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7curse 08-25-03 05:45 PM

7curse vs. Funda-mentalz
 
werd...

16-24 bars
u spit first.
no crew, dickryde, hater...tha usual
best of luck ta ya

deadline...tommorow night (before wednesday, literally)

Funda-mentalz 08-26-03 12:56 AM

7curse...sounds egyptian lol...
Preparing for a long-ass battle
Look at all these "BARZ" I HIT, dis-rappa-need-to-come-off-IT cuz I "FLOW-PISSED" so call me and "ALCOHOLIC"/
Dawg ya bettah spit-SPECIFIC-sippin gin and TONIC-writin-in-"HYROGLIFICS"-cause-ya-alias-is "SYMBOLIC"!

Check it-I shoot-"shots" cause ya ordered the "ROUNDS"-put-holes-in-ya-chest-make-ya-lose-a-few POUNDS/
I spit-hard-wit NOUNS and i'll work in ya "slots" like I was at the "Georgian DOWNS"! (casino)

But I ain't gonna "gamble" with S-T-D's, this fag likes kids that's why he's always P-M ing ME/
Tryna get NEXT-TO-ME by MOLESTIN-ME, you couldn't sleep-"tight" if you "R-I-P'D" with ME!

I'm about to dump your B-O-D-I-E-in-shits-OCEAN, only way you could "beat" me is by usin hand-LOTION/
I'll "kill" you with DEVOTION, 'Curse is already "down-beat" cause he spits without "EMOTION"...

Can't break ya "heart", cause ya have no "FEELINGS"-only way you'd get "high" on me is if ya were hung from a CEILING/
I'm "WHEELING"-and-DEALING, the way I burn-"rubber", I've got your bitch SQUEALING, unlink you-that pussy has MEANING!

You're KNEELING-PRAYING TO-MUNTU, he might give ya a break/
But it's already over-ya-drifted to shits lake!

I STAKE-out ya STYLE like boot-camp in the West-NILE/
And I'll SMILE, as the jury votes against-this-PEDIFILE!

My rhymes are VERSATILE, yours are just USE-LESS like George BUSH'S public AD-DRESSES/
You're gettin fucked faster then Bill Clinton's BITCHES, I just hope you'll be faster too EXPRESS-THIS...

I wanted 10 lines cause nobody wanna read-a-book KID/
Now this gettin' slept on like Pam-LEE'S TITS!

I started strong, then slowly LACKING just to sike you OUT/
Send you PACKING like when you "ate" a "BROWNIE" and got kicked outta "boy-SCOUTS"!

This kid's CURSED cause he can't-rip-a-VERSE/
Whats WORSE?? He-WORKS-as-a-NURSE and carries-a-PURSE!

Ya' style-switches, and right now its REVERSED...so Ima fast-FORWARD-and-question-this NERD/
When did the ABSURD-TRANSFER-OCCUR to-guys-you PREFER?!

Check it-with-quick-SPITZ-I-BLITZ-your-SHIT/
Your no rapper dawg, go back to da PY-RA-MID!

I'm battling MYSELF, HITTIN 16 is almost as rare as FINDIN-an-ELF/
It's easy for you, cuz you have a book of pre-writes SITTIN on-ya-shelf/

Im sneaky-with-"STEALTH" call me B-2 the way I bomb-this-set/
Only been in the game fo' a while and still I rap like-a-vet/

Ahh endin the shit with one last punch
I'll give you "Stigmata"-a-true-"hand" in bleeding/
16 "sugar-coated-barz", and you still have a "sweet-tooth" for feeding...
(Stigmata=some movie where kid's hands bleed or some shit like that...rent it)

Funda-mentalz 08-26-03 03:47 PM

uppin for ya spit.............................................. ...good luck dawg.............................................. ................................

7curse 08-26-03 04:04 PM

7curse respondZ:

(first off, a line is a bar...so 16 bars means 16 lines...not 16 doubles...justa tell ya) (an whats with all this egyptian shyt?, an the pedifile shyt?)

tha only thing i molest are ur weak ass werds/ that put losses on ur record...so heres ur third// 2
an only cuz ur a 'flamer' would u 'spit fire'/ if ur a representation of ur town...then i could take out all of Empire//(his hometown) 4
or maybe ur 'prince' of ur town...or 'tha former artist'/ gettin 'rolled in battles' like 'Empire carptets'*// 6
u battlin curse-an u 'catcha loss', like 'randy moss'/ cuz i got 'core values'...an ur 'fundamentalz are lost'// 8
see...these are good werdplays...an proper quotations/ when ur "quotes" arent right an lines have no relations// 10
so after u read my verse...please take notes/ of intelligent rhymin...where if u did 'audio' ud still 'tryta use quotes'// 12
u admited defeat when ur 'punches came ta callin me a fagget'/ thats why theres 'KY jelly' on tha 'win'...bitch an 'u cant grasp-it'// 14
an in stigmata...tha chick bleed from her writsts/ that line in itself proves that 'ignorance is bliss'// 16
by tha way...only fags get tha boot from boi-scouts/ so why would i get ejected if i 'ate a brownie'* from tha inside out?// 18
so more like ur 'mouths a bathroom'...cuz all u 'speaks shyt'/ now u mad at me cuz 'boi scouts gave u tha pink slip'// (meanin hes gay) 20
like a 'hole in ur skull'...u must lost ur mental/ u think u beatin curse?...then ur names half right...'mental'// 22
now ur 'black an blue' like ur AVI, cuz 'punches' uve had-plenty/ an now u should change ur name pah...cuz 'funda-mentalz'...u dont have-any// 24

empire carpets...tha carpet manufactures with next day installation
brownie...female version of boi scouts

good battle pah'...should be close wit tha votin...

