A freestyle dissin the president!
 

ay yall i was bored.. and i was just browsin the net.. until i came upon a page.. readin the president is sendin out people to gain money.. aint that some shit!? well i'm not a fan of him.. well i never was to begin wit.. the page just made it easier for me to go on and write this.. check this peice out:

It starting to look like it’s getting to be too much in Iraq,
It’s not abstract Bush it’s plain to see – you need to retract//

You need to get back all the soldiers – you need to react before it’s too late,
there’s no time to debate – you need to locate the men and women that lives are in stake//

Can’t believe you using them as bait to try to create more to this war,
you don’t deserve to be the president – you’re better suited for the boudoir//

I don’t really think you’ve been keeping up with the news lately,
not trying to break the beauty of this country but why are you acting deadly//

Don’t mean for that to be a compliment – country’s better off with you absent,
you’re blunt! You’re playing around with lives! This isn’t one of your investments//

Or is it? Why are you doing this? Is this because you’re making money out of it?
American spirit sending younglings and accepting the credit//

We don’t always have to be in war you know,
psychos in action! Known to kill an American with they crossbow//

Damn! You bozo! I had a feeling you were going to screw us the moment you were elected,
Like cocking your shotgun - aiming but it isn’t even loaded//

Remember you’re only human – you’re not jagged,
you’re being graded by the people – you’re not admired by all you shit head//

But I guess it just runs in the family – your daughters are a good example,
thought they were to read the bible but they love drinking and getting they facials//

Yes! I got the balls to say it – BITCH! I’m one that doesn’t like you,
some look at you like you a guru – but I’d be the first to burn a chunk off of your statue//

You’re chances of being president next turn is going to be slim,
Jason’s coming by with his knife – be on the look out for you forelimbs//

These rhyming lines may be a crime but I never care for a cowardly bitch like you,
but this is just once in a lifetime chance for you dude – enjoy while you still at your primetime fool//

You’ll never understand why I’m so cruel to a mule like you,
but now I have a better understanding why Eminem’s ass has forever been hating you//

ay! i'm uppin for some feedback yall! tell me if yall hate it, like it, are against it, or wit it? it dont matter.. just tell me what ya'll think.. aright? take it easy all MCs! i'm outtie!

I think it's illegal to diss the president during times of war. My sister told me that, it was a law made during the civil war, that freedom of speech was taken away during war times...i'm not sure if its still in effect, but....this drop wasn't good nonetheless.

aright i see it yo way.. but ay! dont care! freedom of speech is always in effect fo my ass! thanks fo the feedback.. [pssh!][ah ha]

My view is..unless your certain don't make accusations...n if you read what you believ

your wack

now you better believe it and stop postin stupid open mics...get something that doesn't diss your president...your hardly a politician

[ah ha] well - thank you - BITCH! [cough] i mean - pot1ent! [ha ha] the reason why it wasn't on the news.. its because they didnt want it out in the news.. i got the URL if you want.. [ah ha] but thanks for the feedback.. take it easy BITCH! [COUGH] I MEAN MC.. i'm outtie! [AH HA]

thun i'm feelin it you hit some major points especially for it to be a freestyle hate to see what you would have to write about da president lol or would i anyways keep posting more hotness aight thun ~1~

[ah ha] you don't always believe what you see on the net[cough]there was a site that had George Bush as the anti-Christ[ah ha] Maybe, We don't care if you think you have freedom of speech, i'll laugh if you get arrested [ah ha] ay your an herb i guess[cough]dumb newbie. ay you need help.

freedom of speech is always in affect even in times of war. this was a free/keystyle so it wasn't bad. your plitics are a little weak but your emotion came across. 1









p.s. for those who are uninformed please do not make comments, you only make yourself look bad. thank you.

^^if your talking to me, then its my sister that told me, because she learned that or whatnot, that Abe Lincoln made that Law up, its not one of his popular things if noticed.

SkiddLeZZ [AH HA] and i'muh fuckin herb?! daw! you FUCKIN LISTEN TO YO SISTUH! herb ass BITCH! [AH HA!] and i'm the herb?! [AH HA] you funny daw.. REAL funny.. [AH HA] (SIKE!) well as usual! i'm still uppin fo feedback.. i appreciate yall comin back at this.. take it easy MCs.. peeycce!

