Illman vs Focus'd
 

20 lines max
no hate
3-0 ko or first to 5
u spit first

lets go........

yo dis bitch aint gonna show.....close dis mutha fucka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo im the iLLman dog, who you calling a bitch
im calling you blind,
"this nigga must be out of his mind"
for calling out,
im someone you would fear on block
the eye of the glock
you focus, so you seeing me hot
you looking for L's
dog,
don't waste my time
im sick,
when ever you spit i'll murder you lines
i'll leave you brain on the bricks
cause im crimal minded
this battle is done,
im the wrong path to cross
i'll let the world know you soft, then i'll post flaws
i'll show you a thread
i'll show you what can happen happen to beef
you weak,
the strength of a man is more then you speak
it's more then you seek
you blind, why your sticks in the street,
"so stay on curb"
listen
life is greasy
fix your focus motherfucker,
"cause you can't even see me"

" who's next"

"What" where you at
i'll show you what can happen to beef
i was so focus, that i typed the word twice
"nah mean"
stop playing wit me

yo, think ur gondo well, but u "ain t seen nothin yet"/
I think it s time u learned the meaning of: "A LEGENDARY VET"/
u claim ta be "Ill" but ur lyrix are all about to "TRIFLE"/
couldn t be "felt" if I was "blind" n they were written in "BRAIL"/
ill bet ur "punchlines" are hittin like an "old man"; "weak n frail"/
while I spit "phatter" shit than BIG PUN; tippin a "scale"/
ur bound to "fail", when it comes to gettin "graded" on this battle/
cuz ur verse will be lackin substance like "PING PONG" wit NO "PADDLE"/
ur META~PHORS are bound to be weak, FLOW~broken up and not~consistent/
FUCK AROUND wit me too long, I ll make ur life non~existent/
ur less "resistent", than a slut gettin FUCKED on "extacy"/
we could be "CONJOINED TWINS" n u still couldn't get "next~to~me"/
ur simplistic style just bores me, u need a lesson in COMPLEXITY/
but then again I m a "man" in battle~rap, while ur just a little "CHILD" like "DESTINY"/
this page of TEXT, I m leavin "BLESSED", like these were words written by a "PROPHET"/
n u can t seem ta "hold ur own" like whinny bitches in a MOSH PIT/
I ll "break apart ur heart" by penetrating ur CHEST CAVITY/
then "RIP u down" so fast that you d think my name was "GRAVITY"/
u could be "stabbin~me", wit a "pencil" n I still wouldn t "get ur point"/
cuz in this battle its abundantly clear that ur gettin "smoked" just like a "joint"/

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo wud up uppin here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo uppin dont sleep on da battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dis newb wuz talkin shit and got what he had commin so lets gets some votes it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aight Yo here it is............... i aint sleepin on this

Punchlines.... Focused
structure..... Focused
Flow........ Focused
Meti's.... not really any...
multi's.... Focused

Vote Focused

Nuff said......

focus'd in every category, but i cant poll vote.............................................. .......................................

GOOD LOOKIN..................................STILL UPPIN DONT SLEEP ON IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, Focus'D got this battle, just better punches / wordplay etc as a whole, it was a one sided battle in my opinion.

Vote: Focus'D

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still upin.............................................. .......lets get some votes in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo, yo, YO!!!, aight focus'd got dis shit by FAR!!! niggas his punchs were crump as hell he had complexity wordplay multis the flow was tight punchs way harder all around merkin kids damn they need a 1-800-gotmerked hot line fo dis kid the wackness emergency couldnt help his ass but kid use will elevate well maybe but keep on tryin aight and niggas hit this shit up wit an honest vote


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78050

yo dont vote if u cant poll cuz dat shit dont matter but good lookin tho...................1-800 got merked hot line? LOL!!!!!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont sleep!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vote here and ill return da honest favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9891#post759891

Vote here and ill return da honest favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9891#post759891

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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont sleep!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo focused im a battle you next aiight............................................ .................................................. ....................................

Tsk Tsk Tsk....Focus'd....Battlin This Kid.Anyway Focus'd Took It.Obviously....
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vote-Focus'd

yea i know its a grimey win but he came at me so i let him have it. u would do da same!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol!

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont sleep!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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