Me Vs Iceberg420
 

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drop first
now!

HaiKu Who-knew u would go back to ya old ways/1
Stayed wit Regime, Cuz MiC FuRRy pussy ass got played/2
Couldn't stand to see 2 losses on his record, so he ran/3
Plus 13th was tellin everybody HaiKu Cross Dresses as a man/4
Got-damn, shit's-true Look at Hai-ku's Fuckin Sig/5
"Raping NewB's since April 03".....hmm I bet U did/6 (LoL)
Just Rapin all the lil kids, HaiKu's a very sick FuCK/7
'My Mouth' is str8 iLL........while yours Just "Sucks"/8 (Get it)
Well Guess-what MiC FuRRy's wont come back if U losE again/9
Plus a 3rd loss will settle-in worse than the second pimpin/10

Sorry I didn't key earlier man, I was drunk as hell and just gottin back from the club......So I went to sleep........But Good Luck...No Beef, I gotz respect fa ya lil homey......

U Serious? Kid U gonna Stand There And Diss My Record Causes..
Have U Stopped To Admire Yourself? Less Wins and More Losses?
Consider Yourself Done With...Shipt To My Record Along With The Stocked...
It Must Be 4:20 Thru August, Cuz Its Obvious Why Your Wrtiers Blocked...
Its Heart-break To See, Record Gone Down The Shit and Pride Out Spilling
You Want In it The Back This Time? Cuz This is The Second Loss Im Deleviering...(yeah i beat em before...lol)
"Watch, While I Merk You.."? Its Funny How The Tables Turned
Except They Were Never The Wrong Way, Infact! They Never Were...
Your Level Stay Belows My Waist, Theres no Contest To Mine
..Keep Ur Skill Were It Belongs...Back in The Front Lines


...VVVToday....Ive noticed that he changed his whole 4:20 theme and his sig which said..."Watch, While I Merk You.... soo..that should explain some of the punches

Good shit........Lets get some votes up in here......................
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uppin guys, please drop a honest vote on this, thanks............................................ .................................................. ............

yo you both had some good shit but im not registered to vore...any way can ya go close this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72582

its been like 2 weeks and still not closed......aight peace

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Damnn both were nice....

punches----Ice
personals--Ice(siggy)
flow---haiku
multis---none>>>very weak guys
metta---ice
structure---haiku

Vote ice nice battle

lmao@ the uppins

Punches - Ice.. just
Personals - Ice
Wordplay - Haikuuuuuuuu
Flow - Haiku
Multis - none ^^agreed with the guy who posted above me
Meta's - Ice

Damn this was very close.. i think ice jus topped it tho.. word... close as hell tho.. ice got with personals really

OMg! this is bullshit. lol. soldier u do not vote on my battles. theres a strong fued between us and our crews and id be stupid as fuck to think ur gonna vote for me. This is dicked. lol

Damn I hate battlin in elite people act like they dont be wantin to vote & shit...........................Apprciate it soldier, even though it wasn't polled..........................

iceberg got this one

punches=ice
flow=h4iku
multies=none
metas=ice
wordplay=h4iku
structure=both easy to read
made me laugh more=ice
personals=ice

final vote=iceberg420

H4IKO=your shit was funny i liked your punches but in someplaces you just lost me

ICEBERG420=you made me laugh way hard i got stop just in a few places but i didnt mind that cause of your punches hit way hard

ok hears how i see it

HaiKu Who-knew u would go back to ya old ways/1
Stayed wit Regime, Cuz MiC FuRRy pussy ass got played/2
ok set up...weak punch
Couldn't stand to see 2 losses on his record, so he ran/3
Plus 13th was tellin everybody HaiKu Cross Dresses as a man/4
wasnt fealing this at allllllll
Got-damn, shit's-true Look at Hai-ku's Fuckin Sig/5
"Raping NewB's since April 03".....hmm I bet U did/6 (LoL)
nice set up..good punch
Just Rapin all the lil kids, HaiKu's a very sick FuCK/7
'My Mouth' is str8 iLL........while yours Just "Sucks"/8 (Get it)
good werdplay
Well Guess-what MiC FuRRy's wont come back if U losE again/9
Plus a 3rd loss will settle-in worse than the second pimpin/10
avrage punch...bad finisher

^^ ICE BERGS VERSE


U Serious? Kid U gonna Stand There And Diss My Record Causes..
Have U Stopped To Admire Yourself? Less Wins and More Losses?
nice setup ok punch
Consider Yourself Done With...Shipt To My Record Along With The Stocked...
It Must Be 4:20 Thru August, Cuz Its Obvious Why Your Wrtiers Blocked...
kinda streched...didnt feal it
Its Heart-break To See, Record Gone Down The Shit and Pride Out Spilling
You Want In it The Back This Time? Cuz This is The Second Loss Im Deleviering...(yeah i beat em before...lol)
kinda streched also..but avrage punch
"Watch, While I Merk You.."? Its Funny How The Tables Turned
Except They Were Never The Wrong Way, Infact! They Never Were...
good werd play and good punch
Your Level Stay Belows My Waist, Theres no Contest To Mine
..Keep Ur Skill Were It Belongs...Back in The Front Lines
nice setup...nice punch...nice finisher


no beef but this is how i saw it...i cant vote cuz i dont have enough posts...but i dont wanna see this dick riding going down..its bull shit...

punches:H
personals:H
Flow:I
setup:H
Creativty:H

Aight...
Here it is...

