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rApId_LyRiCs vs. IceBerg420
10 Lines Max
No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No D/R votes ][\/][.O.B. Cant vote No freepostin U spit 1st |
i said 10-15 lines or 10 barz......ill probably spit barz....cuz thats my style........anyway you gonna lose....ok im startin to spit afta im done you got 20 min..........aight
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afta im done this bitch gonna be named john "doe" iceberg? naa this nigga nottin but a flake of "snow" one apon many.. nigga your skills just dont "show"/1
bitch that aighnt hand lotion thats "lube" got breast implants just so he can say he touched a "boob" iceberg?not no more,afta im done he gonna be a fuckin "icecube"/2 im suprised this nigga even "shown up" whats does this bitch have in common wit fireworks? both look betta "blown up"/3 fuck this bitch he beat me once "before" but now im evenin out the "score" i used his style last time...fuck thats just a "bore"/4 titanic whould split this kid like they didnt know he was "theer"(there) cuz nigga the only thing sinkin is your "career"/5 last merkin and last defeat...youd "figure" bitch doesnt even bother puttin last win in his "signature"/6 this nigga beggin for a lyrical "smackin" whatch well you merk us? ive been watchin for days and that hasnt "happend"/7 common niggas line up to battle iceberg if you got a merkin "thirst" but you betta be flexible cuz he wont battle enless you spit "first"/8 if this slut was throwin up lava he still wouldnt spit "hot" what does this bitch have in common wit a gun? both where made to be "shot"/9 bitch drop the keyboard take the "loss" just quick written nigga turn the moniter "off"/10 explanations last merkin and last defeat...youd "figure" bitch doesnt even bother puttin last win in his "signature"/ this nigga beginnin for a lyrical "smackin" whatch well you merk us? ive been watchin for days and that hasnt "happend"/ ^^^^^look at sig and under his avatar......... |
Took Yo bitch ass long enough to Post Motha Fucka......Get ready to have ya ass handed to U....AGAin
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it took me 11 minutes bitch so shut your face fagget............................................ ............go get your prewritten................
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Here we go again, Round 2, time to Merk U...
The 2nd ass whoopin....the 1st musta hurt u.... Mentally......... becuz U cryin for anotha one... I guess ya stupid ass didn't learn from the 1st huh? (LoL) U the worst rapper RB has ever heard of.... Over there Whinin and bitchin Like that fagget from the Murda...(Ja Rule) Well "what would RB be Without Youuuuuuuuuu!!".... I'll tell u....... It'll be One less herb to think about... Especially one that has "cum" foamin from his Mouth...(Fagget) 9 Lines ........ Oh....Thats It....wait a minute lemme shit it on this nigga head Right Quick.......................... *Squats* ________________________________________ There ten Lines (LMAO)....I call it "The fill in ya Own Finisher" Line cuz U got merked!! LoL |
Dont vote if U don't undersatnd the Personals..........................
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i think ice merked this cat yo....better everything in my eyes.............................................. ......
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^shot yourself in the foot so many times i'd be surprised if you walked out of the battle Quote:
^played + plus dubious http://www.streetverbalz.com/vb/sho...=&threadid=8148 advice to rapid lyrics - simply improve - stop stretching bars...that's cheating plus it hurts your flow when you lack multis or internal rhyme, don't put quotations marks, "", around shit that isn't wordplay, metaphorical or complex....loss the bullshit - gay and homoerotic disses, long winded fillers and take a SEVERAL tutorialS on how to battle Quote:
^STRAIGHTFORWARD MERKIN' - SOLID UPPER CUTS AGAINST A HERB TEXTEE VOTE - ICE Took all categories of battle - including killer punchlines |
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stop freepostin in this battle you fagget............................................ .................................................
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iceberg got busy on dis.......dont get me wrong rapid i wuz feelin ya shit till i read hiz.....mad props to iceberg better everything
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damn thing wouldnt let me put in a vote afta i put my first post in so sorry to freepost just tryin to do da pole
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holy shit.....his had good flow i give him that...but where is the creativity and punches? it was so fuckin basic.........common
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the flow made all da punches hit harder sorry dowg he did it right man i seen u spit some harder shit tho b4 so i wuz expectin better
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he had flow andd the punches he had (like 1) hit a bit harder i guess but i didnt see any creativity or wordplay personals there was flow thats it....he was rhymin elementry words like U.......?????? common rb is suckers to a good flow.........
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ouch, iceberg merked rapid, his verse was better in every aspect flow punches wordplay etc.
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haha....what a dr..... wordplay and punches? what the fuck look at his rhymin words................... holy shit how many blow jobs you get for that vote?
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flow even yall straight on that punchs ice burg i thought he came harder than rapid but ya did good multis iceburg ya both did pretty good just sein more from ice berg vote ice berg and please go peep the mc thrilla vs aguhny battle props to both nice battle |
why you people sayin he came harder wit punches all the time ??? what punches can someone plz paste them here....and wordplay? where someone come and show me where that is.....???????
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I'll have to go for Ice
Just better punches, while the other guy was trying hard to put as much disses as possible in a line. No hate intented, but Ice just came fast and furious. Vote - ICE peace |
this must be dr how all these votes are rollin in......this is the fastest battle ive eva had holy shit enuff wit this dr......
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Rapid My whole verse was Punchlines LoL..........................Thats why U aint gettin no votes man............................................... ...Quality over quantity remeber that and U might become a good MC one day.
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w/e i thought my verse was betta then yours tho i liked your flow i didnt see any good punches or any wordplay at all..........
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i could be just as good as you but i would have to suck a lot of dicks for that.......................................
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LMAO..........Whatever dickhead.............Let the voting continue and stop freepostin all your complaints.........................
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w/e man i aighnt even hatin i just thought i took this battle but w/e................................................. .......
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Yeah, i think ice took this one, he had better punches and i was feeling his flow better, but good battle to both of you, very close in my opinion but my votes goes to..Ice
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Preciate it MC............Uppin............................... ........
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i think iceburg took this, no explanation really needed....
overall better verse... poll vote- iceburg.. ...yep.... |
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