The Remix Vs Fed Ex (right one)
 

Rules:
No d/r, crew, or hate votes
10-15 lines
You spit first
show me whatchu got
-1-

this shits gonna b tyte... b bak wen both of ya'll drop... here.. vote here... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74952
... i'll return the favor

yo, you called me out, you drop first!................. aight.......................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,

i stated the rules and you can't change em'............ JUST SPIT i'll work on mine now so it won't be long after you drop

FUCK IT here's my verse.....you can't top this

...:::Givin' him a chance:::...

Your about to be "shipped" and "handled" as your girls say your "package" is sealed wit "fragile"// (pronounced FRA-JILE)
Fed Ex is bout to be "ex"ecuted and tube "fed" these lyrical "stamps" that'll "send" u "packin" in denial//
You wanna battle me? you must be a "blood-donor", you lubricatin' wit soap just so u can be "hard and clean" but u just got a "sud-boner"//
I'm Lyrically Intriguing and i'ma pull that lyrical trigga, You just a newbie wanted a battle wit a tru killa//
I'm just as "white" as "Michael Jackson" call me the "thrilla", ya spit soft while mine is "sweet n low" as if my lyrics were dipped in "vanilla"//

...:::Takin' away his chance:::...

You pm me askin' me how you change your name, probably cuz you know after you battle me you'll need an identity change//
Bullets of wordplay shootin' off and pounding-ya-chest, lyrical pistols dancin' around you and surrounding-the-rest//
Lyrical Uzis glistening ya eyes givin' em' a-twinkle, Your "Fed Ex" truck is about to hit a-"sink-hole"//
Ya lyrics are so "old" they gettin' "wrinkles", I'm strapped wit a gat and "once i pop" i just don't stop like "pringles"//

...:::Finisher:::...

I'm about to murder ya played out business like i was UPS, shit like a "child" you better get to cleanin' up ya "mess"//
Like Superman only i'ma have a W on my chest, After you hit that L you'll want a record change too i guess//
Now ending this shit allow me to give you some educated advice, The next time you challenge me you'll be LITERALLY SLICED//

You got shipped and handled Fed Ex......haha

Uhhh....well i'm waitin for tha guy ta drop but i'll go ahead and evaluate this shit...


FUCK IT here's my verse.....you can't top this

...:::Givin' him a chance:::...

Your about to be "shipped" and "handled" as your girls say your "package" is sealed wit "fragile"// (pronounced FRA-JILE)
Fed Ex is bout to be "ex"ecuted and tube "fed" these lyrical "stamps" that'll "send" u "packin" in denial//
You wanna battle me? you must be a "blood-donor", you lubricatin' wit soap just so u can be "hard and clean" but u just got a "sud-boner"//
I'm Lyrically Intriguing and i'ma pull that lyrical trigga, You just a newbie wanted a battle wit a tru killa//
I'm just as "white" as "Michael Jackson" call me the "thrilla", ya spit soft while mine is "sweet n low" as if my lyrics were dipped in "vanilla"//

...:::Takin' away his chance:::...

You pm me askin' me how you change your name, probably cuz you know after you battle me you'll need an identity change//
Bullets of wordplay shootin' off and pounding-ya-chest, lyrical pistols dancin' around you and surrounding-the-rest//
Lyrical Uzis glistening ya eyes givin' em' a-twinkle, Your "Fed Ex" truck is about to hit a-"sink-hole"//
Ya lyrics are so "old" they gettin' "wrinkles", I'm strapped wit a gat and "once i pop" i just don't stop like "pringles"//

...:::Finisher:::...

I'm about to murder ya played out business like i was UPS, shit like a "child" you better get to cleanin' up ya "mess"//
Like Superman only i'ma have a W on my chest, After you hit that L you'll want a record change too i guess//
Now ending this shit allow me to give you some educated advice, The next time you challenge me you'll be LITERALLY SLICED//

^that wasn't a good finisher and ya shit had no floh,.....i seen better shit from u mayne...