H4iku took this one with better wordplay and punches....
Only real category iceburg was better at here was personals...
Other than that he had some played-ass concepts....
Who uses that many gay jokes anymore??

Vote- H4iku....

Peep my open mic if ya have time...
since I have no current battles

H4kui You Need To Understand Herbs Own FL Dont Vote Here.. Vets Own EFL.....So There's Different Opinoins Cos They Dont know Shit....

Ice Verses Wasnt Bad.....
H4kiu Was Simply Better.....

Multis=h4kui
Flow=Tie
Punches H4 He Kept On Hitting
Wordplay H4 It Was Just Better.
Structure=H4 Thats....Right

H4k Won This Will You Herbs Please Evulate Before You Drop Votes Thanks.....

Alright Lets Break This Down

Flow-h4
Punchs-h4
Creativity-h4
Wordplay-ice
Overall-h4

okie this was a really good battle, and ice beat you in wordplay cuz he used every chance to make you look gay, but whatever you got him in the other categories.. so vote
h4iku

H4iku too this battle with better punches, better wordplay, better flow,

ice berg came pretty decent but it wasnt at all better then h4iku's,

altho i did like the mic furry line, i was feeling that, but h4iku just came a lot stronger, and took this battle, peace

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iam go wit ice on dis.... i wuz actually leanin towards H4iku for a while den he busted out:
Except They Were Never The Wrong Way, Infact! They Never Were...
Dat's not even elementary... kindergarten.... very wack....
Overall: Ice's wuz much funnier and won with punches and personals....

My Vote-IceBerg420

The ultra mega breakdown...

1st Bar
HaiKu Who-knew u would go back to ya old ways/1
Stayed wit Regime, Cuz MiC FuRRy pussy ass got played/2
VS
U Serious? Kid U gonna Stand There And Diss My Record Causes..
Have U Stopped To Admire Yourself? Less Wins and More Losses?

Nice personal opener, great "revealing" of his alter.
Not sure what a 'record cause' is...
Kinda looked like reaching for a rhyming word.
But great diss on his record (even though I hate those)
TIE

2nd Bar
Couldn't stand to see 2 losses on his record, so he ran/3
Plus 13th was tellin everybody HaiKu Cross Dresses as a man/4
VS
Consider Yourself Done With...Shipt To My Record Along With The Stocked...
It Must Be 4:20 Thru August, Cuz Its Obvious Why Your Wrtiers Blocked...

Great diss, hard punch and nice use of personals.
Very funny also.
Didn't get H's at all, don't most all of us smoke the chronic?
ICE

3rd Bar
Got-damn, shit's-true Look at Hai-ku's Fuckin Sig/5
"Raping NewB's since April 03".....hmm I bet U did/6 (LoL)
VS
Its Heart-break To See, Record Gone Down The Shit and Pride Out Spilling
You Want In it The Back This Time? Cuz This is The Second Loss Im Deleviering...(yeah i beat em before...lol)

One was funny, one had an impressive personal.
I like personals.
HAIKU

4th Bar
Just Rapin all the lil kids, HaiKu's a very sick FuCK/7
'My Mouth' is str8 iLL........while yours Just "Sucks"/8
VS
"Watch, While I Merk You.."? Its Funny How The Tables Turned
Except They Were Never The Wrong Way, Infact! They Never Were...

Too much contradiction on one side despite the personal.
Very simple, and basic diss on the other.
The simple one managed to have some mad funny wordplay though.
ICE

Last Bar
Well Guess-what MiC FuRRy's wont come back if U losE again/9
Plus a 3rd loss will settle-in worse than the second pimpin/10
VS
Your Level Stay Belows My Waist, Theres no Contest To Mine
..Keep Ur Skill Were It Belongs...Back in The Front Lines

One brought the personal, one hit so, so.
I get the diss, but Front Lines is used simply cuz it's faster ta get votes.
TIE

This battle was so close it was sick...

But Ice takes it overall for me.

Peace

Hmmm...An Ok Battle But Damn...H4IKU Won This...

Ice Had Sup Aight Personals But Not Really Making Them Into Hard Hitting Punches...The Concept Was There But He Didnt Really Make It Hit That Hard...Also Had A Newbish STyle To His Verse...

H4IKU Had Better Punches And Wordplay...Mostly Hard Hitting Punches But Also Fell Off A Bit In The Middle Of His Verse...Wordplay Was Good And Had A Better, More Complex And A More Elevated Verse...

Vote - H4IKU

im gonna not vote.
i dont like haiku. . .
and iceberg is cool wit me..
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wut do i think?
stuff. they were semi close.
ice asked me to poll a fair vote, but i think i have or had beef wit regime so i wont.

breakdown

multies h
metas i
personals i
consistancy both
punches both
flow h
wordplay both

overall i=iceberg close battle but jus my opinion

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Yo man , I think ICE got this , he had great punches , really hit hard , flow was better , .........real close though ,It seems everyone always ripps on Ices record , this guy doesnt anyone , he battled just about everyone , vet included , every now and then , he comes out with some dope shit .......... like dis peice.

No Beef

CE

iight i think H took this.....harder hitting punches, better flo,better structure and an overall better verse.....oh and iceberg u upped ur thread 2 many freakkin times...good battle but

vote-H

Yo , wouldnt let me Poll , ............... Tried 5 times ...........

MOD ....................... could you do it ? .................................................. .................................

^ Fuck you. You no showed the Poetry tourny.

And this battle is a DQ. Iceberg upped this way too many times. He is DQ'd, and Haiku wins.


Closed.