HellEvatioN vs> dom-N8
 

aight heres da rules: no feedin DICKRIDIN VOTES crew votes hate votes or bitin 20 line max 10 line min verse due A.S.A.P. and the rest is juss common sense

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fuck im bored ill spit lol.....


yo..
CUMMIN AT ME is like NARROW URETHRAS YOU WONT GET FAR/
you dont want know PART OF ME like a BROKEN CAR/
SMOKE YOU like a CIGAR go figure you entered in a wiggerous brawl/
i WONDER if bitches like you WEAR BRAS cuz ima STUFF YOU VERBALLY like TISSUES cuz yuh RHYMES ARE SO SMALL/
leave yuh face BLACK AND BLUE like you gave a BLIND SMURF HEAD/
leave yuh mouth SPEWIN RED like its on its PERIOD/
youre CLEARLY DEAD like BODIES ON THE PORCH/
SMEAR YUH HEAD so i can ERASE YOUR MIND any place and time you get BURNED like a TORCH/
you gonna FEEL THE BRIGHT LIGHT tonight like BULBS IN YUH SKIN/
kives and pins the right size might get in/
SLICE YUH SKIN verbally like PAPERCUTS wake yuh up with ak's killin yuh pup/
you couldnt DOMINATE a GHOST TOWN comes around goes around constant chain of you gettin shut the fuck up/


1 you dont need the good luck NE more my verse was wack...

ya name’s ‘Hellevation’ ya need to drop ya ‘H’ like a dyslexic,
now ya showing ‘ellevation’ but ya still gettin ya ass kicked/

ya age is unlucky cos ya 13, jinxed battle record still wiv no wins,
your bars are uneven like drinking on a boat when it’s stormin/

you couldn’t spit to save ya life if you were drownin in saliva,
your wackness is a crime now get on death row wiv the lifers/

you typed your rhyme like a~retarded~man~with~no~hands,
you make no sense like givin a~blind~man~a~magnifying~glass/

why you even tried to spit against me is an X-file for Scully & Mulder,
battle me, you & whose soldiers?, do try again though when you a bit older/

the text you wrote flowed like lava – it went cold & stood still,
it was nothing pretty to look up to, like ya mamma standin on a hill/

punchs elevation i thought he came harder
flow elevation dom's was kinda off
wordplay elevation
multis elevation didnt see very much from dom
vote elevation aight cuzz good battle it should be close

leave yuh face BLACK AND BLUE like you gave a BLIND SMURF HEAD/
leave yuh mouth SPEWIN RED like its on its PERIOD/
This shit didnt even rhyme man?

dom n8 had this easy hes obviously experienced from his style and structure......he gets my vote.......

go check my battles yo...........

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I'd say it was close, both newbies ...

Cept I think Dom-N8 had betta flowz & everything . Although h ebeen sayin tha otha dude was 13 so I gotta give ya props-Hellevation. but no arguement, Dom took this battle

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eastside_queen's vote didn't show up???????????????????????
maybe she forgot to poll vote???????????????????????????????

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that's 2-1 to nom-N8
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leave yuh face BLACK AND BLUE like you gave a BLIND SMURF HEAD/
leave yuh mouth SPEWIN RED like its on its PERIOD/


^^did rhyme....it's called syllables.....all i gotta say in this battle.....continue....

peace
4:20

all you were dissin me about was my age.. but aight.. i guess no love for the young emcee lol uppin............................................. ................................... 1

don't sleep on this just a few more votes peeps...........................
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vote goes to dom... Betta punches and flow, I was feeling his structure and his style just a lot betta... probs to the both of ya.
The newbie came out good though, but he needs a lil bit of elevation... no hate intended.

vote - dome

could you drop an honest vote right here? thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1747#post761747

couldnt say it better

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come on peeps vote on this shit so we can close the thread................................
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this shits ridiculous lol............... VOTE NOW OR ILL..ILL... yeah vote cmon..................................

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what the FUCK why aint nobody votin????????????? this is pissin me off lol !!!!!!!!!!!!!! VOTE !!!!!!!!! uppin............................................. ................................

lol......this shit is bein heavily slept on.......can't vote cuz Hell is in my crew......and get ur ass active u lazy shit...lol

peace
4:20

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c,mon peeps, just a couple more votes on this & we can close this shit...................................
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vote=dom

thought he was better overall, close shit tho props to both yu

peace out goodluck........................................

dom in8 took this he had better punchs he had wordplay and multis had an ok structure and complexity ya flow was tight x's was all over da thread vote dom and hit this shit up wit an honest vote niggas be sleepin on it aight niggas holla peace


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