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BarBreakeR 08-28-03 05:59 AM

BarBreakeR vs alter- ego
 
RULES:
no d/r
no hate
u spit first
unlimited lines
no crew votes
no biting
no feedin
no bitching
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SPIT NOW

alter-ego 08-28-03 06:22 AM

yo -look,

I answered you’re call like the grim reaper, now I’m here time to die mr. dickeater/

‘barbreaker’ you couldn’t break a mars bars, antique lyrics spittin ‘bout killin like sars/

swap an ‘E’ for an ‘I’ now you in ‘THE KINGS OF DOPINESS’, barbreaker I re-name you emcee lyricaless/

you spit like a man wiv no saliva, yo times runnin out like mr Sutherland -Keifer/

ya got no hope, give up while you on tha ropes, say ya prayers if ya catholic phone the pope/

beware im’a drive ya to suicide, shoot ya in this lyrical drive-by, my critique for you – he’s whack but at least he tried.

BarBreakeR 08-28-03 06:52 AM

This Guy Is A Fagget…So Stick To Sucking Dik/
When U Drooling Cum Is The Only Time U’ll Successfully Spit/
I Can Merk You Easy And I Can Even Beat Your Alter~Ego/
I Feel Sorry For This Retart Wid No Punches So I’ma Give U A Fuckin Free~Go/
You Cant Even Afford A Win..Like Some Fuckin Cheepo/
You Couldn’t Even Elevate If Your Computer Was On Stairs/
Don’t Bother Spittin Back…Cause Really No One Cares//
Wid Ur Pussy Rap...U wont Have Punches Cause The’ll Be More Like Pulls Of Hair/
After My Punches Kill This Kat I am Gonna Give Him A Momorial/
I Red Ur Rhymes Before..I Think U Need A Trip To The Turorial/
Ur Got No Wins And By The Looks Of Ur Verse I Think It Aint Gon Change/
Your Punches Didn’t Hit Me Cause They Were Weak And Loosing Range/
I Think Its Strange..That Someone Could Actually Get So Wack/
Its Kind of A Shame..Cause It Is A Waste Of My Time of Actually Post Back/
Ur Just Like Your Sig Absolutely Nothing/
Ur A Fuckin Chicken And This Merking Is Gonna Be Ur Stuffing/
This Bitch Had Six Lines Of Rubbish And I’ma Throw It In the Bin/
Wid Rhymes Like That How The Fuck You Gon Get A Win/
FINISHER
I’ve Obviously Merked You And You Know You Could’ve Neva Won/
This Guys Is Looking Stunned..I Bet He Thinks He Should’ve Run/

FIRST WIN TO ME…R.I.P ALTER-EGO

BarBreakeR 08-28-03 07:02 AM

i am upping for some votes ppl dont sleep on it
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mc thrilla 08-28-03 07:40 AM

breakdown

flow even
punchs barbreaker i thought he came harder than alter ego good shit thow
multis bar didnt see very much from alter
vote bar

BarBreakeR 08-28-03 08:10 AM

^^^yo man u didn't poll vote...so can u poll vote
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Emotion 08-28-03 08:16 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by BarBreakeR
This Guy Is A Fagget…So Stick To Sucking Dik/
When U Drooling Cum Is The Only Time U’ll Successfully Spit/
I Can Merk You Easy And I Can Even Beat Your Alter~Ego/
I Feel Sorry For This Retart Wid No Punches So I’ma Give U A Fuckin Free~Go/
You Cant Even Afford A Win..Like Some Fuckin Cheepo/
You Couldn’t Even Elevate If Your Computer Was On Stairs/
Don’t Bother Spittin Back…Cause Really No One Cares//
Wid Ur Pussy Rap...U wont Have Punches Cause The’ll Be More Like Pulls Of Hair/
After My Punches Kill This Kat I am Gonna Give Him A Momorial/
I Red Ur Rhymes Before..I Think U Need A Trip To The Turorial/
Ur Got No Wins And By The Looks Of Ur Verse I Think It Aint Gon Change/
Your Punches Didn’t Hit Me Cause They Were Weak And Loosing Range/
I Think Its Strange..That Someone Could Actually Get So Wack/
Its Kind of A Shame..Cause It Is A Waste Of My Time of Actually Post Back/
Ur Just Like Your Sig Absolutely Nothing/
Ur A Fuckin Chicken And This Merking Is Gonna Be Ur Stuffing/
This Bitch Had Six Lines Of Rubbish And I’ma Throw It In the Bin/
Wid Rhymes Like That How The Fuck You Gon Get A Win/
FINISHER
I’ve Obviously Merked You And You Know You Could’ve Neva Won/
This Guys Is Looking Stunned..I Bet He Thinks He Should’ve Run/

FIRST WIN TO ME…R.I.P ALTER-EGO


fuck that was funny.when i versed him i just spat some wack shit cause' he's a newb but u burnt him to a crisp..............meh

Vote:Bar

p.s hit htis up against the same opponent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0178#post740178

BarBreakeR 08-28-03 08:25 AM

ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL

BarBreakeR 08-29-03 02:36 AM

ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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Dr.SeusS 08-29-03 03:32 AM

aight. Alter-ego, your punches were soft. Your first
line was your best line, and thos type of lines are
played...aight verse tho, not tottaly wack.

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Bar Breaker, you started out strong with your 1rst 5 or six lines.
when saying 1 bar= 1line tho...lol...you posted a way Longer
verse. But it doesnt matter your vocab, punches..and especaially
flow was better..
vote=BarBreaker..
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.


Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll)

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

Condom_King 08-29-03 03:34 AM

bar took this one with harder punches. 78423 52375 470895634127564316y347 643176y904376-347-86348290-678-342769843769-83742693847 vote bar

BarBreakeR 08-29-03 05:18 AM

ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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BarBreakeR 08-29-03 05:46 AM

ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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BarBreakeR 08-30-03 01:52 AM

yo alter clean out ur pm box i needa ask you somin....

Pz
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B-Kast 08-30-03 03:09 AM

First cat only had 2 bars, extend your length alter....
And bar that was prti good for newb reminds me of Sheoney_Zany when he first started.....
Punches flow and structure cam,e harder from barbraka and thats what he took it with...

Keep spititn both cats and keep elevating...

Pce

BarBreakeR 08-30-03 03:40 AM

^^coo thanks for da vote 2 dawg......Pz
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BarBreakeR 08-30-03 06:52 AM

^^coo thanks for da vote 2 dawg......Pz
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BarBreakeR 08-31-03 12:04 AM

this is gettin really badly slept on
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Strategies 08-31-03 12:23 AM

BarBreakeR took this . Alter Ego did'nt put any kind
of effort in his verse.Good Punchlines, and length
was aiight 2.

GOOD SHIT

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Rappad 08-31-03 12:27 AM

ok
Alter ego-wack verse, punches did not hit hard at all, flow was decent but still a bit choppy, structure was kinda messed up, wordplay nonexistent.
Bar-decent verse, punches kinda hit, flow also a bit choppy but still aight, wordplay was there, thoguh not often. Not a very good verse, but good enough for the win.
Vote=Bar


And that, my friends, is word^^


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