice Punch u wouldnt need to retire,id bann u,if this battle was for ur slip like hiv infectants,u could at least retire then,knowing ur sick Decent Punch.. second line is quite played tho ill pull his verse out his ass,so try not to faint kid n put his bouws under vizion to prove that he aint shit Coulda Been Better.. A lil on the weak side Metas - 7/10 Flow - 6/10 Wordplay - 8/10 Punches - 9/10 Personals - 8/10 Total - 38/50 Overall - Good Hard-Hitting Punches helped you in this.. the wordplay wurked in most occasions.. and was nicer than that of the wordplay i seen in soldiers.. the personals were okay.. good battle none the less THA VOTE Soldier Shined in personals.. he had a lot of dirt on wurdz that he used to his advantage.. slowed a bit on the wordplay.. with off flow that didn't go well with his punches.. Wurdz took the punches category.. This Is where wurdz took tha cake.. He had sum good creativity.. So by a slight vote.. Wurdz gets my vote.. No hate Vote - WurdzofWizdom :) |
Yea exactly i'ma do this line by line so ya'll can see i explain stuff good lol...anyways
Soldier....my good friend This fool RE registered thinkin' he'd get points for clever word play.. The best things in life are free? Then what do we owe for reading your verse, 'Aye?/ Nice line...decent personal..but the "Aye" made it seem like you were just forcing out a rhyme Thinkin' he sicker now, its like wurdz can't come out once i hit his mouth.... This nigga clowns, you wouldn't be on a .. winnin' Regime.. if u hacked.. um lets say.. Chrits Account! .. haha/ Dope Line...personal hit..and was on point Wurdz's beginning was bleek; Since you lost strip poker you havent had a ....winning streak... Sorry! Battling wacks is not right, n last time he ... dropped nice... he had attitude counsellors listening as he begined to speak!/ Made me laugh...dunno why..maybe it was wack or funny..not sure...wordplay...bout all it had Soldier Advance And Attack, Give Wordz No Chance To React To Enhance And ComeBack, I Put A Trance On This Cat And Crush This Wanabe Herb Like Fake Plants Gettin Smashed!... Nice multis..besides that..just blah sorry No Respect Given', Il Staple His Vocal Chords To His Lungz Until He Holds His Breath To Them, No Interlect In Him, My Lines Punch Out His Back Teeth ..So...No, His Wordz Dont Posses Wisdom!..../ Nice wordplay..good punch..some multi's.dope line Old Vet? Nah Nothin's Left To Fight, But He Still Makes Dent In,e, Opponents... He's Repped To Bite! His Wisdom Wrecked By Might, I Spit & Murder Words... Like Death And Die../ Didn't get that line He's Banned And Even His New Rep. Is Doomed N He Mad, N After Years Of Spittin 1st This Fool Still Booming To Brag, I Subtract Health... You Now Showin Less Sign Of Life Then Funeral Ads..../ Good closer...was a decent punch and now on to my other good friend WurdzOfWizdom call me a soldier two,so this battles even,well post verses in camo ur swingin blanks,like test rounds at stations,ur emty with ammo Jus your normal everyday punch just cuz u got 1000 posts dont make u a vet,ur still a newb and its not cuz im older make way for d/r,everyone knows hear comes groupies when they see posts by soldier Nice personal...good line too he needs to know that wack rhymes,cauz wacknes and will be producing his loss not even masterbating with a crusifc will help save him,thats just missusing the cross Didn't appear how u wanted it to but it was nice he only beats newbs,so i presume hes never beatin a vet call me hungry for wackness,so i guess ill be eating his text Dope Line u couldnt toss sickness,if u threw test tubes with aids so ur retireing,but u couldnt finish in a blast if u stood next to granades Nice punch....nah..dope punch.. u wouldnt need to retire,id bann u,if this battle was for ur slip like hiv infectants,u could at least retire then,knowing ur sick One again...dope ill pull his verse out his ass,so try not to faint kid n put his bouws under vizion to prove that he aint shit I could see that you were jus wanting to finish ur verse... didn't really attempt to make this line as good as the others...but good finisher Explaination Both of ya'll did real good on dis battle...nice battle to the both of you... as always..soldier u had personals..u always seem to have them...punches were decent..most jus blah..wasn't one of ur best battles. wordplay wasn't on point really....sorry to say that my vote goes to wurdz...his punches killed it..his wordplay was on point to except for wit that one line.... VOTE- WurdzOfWizdom |
k people im unbanned...both verses are in as u can see..keep uping on this battle its pretty hot................................holla
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WurdzofWisdom is NOT Chrit....Chrit is back as Chrit...and
is in regime...................^this cat faked it worse than a 5 dollar whore wit a 2 inch dick prospect |
^man me n him are boys...this is not chrit i admit but...thas my boy...n i was jus helpin him tell he got back...but anyways
holla at cha boy keep upin on this shit |
WTF u an thug whyte r in same crew?
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he just joined 2 seconds ago....n he voted befor that...and no its not a crew...its just a label...for what we dOOOOOOOOOOO
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metaphors-both
punches-both personals-soldier humor-soldier complexity-wow wordplay-wow structure-wow creativityboth overall-wow good battle from u both no hate vote |
nah soldier.. no hate.. he asked me to that a day after i voted
so this was not a crew vote... it was all truth i dont dick ride no one |
WurdzOfWizdom Was Constantly Consistant With Punches, Flow, Multies, And Wordplay
It Was Some Close Shit But I Thought WurdzOfWizdom Got It He Came A Lil Harder Than Soldier vote-WurdzOfWizdom |
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