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Young P 08-24-03 12:56 PM

~Young P~ VS Parallel
 
aight yo...
10 lines (12 max)
usual vote rules
you spittin first parallel
no time limit but try not to take forever
lets do it...

Tupac55 08-24-03 12:58 PM

yo ill return a vote for ahonest one here.............................................. ...............................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75326

MyNd. FuLL 08-24-03 01:09 PM

just wanted to say whats up to young P haven't seen u in a while
i'll check this shit out when both of yall drop wit an honest opinion
holla young and good luck to both

Young P 08-24-03 02:07 PM

ayo where is dis kat? Wut up curse...u got a s/n i can talk to u on...drop it in dis thread...my AIM is YOUNG33GUNNA or Lil Young P33 .... talk ta me....

MyNd. FuLL 08-24-03 02:12 PM

dont have aim but i have yahoo
curtrob2000@yahoo.com
hit me up if you can if not then just PM me

Young P 08-24-03 02:17 PM

ima download yahoo instan messenger so hopefully u have it....
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MyNd. FuLL 08-24-03 02:22 PM

i do i am on now^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Parallel 08-24-03 03:14 PM

Yo, Your punches barge a lot but really and truly none push me.
Got peodophiles checkin this thread looking for some [/b]Young P[/b]ussy.
I’ma grab foes, smash bones, crack skulls and detach a joint or two.
Then I’ll start staring at my scrotem to see things from your point of view.
Turning this member of Spoken Legends into a Speechless myth.
Whether I’m posting 2nd or 1st, Feed off your verse? Nope, I don’t eat shit.
Hope for heat, ‘Cause lately your every response has been mild warm.
You better arrest me, I got Young on the ropes like bondage child porn.
Real man or fake fag, I cant be sure ‘cause your really confusing peeps.
You were naked when I gave you the L, I guess I added to your Losing streak.
Whatever your verse used, I suggest you go back to Word and click Undo.
Young poof, It doesn’t take a dna test to tell that Parallel just sonned you.

MyNd. FuLL 08-24-03 04:06 PM

yo nice spit parallel,definetly not a newb, came pretty hard
i will e back when young drops his shit, he will have to come hard to get this one, respect to u no matter what happens
holla

Young P 08-25-03 04:09 AM

Ya thought ya could beat me, but like priests gettin killed, da circumstancs have all changed//
Dis shits all fame, but like like a marathon on testicles...im runnin dis ball game//
Call yaself Parrallel but like roaches in da light...ya runnin in all directions//
Spreadin like infection...you wack dawg, like a dude wit no girl gettin constant erections//
You be sayin ya makin a route in life but da highway is hershey//
His face is traced wit herpies...couldnt be 1-0 (10) if he rocked a Maurice Cheeks jersey//
He beggin for mercy...but instead, I slap him wit da pain//
I'm bloodthirsty, so I dont eat at da flesh but leave him in vain (vein)//
Boomin like thunder, leave em in blunder, eatin him up but still feel da hunger//
My mind lerks in wonder...and now Young Gunnin him down...wont stop till he six feet under//
He like a blind pothead...he got da shit, but must roll//
He freely handin me da W like a CD he just stole//

Young P 08-25-03 04:17 AM

REFERENCE
1st line-You heard bout dat priest killed in prison
2nd-You should get it
3rd-He cant go straight...he gay...runnin in all directions
4th-He wack...niggaz betta be wackin dat shit when dey got no girl
5th-more complicated...Hershey Highway is wut dey call it when gays go up da butt...like fudgepackin...ya should get da otha part
6th-Maurice Cheeks wuz an old ball playa...# 10
7th-ya should get it
8th-veins carry ya blood...im bloodthirsty...get it
9th-need not be explained
10th-Young Gunnaz...Cant Stop, Wont Stop...you dont know it... get ta know it
11th-Blind potheads cant roll blunts and shit real well...can dey
12th-ok yea...i won

NewPort 08-25-03 04:26 AM

Didn't Really Need To Give The Full Explainations
But You Still Won.. Your Punches Were More Direct

Vote - Young p

Menik 08-25-03 04:35 AM

Very close battle in my opinion, both had great punches and good flow, but i think Young P won it, his punches just seem to hit harder. Vote..Young P

MyNd. FuLL 08-25-03 10:07 AM

tight battle and props to both but theres only one winner so heres the breakdown

wordplay=tie, both had dope ass wordplay
vocab=neither really stood out
flow=parallel, had much better flow and was mre consistent
metas=young, took this one without a doubt
punches=young, got this easy with his combo of metas
structure=parallel, easy to read
multis=young, had a few more multis
poll vote= young p

overall good shit from both
and good luck
holla

mc thrilla 08-25-03 10:13 AM

break down

flow just about even i would say young p edged that one

multis young p didnt see alot from parallel

punchs young p parallel mad props ya came hard but p had the experience on ya props to ya

vote young p if i could just staten my opinion and please go peep the mc thrilla vs syntext battle aight we need some votes holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

XL4REAL 08-25-03 12:37 PM

didnt need da explanation P you murked him man.....good verse from a so called newb though 4real....

P just had more experience, beta flow, wordplay everything really.....

Can you guys check my batles please against ruttah and dynamatic.....

Young P 08-26-03 05:32 PM

uppin ths shit .. stop sleepin nigaz .................................................. .................................................. ............................................

Aisle Phive 08-26-03 07:12 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by mc thrilla
break down

flow just about even i would say young p edged that one

multis young p didnt see alot from parallel

punchs young p parallel mad props ya came hard but p had the experience on ya props to ya

vote young p if i could just staten my opinion and please go peep the mc thrilla vs syntext battle aight we need some votes holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


word^^^

can u vote on these???

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75962

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75987

Token 08-26-03 07:21 PM

it was an ok battle but one thing that stood out for me is parallels line:
Quote:
Turning this member of Spoken Legends into a Speechless myth.
Whether I’m posting 2nd or 1st, Feed off your verse? Nope, I don’t eat shit.


and YoungN's:
Quote:
You be sayin ya makin a route in life but da highway is hershey//
His face is traced wit herpies...couldnt be 1-0 (10) if he rocked a Maurice Cheeks jersey//


but overall better verse
Vote- Young P

Young P 08-26-03 10:03 PM

uppin...
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$K!LL 08-26-03 10:05 PM

damn young ot sum skill he tookt his battle wit more personals an punches feelin it better flwoin
plus they all hit nice
good battle
but if i cud poll it it wud go to young p

can sumone hit this up mad slepted on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76007

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^thankz>>>POll it honestly

youngblood 08-26-03 10:11 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by mc thrilla
[B]break down

flow just about even i would say young p edged that one

multis young p didnt see alot from parallel

punchs young p parallel mad props ya came hard but p had the experience on ya props to ya

vote young p

werd^^^......

yep....


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