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7curse vs. Funda-mentalz
werd...
16-24 bars u spit first. no crew, dickryde, hater...tha usual best of luck ta ya deadline...tommorow night (before wednesday, literally) |
7curse...sounds egyptian lol...
Preparing for a long-ass battle Look at all these "BARZ" I HIT, dis-rappa-need-to-come-off-IT cuz I "FLOW-PISSED" so call me and "ALCOHOLIC"/ Dawg ya bettah spit-SPECIFIC-sippin gin and TONIC-writin-in-"HYROGLIFICS"-cause-ya-alias-is "SYMBOLIC"! Check it-I shoot-"shots" cause ya ordered the "ROUNDS"-put-holes-in-ya-chest-make-ya-lose-a-few POUNDS/ I spit-hard-wit NOUNS and i'll work in ya "slots" like I was at the "Georgian DOWNS"! (casino) But I ain't gonna "gamble" with S-T-D's, this fag likes kids that's why he's always P-M ing ME/ Tryna get NEXT-TO-ME by MOLESTIN-ME, you couldn't sleep-"tight" if you "R-I-P'D" with ME! I'm about to dump your B-O-D-I-E-in-shits-OCEAN, only way you could "beat" me is by usin hand-LOTION/ I'll "kill" you with DEVOTION, 'Curse is already "down-beat" cause he spits without "EMOTION"... Can't break ya "heart", cause ya have no "FEELINGS"-only way you'd get "high" on me is if ya were hung from a CEILING/ I'm "WHEELING"-and-DEALING, the way I burn-"rubber", I've got your bitch SQUEALING, unlink you-that pussy has MEANING! You're KNEELING-PRAYING TO-MUNTU, he might give ya a break/ But it's already over-ya-drifted to shits lake! I STAKE-out ya STYLE like boot-camp in the West-NILE/ And I'll SMILE, as the jury votes against-this-PEDIFILE! My rhymes are VERSATILE, yours are just USE-LESS like George BUSH'S public AD-DRESSES/ You're gettin fucked faster then Bill Clinton's BITCHES, I just hope you'll be faster too EXPRESS-THIS... I wanted 10 lines cause nobody wanna read-a-book KID/ Now this gettin' slept on like Pam-LEE'S TITS! I started strong, then slowly LACKING just to sike you OUT/ Send you PACKING like when you "ate" a "BROWNIE" and got kicked outta "boy-SCOUTS"! This kid's CURSED cause he can't-rip-a-VERSE/ Whats WORSE?? He-WORKS-as-a-NURSE and carries-a-PURSE! Ya' style-switches, and right now its REVERSED...so Ima fast-FORWARD-and-question-this NERD/ When did the ABSURD-TRANSFER-OCCUR to-guys-you PREFER?! Check it-with-quick-SPITZ-I-BLITZ-your-SHIT/ Your no rapper dawg, go back to da PY-RA-MID! I'm battling MYSELF, HITTIN 16 is almost as rare as FINDIN-an-ELF/ It's easy for you, cuz you have a book of pre-writes SITTIN on-ya-shelf/ Im sneaky-with-"STEALTH" call me B-2 the way I bomb-this-set/ Only been in the game fo' a while and still I rap like-a-vet/ Ahh endin the shit with one last punch I'll give you "Stigmata"-a-true-"hand" in bleeding/ 16 "sugar-coated-barz", and you still have a "sweet-tooth" for feeding... (Stigmata=some movie where kid's hands bleed or some shit like that...rent it) |
uppin for ya spit.............................................. ...good luck dawg.............................................. ................................
