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Phrozen VS. Defaced
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no crew/hate/dr no biting no feeding spit immediatly |
immediatly as in one right after another im sick of ppl prewriting........................................ .................................................. ...............................
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Ur writings like a felony, everythin u say is stale
Send u to court, the judge puts ur ass in jail Get in the shower and drop ur soap on "purpose" Bend over, look up and say "Bubba come 'Work This'" Ur worthless, u go to the olive garden, ask the waiter to "toss ur salad" Take him home, put him on ur bed and sing him a love ballad Talked to ur girl last night, she said ur dick was so small it was "scary" She said u fukked her 20 times and still couldn't pop her "cherry" My rhymes invade ur mind like "telekenetics" Radioactive rhymes that fukk up ur "genetics" Spit cold words, leaving u phrozen in your "track" (ur rhyme) Leave your mouth "shitty" like smokin to much "crack" (like butt crack) |
you walk around like your the shit of this place
but they call you "Defaced" cause your a discrace to your race but its my fault cause i broke the rubber,blew a nut up in your mother and thats how you got here you little mother fucker your lyrics are "Phrozen" so listen to my flows then you little fake ass punk your jus posin talkin bout my dick cause your insecure makes me feel like i won this battle for sure an bubba wasnt that the fucka you chase screamin HUBBAHUBBA so im outta here now im goin to rape your motha and give you a little brotha,sucka |
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almost an even battle, but phrozen had a much better rhyme scheme, funnier punches, good vocab, all around well-written verse...
vote = phrozen no beef though D yo both hit this up w/ an honest vote: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76033 |
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yo Phrozen nice battle
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yea really phat battle dawg it was tight....still uppin............................................. ...............................................
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good lines bout my mom ur rhymes were tight hopefully i get u if not no big loss it was a great battle. Peace
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yea fo sho mabie one of us will get 1 - 0 in our battle record,but insanely tight............................................. .........uppin
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Well not much to go by here, I mean ya both had flow, but nothing special. I have read much better drops by defaced, but I guess he only needed to win this battle not kill anyone...
Flow=tie Personals=defaced word play=non existant humor= defaced complexity=defaced (even though not much) Defaced you had better vocab for sure, but you can elevate it, use meta's and some complex multi's. You have much potential dawg, keep elevating.. Phrozen your ryhme was too basic and you did not honor the rules, so there was really no need for me to explain my vote. You just feed off defaced's verse, it's cool but not when it is a specific rule. feed well myself, but if it is a rule, you should at least limit the feed down to one line of the other guy's verse. You feed off of his more than once... My vote=defaced Good luck to you both.. |
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What battle did you read, vocab was non existant on the side of prozen, plus he feed off the other guy's verse, dawg ya need to lean how to vote, sounds like d/r to me... This is the reason battles here don't mean a thing, read the rules and vote as they stipulate.. Voting is the most important aspect of this game, if it's not going to be recognized, then niether is our elevation.. |
man shut up bounce i fuckin ripped this shit up uppin 4 votes............................................. ...............
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I bet you want me to shut up before more peep the fact that the rules were violated... One more thing ya did not rip shit! I read harder drops in the cyphers...
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And stop fucken upping this a million times, damn dawg, get ya shit straight... Come correct or don't come at all!!
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fuckin faggot keep talkin no ones listenin.......................................... .................................................. .............................
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and better punches |
phrozen is a lil fagit he heard that eminem freestyle and bit fuck biters i vote 4 the otha mafucka tho
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yo this voting is whack i should already have the win w/ those 4 votes he fed like non other and in the rules it says NO FEEDING so wats goin on here
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Phrozen is just that, with rappers vescosity... Fucken punk called me a faggot....Handle ya shit phrozen, step if your gonna talk, calling me a fag, when it's obvious your Whack......
Ya don't stand half a chance... |
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overall completely wack battle but ima go wit phrozen on dis 1 wit a lil betta flow nd punches both of ya need to up 2 par ya game
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ok explain how he has better flow I rhymed way harder words together. Wow he rhymes Mutha,fukka, brotha, sucka, WOW hard. This is bullshit. He also fed and how do u guys say he had better vocab. I had telekenics, genetics, radioactive. Fukk it watever.
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Ayo,my vote goes to Deface even though this battle
was'nt all that good.What ever happened to punchlines, metaphors,and wordplay or something nice,you cats are all stuck with fucking each other's mother and all these dick jokes.It's hard to vote on these battles. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
thanx for the vote.
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yo peeps we need some votes here only 2 more votes come on now hit this up w/ some votes PLEASE............................................ ..................................
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yup^^^ hit this up... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76446 |
yo just one more vote so i can finish this kid off hit this up w/ a honest reply............................................. .................................................. .........................
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MODs Close This.. Both Your Upps
Are Far Above 5.. Obey The Rules And This Wont Happen................. .................................................. .... |
deface took this juss cuz of his flow.. like mc81 said its hard to vote on these kinds of battles... ya'll freepostin like a bitch too.. upped it lots.. dont do that u can get banned fer either vote-defaced
ya'll please hit dis up wit a honest vote http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76687 me against meks rematch must have 500 posts ^^ http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76900 me against stormin lyrics |
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