*no hate strickly feedback*

Now NewB' Common

nah man i appreciate the feedback....i knew this cat was new so i went easy on him...... it took my 6 mins and 27 seconds i timed it......then i added the shit to make it more readable........but yeah i went reallllll easy on this cat.......DEADLINE is 9:00 p.m. Eastern Time

let's go noob...................................uppin for his verse..................................

YO GUY FUCK , GIMME A CHANCE TO POST MY VERSE!! I CANT POST TODAY MAN FUCK, I'M POSTING TOMORROW BECAUSE I CANT USE THE PC FOR LONG HERE, TOOK ME 1 MIN TO WRITE DIS, AND I GOTTA GO NOW, BE UP 2MORROW, SORRY

what the fuck? give u time to write it? i fuckin' made this at like 2:00 today and told u to hurry up at 5:00 and set the deadline for 9:00 and your saying you had no time? damn man fuckin' pre-written shit.......I guess i can wait till tommorow to merk you....haha j/p no beef don't worry bout it man just get it up when u can

WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on man!!!! it's been 24 hours now...........deadline is 6:00 tonight eastern or no show votes will start

you jus "a different version" of a faggot, u the remix/
only this U do more than lose to me is suck dicks,how the fuck do you get yourself into these conflicts?//

You bout to get slain, I'll serve your head to you on a platter/
When I Look for a battle, all opponents scatter,You scared of me? what the matter? I know I'm makin your heart go pitter and patter//

Wouldnt it be a shame if you lose to this newbie?/
you prolly this you got an easy win, I'll have to dissagree,there's one this funny on this site, its you caliming to be an emcee//

Get off people's dicks, thats why you have alot of KO's/
only pre-written, bittin, verses you compose, you winning this battle is the chance of you seeing UFO's//

I had to write this shit fast as I can, but Its good enough to beat you/
if you get any votes, you know they untrue,an honest win you still have to pursue// (pursue part=you still havent gotten an honest win)

Your lines are fucked up, you still need to learn to flow/
for you to win, nigga you need to grow, sucking dick is what you really know//

You gettin fucked up, needed to tell it to ya face/
people are witnessing the beat-down of you taking place, murdering you, dont worry nigga, I wont leave a trace//

Aite man fuck, there you happy?!?! fuck, I still wudnt have written it yet cus I'm still busy as fuck, so man, get the fuckin votes down herre, fuck I gotta goo!!!

I like the remix even though i dont have enough to post i have to say that remix handled himself well in battle but fedex did also you just need to stay on candence a lil more than you will be on poit be cuz you have good word choice

Fed Ex ur shit

Remix Your opener was better than ur finisher

nice spit, what group are u in? if u in one hit up my free agent thread ok dawg

peace, please hit this up too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75211

remix but this wasnt a challenge newb start off slow b4 u go up against heavy or midds. butt u came pretty hard 2

remix took every category....good job for a new b tho fed
vote=remix
hit this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=75253

yo check it, I came weak as fuck aight, I'm sayin it Straight up, my first battle I spit 3 times batter den this(this my 2nd battle) I didnt hav any fuckin time so I put up what i had to, dont fuckin hate!!

I want a rematch soon, you can take this win anyway, fuck, I'll challange you lata when I hav time to make verses.

Yo i would vote on this but i aint got 100 post yet............ but if you would help a brotha out and put up a honest one here i would be greatfull................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75295

peace yall

I know you came hard as hell in your first battle that's why i challenged u i thought u would be good comp

actually i didnt come that hard, I thought, its jus my first battle, see rite now i have time to write, but fuck it

uppin 1................................................. .................................................. ...

uppin 2................................................. ...............................................

remix got this, although I've read betta from you. the newbie was okay though, but remix just had betta punches and was coming more hard.

vote = remix

peace

thanks dogg ^............ I KNOW I DIDN'T COME SICK LIKE I NORMALLY DO.......but this was a newbie and i thought he'd be good comp and i had a touch of writers block

Fed Ex was not bad for a newb, but the gangsta stuff and sexual references are kinda old...pretty good verse, but The Remix just came harder and had better punches, wordplay, flow...

VOTE=THA REMIX