SmokaJoka666 vs. IceBerg420
 

10 lines max
no dickryde/crew/hate/bias votes
no bitin
no recyclin
no playin off of verses
due date is tomorrow night by midnight...eastern time...therefore it doesn't matter who spits first as long as both emcees make deadline...

peace
4:20

I'ma SmoKe-a-Joka 666 times before this battles done/1
This bitch couldn't win shit, even if he was 2pac's iLL begotten son/2 (Ripped em)

(Pause for a Moment.....Reads it again........Damn.....Proceed)

Call me "NeLLy" cuz I'm "#1", Spittin fire hotter than the sun/3
While your wack raps handed u this "L" be4 the battle even begun/4
Insane Joker Lyricists, sorry dawg U must not be hearin this/5
Only time "JokaZ WiLd" is when clowns are havin 'sissy-fits'/6 (Check sig)
This-the-pits, ya-shits pre-writ........But still cant deliver hitz/7
How U gonna be a 'Dope MC' if punches never land you idiot/8 (LoL)
Smoke's a joke, Shoulda never ever even started rappin/9
All them people he beat I got 1 question.....What Happened?/10

A none of that Tiny Letter Shit neither................
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No FREEPOSTS!!!, drop a link to u Battle after both verse are UP

Uppin 4 verse drop............................
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i will vote on this when its done and you both hit up my battle with thatthuggedout......thanks....and nice spit ice........

lol.....due date was tonight by midnight....nice verse...i'll put my shit up quick.....but i stick with my style.....can't tell me how to do my verse yo.....

peace
4:20

A smoke drop a vote on my battle against GChand would ya....People wit 300+ posts can vote only and the shit bein mad slept on

aight....here's the verse....and i'll check the battle....

If Iceberg ate "ALPHABET SOUP AND TRIED TO SHIT WITH HIS ASS CHEEKS CLENCHED" he wouldn't have "TIGHT WORDS"//
ur TINY LINES are worthless like CYPHERS, I "B IN THE MIDDLE OF HO'S" (HBO) having "REAL SEX" while u "CYBER"//

like "1 + 1 = 2", u've lost "TWICE AS MUCH AS U'VE WON" (one), stab u with "TRIDENTS" like a "50 YEAR OLD REDNECK u only CHEW GUMS"//
i'm a MIXTURE of problems and u won't ever find a SOLUTION, ur "LYRICALLY RAPED" like "SINGING PROSTITUTES" u "SPEW CUM"//

i'll "RIP UR ASS" like "CANDYMAN ON A TOILET DOING AEROBICS", like "SCRATCHED CONTACT LENSES" ur "LOSIN FOCUS"//
this kid wears a "Double-D", and when i say that i mean "DOUBLE DIARHHEA" WHEN I KILL HIM WITH THESE "TWO EXPLOSIONS"//

like "WEIGHTLIFTING" i "HAND GREAT BARZ", i'll make u SICK LIKE FINDING A USED CONDOM AT THE BOTTOM OF A MAYONNAISE JAR//
ur PUNCHES ARE LIKE A "HESITATING PAINTER" cuz u "LAND LATE MARKS", eat this kid like M&M'S and "MICRO MACHINES" (MM) like u "RAN FAKE CARS"//

like PRISON DINNERS ur rhymes are a PLATE OF MUSH, u never get PUSSY that's y u remind me of OSAMA BIN LADEN AND CRABS CUZ U IRRITATE BUSH//
think u know my buttons but it's too late to push, ur like the WU-TANG CLAN COMBINING WITH SOFT SINGERS (SS) this kid MAKES A WUSS (WU-SS)//

peace
4:20

Good shit........................Uppin................. ...................................
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ice got dis

damn dat font is fuckin wit my eyes didn't ice say not to do dat

well ice got dis wit flow, struture, and about every thang

blah at that vote.....get ur glasses kid.........lol.....uppin......................... .................................................

peace
4:20

lol tought battle...but id say joka took it with punches, wordplay and flow
vote=smoka
hit up my battle vs banga....peace

appreciate it for reading...lol...nah j/k.....uppin for some more votes.....come on people...

peace
4:20

uppin............................................. ......................
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Yo i would vote on this but i aint got 100 post yet............ but if you would help a brotha out and put up a honest one here i would be greatfull................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75295

peace yall

Breakdown For Ya:

Flow-Smoke
Punches-Smoke
Multi-Both
Creativity-Smoke
Enjoyability-Both
Structure-Ice
Complexity-Smoke

Overal-Smoke

This Was A Pretty Good Battle For Both Mc's. 2 Main Reasons Smoke Won Was Flow And Punches. The Lines Were More Complex And A Good Read If You Can Read Well. Props To Both Mc's For A Scik Battle.

iight this battle seems to be gettin slept on id like to help yall out.......

lets break it down...

Flow-ice
Punches-Smoke
Multi-Both
Creativity-both
Enjoyability-Both
Structure-Ice
Complexity-Smoke


overall this was a good battle.........um id say in all id give this to ice but good battle........keep up the good work.....1

drop a poll vote in ma battle verses mortality only 1 more needed....thx....1

Uppin................Appreciate U Xecution for votin man......This battle been goin on for a while....People sleepin on the shit 4 real

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No Beef

Gotta go with ice berg on this
better flow punches and wordplay

Joka came good but not good enough



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75428

Hit that up 2 more

better low punches and wordplay go to ice

i liked jokas verse...but not that much

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=75484

peep this with an honest vote^^

aight coo.....let's get the last vote in here...lol...nice battle yo....but u win some and u lose some i guess.....unless i miraculously make a comeback from people who read....lol....

peace
4:20

Uppin for the nail in the Coffin.....................................
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Drop a honest one here

Vote Ice
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=75698