Menik 08-26-03 04:34 PM

Thats a lot of reading lol, but you both had a good battle, props to both of you, but i think 7 Curse took it more, i was feeling his flow a little more and i think his punches were a little better.

insanewhiteboy 08-26-03 07:23 PM

iight props 2 both it was a good battle but funda-mentalz came hard wit his punches as for u 7curse u needed to up ta par ya game i mean c'mon u basically told us a story about his lines u gotta battle him not recite his shyt in ur words but still it was close i was jus feelin funda-mentalz jus a lil more

vote=fundamentalz

Rappad 08-26-03 08:32 PM

Vote=7curse
Fundamentalz had a decent flow, but this was one sided. 7curse took it with punches
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7curse 08-27-03 01:08 PM

aight 2-1 curse...keep tha votes commin............................................ .....uppppppin.................................... .......

MiCsYcKlE 08-27-03 01:21 PM

I got to go with curse here slight better wrdplay flow and puNches
cause thats how you get a BATTLE CONTROL THE WHOLE THING

This was dope battle guys BUT i feel curse came for the WIN

MiCsYcKlE 08-27-03 01:28 PM

yO YOU FORGOT TO POLL ON MY BATTLE SO GO BACK AND HIT IT UP
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Funda-mentalz 08-27-03 07:33 PM

*cough*Dick-riders*cough*
...not one punch he used
without..
feeding....
upping for votes.............................

Funda-mentalz 08-27-03 08:09 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Funda-mentalz
*cough*Dick-riders*cough*
...not one punch he used
without..
feeding....
upping for votes.............................

uppin....dont sleep

Funda-mentalz 08-27-03 08:48 PM

UPping again (3)............................................... ..........................................

DeadlySilence 08-27-03 10:42 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by insanewhiteboy
iight props 2 both it was a good battle but funda-mentalz came hard wit his punches as for u 7curse u needed to up ta par ya game i mean c'mon u basically told us a story about his lines u gotta battle him not recite his shyt in ur words but still it was close i was jus feelin funda-mentalz jus a lil more

vote=fundamentalz



Yep that is pretty much what it all is about.

Funda-mentalz 08-28-03 12:08 AM

^^yep........still uppin for votes................(4).......................... ................dont sleep.........................

Tupac55 08-28-03 12:13 AM

Yo im'a hit this right quick wit a honest one but while i read can you kats check my battle and vote?


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76197

Tupac55 08-28-03 12:19 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by insanewhiteboy
iight props 2 both it was a good battle but funda-mentalz came hard wit his punches as for u 7curse u needed to up ta par ya game i mean c'mon u basically told us a story about his lines u gotta battle him not recite his shyt in ur words but still it was close i was jus feelin funda-mentalz jus a lil more

vote=fundamentalz



werd.............................................. .......... but lots of fuckin reading lol

no hate and shit just being honest

Funda-mentalz 08-28-03 02:55 AM

last uppin dont sleep............................................. .........................................

Dr.SeusS 08-28-03 03:13 AM

aight, this is wut i think. Funda-Mentalz started out strong.
then you gotta lil lazy in the Middle and End..
wordplay was decent but all your barz kept switchen lenght like you were in 3 different battles..over-all..good verse..LONG tho.


Curse fed off your Verse alot. And that made his verse a lil stronger on the Punches.
curses verse had a tiny bit better flow too.
close battle, but ima have to give it to Curse..
cant poll vote yet, but i aint a Newb.

see...these are good werdplays...an proper quotations/ when ur "quotes" arent right an lines have no relations// 10
so after u read my verse...please take notes/ of intelligent rhymin...where if u did 'audio' ud still 'tryta use quotes'// 12



i liked that alot.^^

Fuck Sleeperz.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...9862#post739862

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

Focus'd 08-28-03 01:09 PM

yo dat battle wuz long but hott az fuck props to both but i think funda-mentalz edge it out wit hiz punches


vote-funda mentalz

Born To Kill 08-28-03 02:07 PM

Fundamentalz killed this shit as far as I'm concerned.
Some real nice wordplay and some real nice punches.
Real fucking long...
But that's cuz Curse screwed up the rules.
A bar is two lines, always has been always will be.
Besides, the rules say, "the usual" and that means no feeding.
Curse fed.
End of story.

7curse 08-28-03 03:10 PM

no sleepin...just a few more votes or one...just vote please............................................ ...............................................

KRYPTIK~FLOWZ 08-28-03 03:12 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76274

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ can u catss hit it up
i thoguht 7 curse caem harder in this battel
beetter punhces plus his flow wassik
vote- 7
hi t da link up honestly pc

7curse 08-28-03 03:23 PM

vote yall....sssssstttttttoooooopppppppp slllllllleeeeeeeepppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn.. ...............................

Split-eyez 08-28-03 03:33 PM

aight I'll have to go for curse, I was feeling his flow a lil more and he came hard with his punches. Probs to both though, nice drops from both.
Fundamentalz had some nice shit going though, with hard punches but I'll have to give it to curse

1luv

7curse 08-28-03 03:33 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOO

7curse 08-28-03 03:51 PM

aaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiigggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhtttt tttttt......this is tha 5th time so im done uppin...but pleas can some-one just finish this one...i mean literally...one more vote

Mentally Kursed 08-28-03 05:23 PM

breakdown

multies hmm both
metas both
punches fun
flow 7
consistancy fun
worth readin both
personals both
wordplay hmm didnt see much but saw a lil by fun

long ass battle in my opinion it only took me 30 mins to read it lol jk

overall i gotta give it to fun


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