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M.O.B vs Mentally Kursed (Murking)
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i'll spit first CHECK IN No feedin off my lines Peace.....................................goodluk haha |
checkin in ima spit tonite or tom cus i still gotta spit in anotha one of my battles
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oh yea and lets make it 5 bars or 10 lines the voters dont wanna read a essay
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Time To Murk You Son
Im Undestribable, I leave bitches "Lost and Drown" like the "Burmuta Tryangle" wit Lyrics that are Undefinanable// Fuck this bitch, his punch lines are like cheep Rubber condems, Their "Not very Reliable"// This kids Cursed Mentally, his werds put me "Fast to Sleep" like pharmacy "Night Quil"// He's Retarded wit weak Vocab and isn't able to display anythin Intalectual// You more annoyin then kids wit Pamflits standin at yo doorstep, Ya know, them religous Ja-hoves// (Jahova Witnesses) Why did you jump into this Battle ya just dug your Own hole, I think its a little too "Dangerous" for ya like "Old Gas Stoves"// Ya "played out" like 50 Cents "In The Club"// my styles are dirtier than unwashed Scrubs// you just a Herb, a Shrub// Do us a favour and Grab sumtin Electrical then Jump into the Tub// It says your 2 and O// So, ya battle biches wit weak vocab, plus Zero Talent and Flow// Tempt kids like me and ya wont succeed No mo cuz I'll apply Weight to yo shoulders heaveir than the Big Show// Have you gotten to 2nd base yet? Eva fucked a bitch Hard//? Of course not, ya probably still masterbaten usin Yo illegally Pirated Satellite Card// Its 2:30am N' im comin up wit shit off the Top my Dead// But I guess this bitch got tired cuz he got offline n' Went to Bed// What the fuck dawg why ya goin back on What ya Said// It Read you'd "spit by Tonite" In yo God damn "Bitch Slapped Thread"// Mental Fuck! Im "Beatin down on you" like the "Suns Rays"// Ima put an 'End' to this beginner like they did to 'Martha Stewarts Cooking Days'//............................. |
Too late kid i didnt get tha tmsg i was typen
UPpin....................................we want honest votes yall............... |
nice drop mob, i'll vote wen "mentally kursed" spits
peep this, honest vote :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::;; http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74412 |
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aight jus got on ima drop in a lil bit
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aight check it
Im amputatin your head so your neck will be the part you no longer feel// im peelin your lips wit a knife leavin open wounds on your face, lets see what herpes virus your mouth reveal// (herpes are around the lips) your rhymes are old and played like carsons appearance, on MTV daily, and live// Ill stab you in the esophagus wit a broken timer then see how long you can survive, blood excretin from your throat makin it impossible to be healed and body revived// ill send a bullet through your voice box so when you speak you always talk Holy// my verse is killin you like getting shot in the stomach, your gonna die slowly, your life isnt on a high rate so I made your spirit elevate lowly// lets go swimmin I made you a special pair of shoes made of rocks and cement// (drown) my punches strike hard leavin this bitch unconscious wit his skull cracked and his chest caved in like a dent// the only form of elevatin this hoe does is pushin down the up arrow key// you paid for your votes, hope theyre a 100% money back guarantee, you shoulda insured them for a one week warranty// (you still cant beat me) my punches connect quick like high speed internet from a DSL modem and cable// ill kick you in both your knees leavin your walkin ability will no longer enabled// |
sorry it took so long i was workin on two verses at once
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Correction
Herpes are on ur mouth, ur pussy ur cock and so on kid UPiin, nice first........................ |
lol yea i kno i wanted it tie into that bar thats why
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yo mentally kursed grounded this cat in all catagories in my opinion
better punhces wordplay dissing personals........mob had a nice drop and good flow but simply not enuff to touch his opponents verse vote=mentally kursed Drop a vote on this battle............honest votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74423 |
Dis was close as FUCK, but mobs personals is what won him the battle
Its 2:30am N' im comin up wit shit off the Top my Dead// But I guess this bitch got tired cuz he got offline n' Went to Bed// What the fuck dawg why ya goin back on What ya Said// It Read you'd "spit by Tonite" In yo God damn "Bitch Slapped Thread"// that right there Ill shiaaat to both femcees! |
uppin fo mo votes (2)
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IM GONNA HAVE TO VOTE MENTALLY CURSE I LIKED HIS SHIT BETTER
BETTER PUNCHES,FLOW,WORDPLAY,MULTIES CAN U GO DROP A HONEST VOTE ON THIS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7704#post771704 |
Im gettin sick of dick ryders and ppl who dont read the whole two verses
He had no punches, no wordplay, no metas, and no personals Just flow and Multi's, see if u would read the whole thing u would know u fuckin d/r's anyway still uppin |
][\/][.O.B won this in my opinion but the other dudes shit was hott 2 i was just kinda feelin OB more no hate......................UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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on my battles........................................... ...........................I got three rite know///////////////!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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MOBS - you still can't spell worth shit, and the old gas stoves line
was one of the weakest shit i've ever seen. nice close w/the martha stewart reference tho, that was tight Mentally - bad rhymes, plus the fact you had enough crap for 5 lines you tried to pimp as only 1 line, there was nothing there i would consider remotely original. i especially didn't like the herpes rhyme that was wack MOB gets my vote on this one |
lol ok thanks
peace out grim, i know wthat line was weak UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnNNNNNNNNNNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
MOBS - you still can't spell worth shit, and the old gas stoves line
was one of the weakest shit i've ever seen. nice close w/the martha stewart reference tho, that was tight Mentally - bad rhymes, plus the fact you had enough crap for 5 lines you tried to pimp as only 1 line, there was nothing there i would consider remotely original. i especially didn't like the herpes rhyme that was wack MOB gets my vote on this one ^^^ actually broke it down well with that yep |
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aight thanks fo votin yall uppin fo mo votes
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yea basically............drop a poll vote here please..1 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9714#post719714 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...7969#post717969 |
aight thanks for votin yall jus make ya own instead of quotin please uppin fo mo votes
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by Meks
[B]yo mentally kursed grounded this cat in all catagories in my opinion better punhces wordplay dissing personals........mob had a nice drop and good flow but simply not enuff to touch his opponents verse vote=mentally kursed word^^^ |
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