rico ~vs~ Jay Jay
 

ok lines 12-16
no d/r crew hate ect votes

u spit first

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checkin in

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alright I'm here
I know you ain't tryin' to stall by tellin' me to spit first
you challenged now you spit first

/\ ok wat eva
i dont mind hu goes first jus a bit busy so i thought it would be better 4 u to go 1st

rico hit up a fair vote on m ybattle at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75003

im winniong 3-0 so far and i think i killed him but vote fairly, ill check this after u both spit

/\ stop fuckin free postin n niether of us have dropped


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sorry the first one i fucked up

U know what i do to smarty kids like u
who have a very low I.Q
and really dont have a clue
well heres a taste of what i do
ill rip u to peices, cuz ur crap and u can't beat this
ur tryin to throw punches but they will allways miss
when u hold the mic u choke and tremble
when i do it i make the speakers rumble
my shit is tight~ wanna fight~then thats alright
i got lyrics that will make you weep
Hypnotise u like Paul mckenna.... "sleep" ?
And when you wake up you will think you can rap
Don't try to be me take a "SLAP" !!
my anger is lethal bitch, and its hard to keep
I'm the wolf in this game and your the lost sheep

waitin 4 ya verse

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where u at man hurry up

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u gonna show or wat

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uppin 4 hiz verse

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hey yo look
I got the ticks and I'm itchin', to throw a punch like I'm pitchin',
a fastball aimed to hit ya, this ain't a painted pretty picture,
in fact it's a depiction, a fact not fiction, of my future actions like a prediction,
in other words don't get ya ass kicked,
ya flow's past tense bastard, mine's is futuristic and mastered,
I'm spaceage pimpin', makin' my way sippin' Dom P, you a wanna be me with an achy leg limpin',
yo I like that fuck milk get pot bit, so I hate to say the words that you get killed or shot with,
this lyrical captial A to the K's, got 47 ways make or take ya day,
this ain't a battle, it's more like Russian Rulette, so this post I'm rushin' thru it, just to prove that I must improve yet.

ok votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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vote=Rico
simply cuz it was easier to follow

Rico please hit this up bro thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2

more votes plz

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VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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decent battle on for both and heres my breakdown

wordplay=jay jay,
vocab=tie, neither had outstanding vocab
metas=tie ,neither had metas just read both again didnt see one meta
multi=jay
creativity=nothing impressive but it goe to jay again
structure=rico, little easier to read
punches=i think jay hit harder wit punches
both need to elevate but my vote goes to

vote=jay jay
overall it wasnt that bad, both need to work on metas and harder punches, just my opinion so dont get all mad and upset, but jay took this one in my opinion
good luck to both
holla

i think i had way more multies

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uppin

this shit is slippin

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