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CRYP'][' 09-01-03 07:31 PM

CRYPT vs Pimpx01
 
u it first
15 lines

check in

peace

Pimpx01 09-01-03 07:50 PM

Yo I hate when niggas try to come at me I dont play this/
I have to spit first because im like Ali im the greatest/

Im like bubba gump im the shrimp boat captin and you my bitch/
Im gonna sit on my ass while you sweat and make me rich/

You like Ja-Rule niggas just dont like you neither do i nigga all I wanna do is fight you/
Im pimpin yo bitch i tell her what to do Next time shes givin you dome she gonna bite you/

Nigga im gonna give you a blow to the head and have you clouted/
Its like the buccaneers vs. the raiders in the super bowl you gonna get routed/

Yo nigga im like super man i gotta cape/
Im gonna run yo fat ass cause you outta shape/

Nigga dont get on my bad side im nasty im full of hate/
You dont get pussy you like Kobe you get charged for rape/

Yo nigga i gots no respect for you if you was a waiter you wouldnt get tipped/
You like a bad piece of paper nigga you just got ripped/

CRYP'][' 09-01-03 08:28 PM

Nigga this nigga that donchu got sumtin better To-Say?/
STFU Im not black You gettin beat down by a White boy Today/

I guess Spittin Run-On sentences and Stretched bars Is ur Game/
CRYPT will throw ya shit back at u and Smear it Like Shit Stains/

U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/

Im gettin Fed up wit u like Seein Jerid Repin Subway Commercials/
U make me Hurl............This bitch probably gobbles more nut than fuckin Squirrals/

Pimp U probably take this freestylin shit serioulsy wen I do it 4fun/
10 minutes I key shit down hit the Enter button Im already Done/

The vocab shown in ya verse says you Aint very good wit Nouns/
Im ur Critic, your verse was a bad movie, I give it 2 Thumbs Down/

If we were playin Battle ship Ide be sinkin ya Ass at every Angle/
U'll hit the Bedrocks, dissapear like Enterin the Bermuta Triangal/

Im a Feirce Storm sent here to Destroy ya lines and Errode Those/
Dissconnect u like Leggos, u couldnt flow If u wre under a Row Boat/


UPPIN

Pimpx01 09-01-03 08:42 PM

c'mon niggas somebody please vote

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CRYP'][' 09-01-03 09:38 PM

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CRYP'][' 09-02-03 12:23 AM

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CRYP'][' 09-02-03 01:33 PM

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tsheff112 09-02-03 02:52 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77400

Hit this up, let me get that feedback... There's no rules for this one because I live next door to the opponent, so we already know.

Pimpin01: I like your shit and you have the odds against you when you're first up. Your flow was on point, but the vocab was a little thin... Still an overall tight flow, don't get me wrong. Keep up that good shit.

Crypt: I have to say that you ripped this one. You already came into this with the advantage of second, but I like the way you flow. Good on the vocab. I don't have enough posts to vote, but my vote goes to you.

Favorite lines:
Pimpin01:You like Ja-Rule niggas just dont like you neither do i nigga all I wanna do is fight you/
Im pimpin yo bitch i tell her what to do Next time shes givin you dome she gonna bite you/

Crypt:U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/

Good original shit to both. Keep it up. Hit up that link and drop a line!

XEastSide_QueenX 09-02-03 02:57 PM

both newbies, close battle. .. . .




overall - crypt had betta flow and punches!!!!!

vote = cyrpt

Nice job playa!!!!!! ;o)


The vocab shown in ya verse says you Aint very good wit Nouns/
Im ur Critic, your verse was a bad movie, I give it 2 Thumbs Down/


^^HAHA * GREAT LINES!!!^^

EMCEE Cannibal 09-02-03 04:46 PM

going to have to go with crypt, killer punches and originallty

the both of you keep elivatin aight nigaz,

peace asjkfalk;sdjfl;askjflk;asdlfk;asdjlfk;js

CRYP'][' 09-02-03 05:36 PM

Holy Fuck vote.............................................. .................................................. ....

CRYP'][' 09-02-03 09:15 PM

FUCKIN UPPIN............................................. .................................................. .........

CRYP'][' 09-02-03 10:53 PM

Once again im fuckin uppin here so ppl can start fuckin votin......................................last time i battle a newb

CRYP'][' 09-03-03 01:16 AM

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CRYP'][' 09-03-03 01:11 PM

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**~SynText~** 09-03-03 01:19 PM

Quote:
U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/



that right there won it for Crypt......nufff said...better allaround punches...

vote.........................................CRYPT

mc thrilla 09-03-03 01:27 PM

break down
punchs i gace it to cryp he came harder than pimp
wordplay cryp didnt see nothin from pimp
multis cryp didnt see nothin from pimp
flow even
vote cryp and this shit up fo me niggas



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CRYP'][' 09-03-03 04:59 PM

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Edicius 09-03-03 05:17 PM

Crypt, Had Some Punches That Hit Harder,....Bot Need Some Elevation Not That Bad..Better Overall Vote=Crypt

KeMy$t 09-03-03 05:23 PM

Nigga this nigga that donchu got sumtin better To-Say?/
STFU Im not black You gettin beat down by a White boy Today/

Nice i agreed with u completely. Crypt had better flow and way better punches. Crypt also had better vocab. Vote=Crypt


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