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ThugzDoCry v.s Mortality
Yo Lets Go
:My Rules: You Spit First 10-20 Lines No Feeding No Biteing No Recycling No Hate Votes No D/R Votes No Crew Votes No Stretching Lines No Specific Time Limit No Freeposting ECT. Drop When Ever You Can, Juss Dont take More Than 48 hrs! |
Lol sorry for the freepost
but TDC ur guna get ripped but this bitch Mortality he's pretty sick Ima peep this for sure guys it'll be hot but yo in the mean time can u hit this up,,,,,,its be appreciated... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74303 |
Damn Thugz
You Still Aint Posted What The Fuck Man Dont Take Forever .............................. .............................. .............................. |
Waitin On You Still
It's Been 2 Days Are You Gonna Spit Any Time Soon? .................................................. ...... .................................................. ...... .................................................. ...... |
is me spittin first LOL, imma post tommorow.....im off now.....srry thought you spitted first my bad.......ill spit tomorow....TEN lines max iite.......peace
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Mortalit, man while ya waitin do me a favor and drop a vote here on my battle against Cerebrex.......Shit funny as hell Doctor_J caught Cerebrex Biting Red Handedly LMAO.........Check it out and read the whole thread shit funny as hell....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2070#post722070 |
Fuck it , imma spit within 10 minutes cant sleep LOL, ........................
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LOL Good Luck!
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..::Ok...look::..
At first tell me how the fuck can you be tite, u dumb' to tellin your ''biography'' isWhite??//** Strapped on the bed with-hand-cuffs, and some duck-tape and ur ass still isnt close to tite// ..::This Could be Personal::.. You a 15 year old, in rap and real live you like a 'new-born-baby' jus rolled from your mother's cunt// This faggot-ass-wack-bitch jerks off when seeing sum spectacular acts just to pull-out-a-fukkin-stunt// ..::But Yo, It Dont Matter::.. Bitch u battlin me knowin u so wack!,fag couldnt even win, if ya'll gave him a ''licence for unlimited edits''// So you gonna regret it cuz you seein ur life flash before your eyes like ''the best of oprah'' openin credits// ..::Why??::.. I know why u call urself 'Mortal'-ity,it has a inner message you a pervert-little-kid, with an addiction to beastiallity// Or is it cuz u addicted to play-all-day-arcade-games,cuz in real 'kombat' you wont be able to give-a-decent-fatality// ..::Cuz U Always Stay Wack::.. Fuck Haters is your motto?, u tryin to get some followers?i give it one on a billion 'like winnin a million in the lotto'// U cant even flow decent,'stuck with a sailor on a boat rite in the wind', u always stay a faggot, livin in whats that place called, o yea.. 'Flint'?//** *He's 15 , and his biography is white LMAO, since when does that....means whuts ur colour? **He lives in Flint..... |
ITS not stretched LOL, i write on erm....writes block and then its not strechted.....it flows...well, so dont start bout its long.
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Psst you have 3 battles runnin you only can have 2 :O....................
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POST LOL, ................
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.::Gettin Started::.
Fuck Thugz-Do-Cry Juss Remember Bitch Thugz-Do-Die, If Ya Not Satisfied With This Disposition Of This Homocide Crime// Bitch Front Lines Is My Domain Maintain The Confidentiality Ta This Pussy's Pain// Ya Best Have 9-1-1 On Ya Speed-Dial Cuz I'm Killin You Wit A Straight Up Freestyle, Respond In Writing To The Aparent Recipiate Of Denile We Can Confir About Your Grieviance For My Tight Ass Rap Style// Yo Verse Is Juss Some More Of Front Lines Polution The Only Way To End This Is To Achieve A Pink Slip Resolution// .::*School Announcement*::. We Got A New Teacher Let Me Get Yo Attention Your Moms Your Principal And She Gave You A Suspension// We Gone Schedule A Meeting With The Parent And Principal...Wait They The Same Person The Shit Aint Convincable// !!Warning!! We Speakin Directly To The Person To Whom It May Concern! My Blood Type Electricity Will Leave You Shocked And Burnt// Depending On The Nature Submitted By Education This Kid Copy Writes Eminems "Waiting For The Revolation"// .::Finisher::. Voters Will Determan This Closed Or Open Session You May Hear My Testamony For The Proscedures Of Aggression// I Hope You Happy For My Demented Discretion I'm Gonna End This With Fuck ThugzDoCry For The Battle Completion// |
mortality took this some what easily....better punches...multis....wordplay....pretty much better everything....vote=mortality
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Mortality took wit punches.. but mortality
Heres A Few Tips.. 1.) You See How Vets Battle? Get Rid Of Your Stretched Lines 2.) Fuck the Bold 3.) Get Rid Of The Color 4.) Dont Forget The Quotes |
i cant poll vote ...but ill break it down 4 ya ne wayz.....
very good battle..... alright .... THUG...!! alrite u had an alright flow nothin special.. ur punches werent weak but they where like ok... u werent consistent...it took u half ur verse 2 just heat up... u did have pretty good vocab,and multies, all around an OK verse... Mortality> ur flow was pretty good...not the greatest but better then thugs ur punches where good and 2 the point..(but ive seen better) u where very consistent hit with strong punches and flow from start 2 finish/ all around better verse.. flow>mortality punches>mortality >multies>thug consistency>mortality enjoyment>mortlaity over all>mortality vote>mortality all though i cant poll vote....absolutely no hate or beef....just my opinion....great verses and good luck 2 the both of u |
Aight
I'm Gonna Take Your Advice Thug Whyte ................................... ................................... ................................... UPPIN |
lol damn i gotta give probs to both of u but my man mortality smoke ya man sry............. i vote for mortality sry man
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AIght nobody smoked nobody WTF it wus a close battle his fool above me didnt even read i guess!!!!!
ANYWAYZ Morty took this why: Punches Wordplay Consistancy and creativeness My 2Cents!!! i CAnt POLL vote need 100 POST!! But check my battle out and VOTE HONEST http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2672#post722672 |
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what more do i have to say otha then.. vote on this battle ya'll no d/r no hate.... everybody vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74719 |
UPPIN
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breakdown
punches mor flow thug worth readin both multies didnt see much both metas mort personals thug consistancyboth overall mortality good battle only thing i didnt like was the colors mortality used and boldin and shit but good battle tho .................................................. ................................................ |
FINALL UPPIN
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally posted by SiCkSiCkLy mortality took this some what easily....better punches...multis....wordplay....pretty much better everything....vote=mortality -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- couldnt say it better Mortality had it 4 lines in people ..resp.. |
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