LOOK AS A SONG TOPIC I DISLIKE IT FAUGHT TO BE A CITIZEN AND NOW I FIGHT AS A CITIZEN AND SOLDIER FOR THIS PLACE.......
AS A SONG IT WAS GOOD YOU HAD THE ELEMENTS AND WORDS T MAKE PEOPLE REACT OBVIOUSLY AND ASO IT HAD STYLE KEEP BUILDING POP YOU DID WELL.

ay! thanks bruh.. your feedback is appreciated deeply! as fo the othuh onez too! even some up there was hatin.. i still want the feedback.. come on now! more feedback yall! this is gettin hot as hell! take it easy MC! i'm outtie!

lol.....fuqq da president......lol....nasty ish son....1ne

sum shit wuz weak though

[Ah ha] my sister is older than me. Daw, don't talk stupid shit.[Ah Ha]If I'm Funny, I'm glad I made you laugh.[AH HA] Because when I battle you, maybe I'll be the one having fun. take it easy femcee,peeyce.

I really liked this rap, not being any fan of Bush myself. And you know what the funny part is? Proof there is no God, this crazy bastard with a hard on for war has actually been nomited for a Nobel Peace Prize.

thank you thank you for all the feedback.. and i'm still uppin for more! take it easy MCs! i'm outtie!



^^set it up then bitch!

O.k but your spittin firstbuddy boy, or nothins set up

ay ALL TRUE MCs.. dont let this bitch SkiddLeZZ get into your way of givin some good quality feedback.. so go ahead and give more feedback.. it will be appreciated.. take it easy TO ALL TRUE MCs.. i'm outtie!

I give good feedback. i was speakin truth when I said what i said. you need to elevate. don't hate.

ok man.. whatevuh.. i aint gon waist my time just arguin wit you.. i just wanted feedback.. and we'll see who needs the elevatin when the battles gets done voted on.. just remembuh.. i'muh newbie.. lose to me.. that's a helluh big drop in yo MC reputation.. BUT ANYWAY! more feedback yall.. keep em comin! take it easy MCs.. i'm outtie!

who said I'll lose to you. I threw out a half assed verse out there.

I think you put more emotion than logic into this drop, I can respect your opinion, but your politics need some elevation.

You seemed to force alot of this out, I thionk you could have done a much better job had you planned and wrote it. Freestyle's tend to come off like this, but you can clean it up some.

I do not agree with your stance here, but that's another discusion. I just wish you could provide and intellegent foundation for your peice, it was mostly comprised of personal emotion and a huge lack of insight into the matter. Yes it is illegal to denounce the president durring time of conflict, it has not been inforced in a very long time, but skidelzz was correct when he interjected that thought. I do have the credentials to substantiate my claims, and I think you should take the time to add your thoguhts to the emcee interaction thread on this topic. I would love to debate you on that issue... Or anyone else for that matter. Prophet skidelezz was acurate in his comment, and everyone should be aware that the media is liberally controlled and influenced. Politics are a serious business, you can't just hate Bush and not understand the arena in which they're played...

uppin fo more feedback yall.. drop yuh honest voices up on this peice.. take it easy MCs.. i'm outtie!



^^daw! you aint gettin what i'm trynuh say.. i was sayin! "IF you lose to a newbie! that's a pretty big ass drop on yo MC REP.. get it?!

now that's some HELLUH GOOD FEEDBACK! but ay listen! how about i just do what i do.. like how i did this.. PM you this peice i created.. and you tell me how i can clean the shit up.. like i said! i'm new to all this shit! Take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!

^ Anytime dawg, I'm all for the elvation of the game, I don't hate, unless I'm agrivated.. I will always provide REAL feedback and those who choose to accept people's advice, tend to prosper fromt he wisdom of others.. If you ever want me to give you an honest opinion, just hit me up. I anint here for records or braggin right's, I just want to promote and elevate the culture before it is dismantled by commercialist' and that is real!!! Like I said before I do this shit for real, week in and week out, just here on RB I don't have to put on a show... Much respect..

^^DAW! about that DAMN time we had someone here to give good feedback.. not that anyone else gave bad ones.. well everyone did give good ones and it was they opinion so i can respect that.. but ay man.. good lookin out daw.. i'll look you up whenever aright? thanks B! take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!