Meks vs. J~Dubya
 

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no c,h,dr votes, ***no votes under 350 posts***
no feeding
no recycling
20 mins to spit afta check in
i set up
u spit first


***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***
***no votes under 350 posts***

dogg i said i didnt wanna battle u cause i didnt want to spit 1st i said it a lil befo u posted this so let it drop to tha bottom enless u gonna spit 1st

i'll fuckin spit furst............................................. .checkin in....................due 20 mins?..................all other rules apply

ight coo
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U spittin a catastrohpy, u'll never acquire tha mastery it takes........
U think winnin this battle wit blasphemy u makin'a mistake, this is 2003 but i'll still have burnt at'a stake//1

Ya throwin punches like u advertisin for "nike", u "just do it".........
"Bestowin no effort" and it's not surprisin-not even slightly, u can't "bust fluent"//2

Ya need'a treat ya "rap skill" like a dood u "chasin afta", u must "persue'it"........
U'll bleed at ya feet as i'm choosin to "hack ill", ya talent is grounded off tha street like tha 13 yr old chic caught usin "that pill"*//3 *(Birth Control)

U spit "transparent, scripted and played lines", u couldn't "express ya mind wit bold, creative rhymes"................
Ma "hands tearin", ur "depicted shirade signs", wouldn't be tha "best of ya kind" if u were "gold", cuz all u did wuz "plated mines"//5

I see u hated, and that's fine, eliminated fairly and now u wanna whyne........?
An estimated "Max Fine", wen i degrated u barely by a little piece of twine, hung by dental floss to what u spit out ya teeth couldn't intertwine//6

hit this up honestly and ill hit this up................................................ ................................................

check in.....................................and drop.............................................. .................................................. .............20 mins.............................................. .................................................. ...

no sohw?????????? wats tha deal...........................??????????????????? ????????????????????????????????ya way ova due dawg.................ppl stop fuckin duckin and prewriting man..............

upppnnnnnn........for no show votes..........??????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????

wtf dogg i juss spitted in a battle so wait dogg i gotta think of some shit damn and no show time limit is 24 hours thats set by a mod so i got 24 hours to spit since u dropped
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yo i'm brain-dead and tired ill spit in tha morning dont post no more in here till afta i spit cause ur blowin up are thread wit freepostin

LMAO @ him ducking you too.....hahaha......i told kid 15 minutes...and he took an hour.......then posted twice as much as me.........fuckin herb.....hahaha..........ayo meks.....hit me and j-dubya's battle up.......P C Z

yea he duckin...............and writin, all this tyme, and i'm still gone murk you??/
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This niggaz structure is lop-sided, he got weak punches but first u gotta find-it/1
My rhyme's are mentally-effective to kill-slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit//2

Ur punches aint affective im covered in heavy metal and you couldn't lift-me/3
If u was on hormone's to take 50 to blast bullets & i'll disappear or shape shift quickly//4

Ur punches feel like i been gone 4 a long time cause they miss me/5
U couldn't spit fire if u was a cartoon character eating spicy chilli//6

Next time you wanna try an threaten me, spell my name correctly/7
U called hooked on Phonics, while i'm steadily spewin hot rhymes, dissin a net freak//8

Dont test me, cuz ill send you to hell quicker than a jet black Elvis Presley/9
I see your CD, it says dont shelf me, so i stomp it to shreds smaller than your Iq test reads//10

U think u can win u'll have me laughin like when you try an impress bitches wit your lyrical ability/11
Cocain like Hyndrical Amphetamines, is what u were on typin this cylindrical instablity//12

-uppin 4 votes-

uppin 4 votes

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let me break it down....

flow-j~dubya
punches-tie but a lil on dub's side
structure-j~dubya got dis
multies-no one
creativity-j~dubya
overall-jdubya got dis in every catorgory

vote=j~dubya

fav. bars....

(1)This niggaz structure is lop-sided, he got weak punches but first u gotta find-it/1
My rhyme's are mentally-effective to kill-slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit//2

(2)Ur punches feel like i been gone 4 a long time cause they miss me/5
U couldn't spit fire if u was a cartoon character eating spicy chilli//6

sorry to freepost but dont that vote not count ^^^^^ cus he dont have 350 posts lol damn people yall gotta read the rules ALONG eit the verses lol im ghost

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uppin 4 votez plz
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the doc explained this perfectly

j got dis wit punches, creativity, and flow
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nice battle yall

Vote=J, this was close tho
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J had good flow anlong wit hard hittin blows YO!

dis was PHAT, Mkes I seen u sdo betta shit nigga!!

peace outz

uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 votes
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This Was Some Close Ass Shit
You Both My Boys So I Can't Vote
But Damn That Was ILL As Fuck
Props to ya


hit this up ya'll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74551

uppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnn fo sum mofuckin vote plz....................
drop a link we'll hit back yo battle............................................ .........,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

damn both yall was ill

it's hard to vote

i'd say j~dub got dis

his punches were funny, nice like perfect flow he got meks by like 30% in every catorgorie...

yall should get a crew

it would be ill

nicely said but i'll still explain...

punches-j
flow-j
creativity & metaphors-tie
multies-tie

overall vote-j

damn j u elevated since i last visted da site u makin me wanna get active again