IILConceptz Vs DeMoNiAc
 

10-15 lines....I'll spit as soon as u check in first....

Check in first..............whatever.........im here second?.........LOL j/k...................in............................ .........................
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You a pussy?..........

fuck this some mod close this .......he pusssssssyed out........
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.................................................. ............fukkin no show pus

in my books you're nameless, brainless,/
don't put up a fight and i'll make this battle quick and painless/
if i gave you coaching, then i'd consider you ill-advised/
i don't expect you to get that, it's better than anything u've ever devised /
you're 0-0 right? consider this the beginning of your demise/
This fake emcee right here, is lookin for stardom/
Somebody get my ass an "astray", so I can "smoke his problems"/
My bars cause brain damage like cell block prison fights/
K.J couldn't "cum cold" if his dick started "drippin ICE"/
You little faggot ass bitch, why you fuckin with me?/
Here's a "First Class" ticket from me "too the cemetery"/
I'm not mean i'm tryin to prepare ya',/
you couldn't be sick if you got mixed with yellow fever and malaria/
It's "Ludacris" for you even thinking that you can beat me/
And believe me this isnt "Word of mouth" the whole site is with me/

fuck my bad I put K.J its a slang thing my homies and me say.....well ne ways it means a wack ass emcee....cuz we got a friend named k.j who thinks hes the shit

what the fuck are u talking bout bitch...spit ur shit sock face k.j............................................... .................................................. ...........quit freepostin man

You spitted lol ........heres my verse

Bitch, ur style skips more lines and chops worse than a broken-record//
You suffer from verbal retaliations and reimbursement for humiliation//
U prolly,have sex tru your left hand and on screen some hentai-animation//
I detest ur verbal conquest, prophecized fukkin-bitch that ur no ill emcee//
Fake-as-can-be, u lack skill, and you look up to somone who spits like me//
Wack-bitch try battlin me,lmao tell me fag what's ur fake-ass really thinkin//
Could put real expensive-cologne all over ur rhymes and they still be stinkin//
You a poor kid, really feel sorry for you, scrappin dimes ur way of gettin cash//
But yo, face-facts ur fukkin dates expired.....ur stink worst than a can of trash//
Demoniac?...lol, you think you have a nice verse but i tell you its-a-mess//
But yo i know why your ass think's your smooth ur-filled-with-herb-al-ness//*Herbal-Essence

both verses weren't great, but i'll give it to ill, because he had a few decent lines. ya both need some elevation and shit. Peace.

ok ...thnx uppin

vote: demoniac


flow: D
punches: D
Multis: ILL
Personals: niehter
Vocab: D
Metas/similes: ILL
This battle goes to: D

nice battle guys, i enjoyed it for real good shit

peace............

i dunt agree on your break down but its cool......uppin.............
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beter vocab LOL, he used basic words man........btw.........but its all cool...

Hmmmmm...Not A Great Battle...But Ill Had More Original Lines...The Other Cat Had Choppy Flow And Weak Punches...Ill Had Somw Streched Lines...Something For You To Work On...

Vote - IILConceptz

yo ill, where the fuck are you? you supposed to battle me u pussy ass nigga! fuckin no showin that shit. you a motherfuckin pussy

IllConceptz Took This Battle.

Not All That Close. He Had Better Punches, Flow, Creativity, Complexity...ETC.

Dem You Need To Elevate Ya Vocab And Work On Flow. Try And Add More Complexity To Ya Verse.

Hmmmmm...Not A Great Battle...But Ill Had More Original Lines...The Other Cat Had Choppy Flow And Weak Punches...Ill Had Somw Streched Lines...Something For You To Work On...

Vote - IILConceptz
and go peep mc thrilla vs krem it needs to be closed aight niggas holla

i think ILL got this one, better flow etc etc the other guy was good but flow was more slow, ya know?

Demonic
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some nice punches there...kept a nice flow with good rhymes

Ill
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You came with alot harder punches...had better structure

Nuff said

vote-IllConceptz

Uppin, 4 Some votes.......
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werd.....yep.....^^^