CRYPT (Not a Newb) vs untold (Verses are already posted)
 

I made a new thread cuz the ohter was was gettin messy

CRYPS VERSE:

After I win i'll move on to the next bitch to easily Drop them/
Ur like the Rockets wit out Steve Franchcise up against me, "Houston we have a problem"/

You small time, too small to match up against this Grandfather clock/
Too little to keep me out of your life, you gonna need a bigger size of Padlocks/

Be glad my fist rocks like crack in(n) my knuckles, it'll lay you out cold/
Shiverin from a hard effort like long days workin in rivers' to scout for gold/

Enough with this hoes spits & flows, U blow shit while Im focused/
U just a no-name who could noshow and have nobody even notice!/

You'll neva be able to spit, only recordings you done is for the piggys when you wired/
Pamper me cuz im shittin, Ur raps like wheels, they really Tired/........................

I'll demolish You cuzmy punches are weapons of mass destruction/
U can't come hard ur punches are like erectile disfunctions/

Ya lyrics and personals about CRYPT were all just Fables/
Your verse wasnt even Consistant i saw 1 good punch, The rest unstable Like 3 legged wooden Tables................!



UNTOLDS VERSE:

tell this kid that skulls are out of style/
especially ones who forshadow there death wit a smile//

we both new to this shit, but in weeks i'll be a vet/
while u'll still be under "new to rb" bathin in ya own sweat//

all by ya self abanoned by me and everyone else/
i dont even know y i'm battlin you, fuckin elf!//

you an elf cause i know you smaller than me/
cause nigga you peon gettin pee'd on//

i'm verbaly rapin you, wit high quality of skillz/
y dont u "OD" off of some caffine pillz//

no would eva miss u, especially not here/
so go join NAMBLA, where its ok for u to take in he rear//(NAMBLA=North American Man Boy Love Association)

i stilla int done movin in for the kill/
shit i barely got to watch the blood spill//

and if you do get away wit this win, it'll be through luck/
tryin to be hard, when the only hard thing you got is a dick in ya butt//

admit it to all of us and jus come out of the closet/
cause when you was wit jeff daumer, is when he got ur virginity, you lost it//

this shit aint evn about rappin, its about better disses/
i dont care if i lose this time cause this kids sendin me kisses//

what i'm goin off of now is a head ache and a shot of liquer/
butt-pirate, pork-plucker, and ass picker//

go get the enema befor you shit everywhere/
woops to late, now its in ya mans pubic hairs//

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Erm Crypt Hit Harder Not Bad For a Newby Battle And Your Structure Was Good 2 i Think untold needs a bit of help in shis punches average battle vote=crypht

Overdose u forgot to Poll vote

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I can't vote in the poll...but here it is:
Crypt won, better punches, though they were not that good...(no offense intended)
Untold....your verse sucked, really, some of those lines were just striaght whack(NAMBLA???)

once again sorry i can't poll it...vote Crypt.

also pls drop a vote on here just need one more to finish it.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...11&pagenumber=2

yo crypts verse was hot. they were both pretty good. but crypt just came stronger wit flows, multis and punches. yo hit dis shit up wit a honest vote yo.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77537

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ok
Punches-crypt
Flow-crypt
Wordplay-even
Structure-even
Vocab-even
Punches and flow won it for crypt. No hate.
Vote=crypt

yo go hit this shit but i give it to cryp he gets my vote

but hit this shit right here www.soundclick.com/younggibandmizzonewhotband

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crypt had this easy really untolds verse was a bit wack to be honest this shit didnt even rhyme:
you an elf cause i know you smaller than me/
cause nigga you peon gettin pee'd on//

and crypt had lines like this which were clever:
After I win i'll move on to the next bitch to easily Drop them/
Ur like the Rockets wit out Steve Franchcise up against me, "Houston we have a problem"/

so crypt gets my vote any one who can go vote on me and fundamentalz important crew battle....

Yo crypt you got skillz man go try out in the contagious crew tryouts section..........we will let you know dawg..............

yep....i agree with everybody else....

on this one....i also think.....

CRYPT took this 1.....

by better everything.......

not really an explanation needed.....lol

poll vote- CRYPT......

....yep
pz.....