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ShyLock vs. brainsurgeon
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Actions speak louder than words, so your record speak for-itself!!!!
Being an inapt, daft, wack, ya ass'd still loose if you bit off-the-net!!!! <1> And chose the voters...see, I take no prisoners, so this is a-slaughter!!!! Fuck this herb, I'll chop trees and leave your WHOLE FAM WITHOUT A-COME-BACK!!!! <2> If you had dinner in a youth hostel, you couldn't "dorm-in-ate"!!!! I'll rip this pupil....post it to sociopaths....make ya think you can "an-eye-elate"!!!! <3> (get it? annihilate) Like doughnuts thrown at kelvar..wow..and penetrating punches you don't have'! With three litres of anthrax, yes you'd be sick..yet DEMONSTRATEDLY BE WACK! <4> SO SHUT UP..surgeon is ya senior.. & like dna..'retards can't unravel me'! Apart from my shadow..Beeyotch..nobody..NOBODY!!.. HANGS WITH ME!!!! <5> So you-hyped-yo'-spits,-lied..fool-spited-the-hit-like..you caught me pulling-my-prick-out.. yo' wife(y).. but.. you didn't!!!! If you'd keyed in shrunked gloves..YOU-COULDN'T-TYPE-YO'-SHIT-TIGHT!!!! <6> Like calometry insulating layers, you need to con-temp-plate Brain surgeon exterminates, like indian prostitute exports I'll "desi"-"crate"!!!! <7> AMAZED!!.. You thought yourself untouchable with A DUMB-SPIT!!.. Rolled like J-LO's ass..WHO THE FUCK TOLD YOU YOU COULD "TOUCH~THIS"?? <8> Like a pimp interrupted..'BITCH..YOU HAD TO BE SORRY YOU SPOKE'!!!! B 'HADTA MAKE YA' ASS bOuNcE THE FUCK OUT'..like a cheque that YOU WROTE!!!! <9> I'm-the-reason-you-sleep... the-door-closed-with-a-chain!!! You-the-reason-thru-Jesus... the-Lord-gave-monkeys-a-brain!!! <10> Like 'chocolate cake'... my bars come with icing Battle me?? That's worse than lotto!!.. THERE'S NO 'SLIM CHANCE' THAT 'YOU MIGHT WIN'!!! <11> Can you inscribe incisions tight enough to replace vector besons? Because the physical result of competition, with me, must be affixation!!!<12> My 'flow hadta rip yo' shit out'..like fabric stain removals!!.. Ko'd with this bar..'cause it TAKES "offense" to homosexuals!!!!<13> This dummy's useless, I'll c-walk your, turf take the earth, and you wouldn't do shit!!!! You aint as ruthless, your punchlines are toothless!!!! So post, let the voters make you loose this!!!! <14> |
--SHYLOCK'S VERSE:--
ay BITCH! where the fuck that come from? wasn't from your mind, if you meant for that shit to be a joke you forgot about the punchline// you're so small i could roll you into a small human ball, pinch your blood out - freeze it and use it for my paintball gun to paint parents wall// i'm here to pursue to make sure you continue your losing streak, if brains were muscles - BITCH! you'd still be weak// i don't kiss and tell - i do what i do and then i analyze, i could murder you wit so much velocity that even death would get surprised// i could be a bowling pin - you could be a bowling ball rolling with wrath, when you hit me - i'd still be standin as your ass got split in half// next time come at me harder than that - was you even thinkin dude? well i didn't think so - OH! THAT'S RIGHT! that's cuz you only graduated from typing school! |
aight. skylock, your verse was boring. your punches were ok, but nothing stood out...nothing hit hard. your flow was a little off too..
ay BITCH! where the fuck that come from? wasn't from your mind, if you meant for that shit to be a joke you forgot about the punchline// this is the Only Line I liked..^^ you're so small i could roll you into a small human ball, pinch your blood out - freeze it and use it for my paintball gun to paint parents wall// that was Clever, but you ended it like it wasn't directed towards your Opponent.(paint parents wall....or paint your parents wall...???i dont know..) ---------------------------------- BrainSurgeon. your flow was aight. The ryme Scheme i mean. not alotta people on r.b dont know what a good verse is..when coming to that...your punches were ok...you had half your verse standing out, either from creativity to a Decent punch...i could tell you got lazy near the end and little parts in the middle tho... over-all... vote-brainsurgeon... sorry i cant POLL vote yet. But i aint a NEWB. Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll) http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279 |
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=76274ill give me vote to brain surgen
goodb attle but da newb was weak wasnt feeelin ya shit bs came a bit harder vote bs an cud u guys hit my battle up one more vote pc |
PLEASE IF YOU DON'T HAVE 100 POSTS, [U]DON'T VOTE, WE DON'T NEED FREEPOSTS, I HOPE UNDERSTAND
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I liked brainsurgeons better, he simply had the edge on everything, shylock put in a few good punches, a few good multi's but not as well or often as brain....
Vote = brainsurgeon hit this up, needs two votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=76734 |
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Yep that is the skinny of the spit, good stuff somewhat, elevate to both of you. VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH NUTCASE. |
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surgeon took every category here in my opinion...other dude was wack....no hate............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77263 |
*explaining it better*
punches-surgeon flow-surgeon vocab-surgeon metas-surgeon multis-surgeon personals-nobody wordplay-surgeon hit this up with a vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77263 |
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Shylock could have had this verse if his length was longer,
you did'nt even try.Brainsurgeon's punches were knockin' Shylock the fuck out.Brainsurgeon the only place you messed up was your verse really did'nt rhyme.But good shit though. Could you check out my battle against Eyes mind assasin because it's getting slept on. >>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<< |
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Brainsurgeon is getting good shylock dint really stand a chance
he needs to evuelate brain kept on hitting shydint really and brain had some good wordplay il poll this if you vote fairly* here....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77546 Just pm and il poll it peace... |
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GOT BRAINS lol he won this one better over all............................................... ............................................
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