iceberg420 vs GChand (only 300+ posts)
 

no biting
no freeposting
no feeding
no crew
no hate
no dr
only people with 300+posts can vote
10-12 lines
verses must be in by midnight EST (i would do earlier but i gotta b goin sumwhere soon)

this is my check in

oh and xplained votes only................ no quoted explainations..................................... ......

****Quick Note "Contagious" is my Crew and GC's part of the "Verbal Rapists"




Read my avi.............................................

Ok Merk Time Lets GO!

GChand demanded this Merk.....And Now U can't Escape-this/1 (Called Me Out in Bitch Slapped)
Bitch I'm iLL and "Contagious".... u just a Pussy "Verbal Rapist"/2
This win.....Just try-N-take-this Bitch It Just wont Happen/3
Like Gurls sayin they "Like you" becuz of ya skills in rappin/4 (LoL)
Smack-him..... Sum1 Please!! This stupid bitch gettin on my nerves/5
U Worst then them little whiny ass "Win-Hungary" Motha Fuckin HERBS!/6
So Now it's time for U to get what U deserve/7
An ass kickin so bad...Its only worthy of callin it a MERK!/8
Fuckin 'Freshmen' you'll always remained 'out Classed'/9
By this 'Senior' vet takin ya Lunch Money while I'm kickin yo ass/10

Gimme Yo Lunch Money Nigga, Its over...............

yo i will vote when g spits.....and can you guys hit up my battles with karat and stars honestly....thanks....

yo' i'll hit this up wen u both spit... nice verse iceburg... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75078
please vote there

Iceberg you actin' hard, talkin' lyke you've been merkin' every one//1
But look at ya record you've been merked twice as much and outdone//2
I'm hittin' ya organs till ya pissin' kidney stones, & piercin' fist threw bone//3
And when ya fuckin' ya bitch she screamin' "Why can't you make me moan?!"//4
I ain't a biter, but I'm throwin ya punches right in tha trash//5
Ya lyrics are bad, ya write down a word and lose tha battle in a flash//6
Fuck you chump, you ain't takin' dis battle if this tha best you ever done//7
Cuz mah drop is killin yours lyke tha way Tupac was wit a gun//8
You must work out & drink slim fast, cuz all you always seem to gain losses//9
After this battle, your body parts will be thrown upon various crosses//10

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i think gchand took it wit punches... no hate no dr....iceburg u talk alotta shit.. but props to ya and gchand... peace..

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to be completely honest.....heres how i see it.

Iceburg- your spit was alright, i guess. Some really basic stuff though...like this:
Smack-him..... Sum1 Please!! This stupid bitch gettin on my nerves/5
U Worst then them little whiny ass "Win-Hungary" Motha Fuckin HERBS!/6
that second part was just a streched out insult....doesnt really flow well and weakens the overall punch. Overall, u needed more complexity and some length in ur rhymes.

GChand- your verse was alright as well. But heres what separated it from Iceburgs: the better punches and one personal. While some lines were played, it was better than Iceburgs....your beginning and ending line were strong.

Vote - GChand, by a small margin. If I was you Iceburg, i would ask for a rematch....ive seen you do better than this. peace......

^^yup

shit i voted wrong......MOD CAN YOU CHANGE IT................................................ ..................................................

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this is 3, not the other.. miscounted

quit fuckin sleepin on this shit

aight....i think Ice took this....and here's y.....he had more multis....better vocabulary....better wordplay....better complexity.....and edged on punches.....GC...u only had a better flow....other than that...ur verse was weak....and ur vocabulary was kinda.....not so great...i guess.lol...no hate....

peace
4:20

Ok, no hate, good battle and props to both.
Breakdown
Punches-tie
Flow-tie, leaning a bit towards Gchand
Wordplay-Ice
Vocab-Ice
Multi's-tie
Complexity-tie, leaning a bit towards ice
Vote=ice
close shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75211

^^hit up my battle with MOB, remember to read each MC's Second verse, not the first one

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voti ots ta go wit berg on dis one niggaz

better verse im my eyes, close shit tho yo , enjoyed it very much, keep postin shit u two and ill read up on it
peace

werd^^^^

Polls reset at 2 a piece, don't quote votes, UPPIN this for votes.
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Iceberg - Punches were advanced but not hard, not too complex, as if ya didn't give a fuck...Multi's were there, not as good as they coulda been, didn't have good flow to it...Structure, creativity, vocab, wordplay, you had it down aight, again not too complex but good points

GChand - Gave a tough battle bein the underdog, gotta give props for that, liked the punches better, and they flowed well....Multi's again seemingly non-existent, not as they coulda been...wordplay, creativity, vocab i liked too, not as good as iceberg's

Overall this was kinda equal in my eyes, the only thing that separated it was heart...
GC seemed like he wanted to win, Iceberg jus seemed like 'here we go, another battle'

Vote = GChand

good spits...
hit this up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=76734

dont sleep on this yall

24 karat u down to battle ill set it up holla bac or pm me if ur down im ghost peace .................................................. ..................................................

Iceberg took this one but barely though...It was a close battle, just not close enough.......I thought ice had betta punches and more direct...GC's wuz good but like that line about makin ya woman moan..fo real homie...places like that wuz ya drop off...hott battle though...but my vote Iceberg420

return tha favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76529

Damn this battle old, I didn't even know the shit was still here.......
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lol i would vote for ice but i aint got 100....good batle though....can you guys both hit up my battles...honestly please

u need 300 dumbass...... cant you reead, and ice they reopened it cuz of the quoted xplainations and mistaken vote by wallbanger.... peace

6 Upps - GChand
7 Upps - IceBerg420

MOD Should Close This.. Neither Members Followed Rules

Next Time Watch Your Upps

uppin 4 these catz.............................................. .................................................. ..................arent i nice?

damn white virus, what the fuck! u dont have 300 fuckin posts... what the fuck is ur problem? can u not read?!

Lemme Break It Down For Yall

Punches-GCHAND
Flow-ICE
Wordplay-ICE
Overall-ICE

Was A Ok Battle....

yo iceberg wins this.............i think- almost easily........ he had more multis better personals....and the shit that gchand was tryin to diss him with wasnt as good as the punches ice was throwin...........granite, he didnt come that hard but enuff to beat this cat...............good battle close, but not that close............peace
vote = ice