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7curse respondZ:
(first off, a line is a bar...so 16 bars means 16 lines...not 16 doubles...justa tell ya) (an whats with all this egyptian shyt?, an the pedifile shyt?) tha only thing i molest are ur weak ass werds/ that put losses on ur record...so heres ur third// 2 an only cuz ur a 'flamer' would u 'spit fire'/ if ur a representation of ur town...then i could take out all of Empire//(his hometown) 4 or maybe ur 'prince' of ur town...or 'tha former artist'/ gettin 'rolled in battles' like 'Empire carptets'*// 6 u battlin curse-an u 'catcha loss', like 'randy moss'/ cuz i got 'core values'...an ur 'fundamentalz are lost'// 8 see...these are good werdplays...an proper quotations/ when ur "quotes" arent right an lines have no relations// 10 so after u read my verse...please take notes/ of intelligent rhymin...where if u did 'audio' ud still 'tryta use quotes'// 12 u admited defeat when ur 'punches came ta callin me a fagget'/ thats why theres 'KY jelly' on tha 'win'...bitch an 'u cant grasp-it'// 14 an in stigmata...tha chick bleed from her writsts/ that line in itself proves that 'ignorance is bliss'// 16 by tha way...only fags get tha boot from boi-scouts/ so why would i get ejected if i 'ate a brownie'* from tha inside out?// 18 so more like ur 'mouths a bathroom'...cuz all u 'speaks shyt'/ now u mad at me cuz 'boi scouts gave u tha pink slip'// (meanin hes gay) 20 like a 'hole in ur skull'...u must lost ur mental/ u think u beatin curse?...then ur names half right...'mental'// 22 now ur 'black an blue' like ur AVI, cuz 'punches' uve had-plenty/ an now u should change ur name pah...cuz 'funda-mentalz'...u dont have-any// 24 empire carpets...tha carpet manufactures with next day installation brownie...female version of boi scouts good battle pah'...should be close wit tha votin... |
Thats a lot of reading lol, but you both had a good battle, props to both of you, but i think 7 Curse took it more, i was feeling his flow a little more and i think his punches were a little better.
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iight props 2 both it was a good battle but funda-mentalz came hard wit his punches as for u 7curse u needed to up ta par ya game i mean c'mon u basically told us a story about his lines u gotta battle him not recite his shyt in ur words but still it was close i was jus feelin funda-mentalz jus a lil more
vote=fundamentalz |
Vote=7curse
Fundamentalz had a decent flow, but this was one sided. 7curse took it with punches ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
aight 2-1 curse...keep tha votes commin............................................ .....uppppppin.................................... .......
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I got to go with curse here slight better wrdplay flow and puNches
cause thats how you get a BATTLE CONTROL THE WHOLE THING This was dope battle guys BUT i feel curse came for the WIN |
yO YOU FORGOT TO POLL ON MY BATTLE SO GO BACK AND HIT IT UP
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*cough*Dick-riders*cough*
...not one punch he used without.. feeding.... upping for votes............................. |
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uppin....dont sleep |
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^^yep........still uppin for votes................(4).......................... ................dont sleep.........................
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Yo im'a hit this right quick wit a honest one but while i read can you kats check my battle and vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76197 |
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werd.............................................. .......... but lots of fuckin reading lol no hate and shit just being honest |
last uppin dont sleep............................................. .........................................
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aight, this is wut i think. Funda-Mentalz started out strong.
then you gotta lil lazy in the Middle and End.. wordplay was decent but all your barz kept switchen lenght like you were in 3 different battles..over-all..good verse..LONG tho. Curse fed off your Verse alot. And that made his verse a lil stronger on the Punches. curses verse had a tiny bit better flow too. close battle, but ima have to give it to Curse.. cant poll vote yet, but i aint a Newb. see...these are good werdplays...an proper quotations/ when ur "quotes" arent right an lines have no relations// 10 so after u read my verse...please take notes/ of intelligent rhymin...where if u did 'audio' ud still 'tryta use quotes'// 12 i liked that alot.^^ Fuck Sleeperz. http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9862#post739862 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279 |
yo dat battle wuz long but hott az fuck props to both but i think funda-mentalz edge it out wit hiz punches
vote-funda mentalz |
Fundamentalz killed this shit as far as I'm concerned.
Some real nice wordplay and some real nice punches. Real fucking long... But that's cuz Curse screwed up the rules. A bar is two lines, always has been always will be. Besides, the rules say, "the usual" and that means no feeding. Curse fed. End of story. |
no sleepin...just a few more votes or one...just vote please............................................ ...............................................
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76274
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ can u catss hit it up i thoguht 7 curse caem harder in this battel beetter punhces plus his flow wassik vote- 7 hi t da link up honestly pc |
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aight I'll have to go for curse, I was feeling his flow a lil more and he came hard with his punches. Probs to both though, nice drops from both.
Fundamentalz had some nice shit going though, with hard punches but I'll have to give it to curse 1luv |
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aaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiigggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhtttt tttttt......this is tha 5th time so im done uppin...but pleas can some-one just finish this one...i mean literally...one more vote
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breakdown
multies hmm both metas both punches fun flow 7 consistancy fun worth readin both personals both wordplay hmm didnt see much but saw a lil by fun long ass battle in my opinion it only took me 30 mins to read it lol jk overall i gotta give it to fun |
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