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no need for explanation....read the title....
READ SLOW FOR UNDERSTANDING

~death is rap, even more~
~tell to darkness in explore~
~breath held, i open doors~
~candle lit a taking souls right or left~
~handle this in death~
~choose way, which to go~
~lose always and everything wrote~
~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
~shivering spine my pen dropped~
~chilvary and happiness stopped~
~bittersweet is what once thought~
~slit wrists, bleeding, life fading~
~this often gets life all for debating~
~table to walking, go standing still~
~able not, thinking too straight keeps it real~
~labeled plots my kill~
~standing to couch is close~
~landing on punches connecting slow~
~fighting keep, pouring blood~
~lighting cigarettes calming nerves coming luck~
~notice what(s) is hellucination~
~lotus dark seeing beginning desperation~
~loaded gun is nearby~
~knowin there is fear lies~
~going away, turned looked mirror~
~flowing what(s) is clearer~
~seeing straight anymore high not~
~being real i'ma boiling life blazing pot~

in case u don't get it......read forward between every ~ ~ and backwards from the end.....word for word....lol....should be loved for those who understand....

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lol....damnit.....5 or 6 views and no reply.....

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damn son...this was sick...kinda abstract...and the whole backwardz reading thig is madd unique...creativity at it's fullest...I got a feelinga lot of cats ain't gonna understand this though...lol...but keep doin' ya thing cuzzin'...oh...and can you hit up my 3 latest open mics?????? They called "the truth ft. Enhance"
"4:12am(living in death)" and "cleptomaniak'z fantasy"...thanks man...holla...

Liked the backwords thing nice creativity, nice drop....

That was a sick drop bro....................
Keep up the good work......................



PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

yeah...the basis is a guy is high and he is hellucinating....check it......

~lose always and everything wrote~
~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~
~shivering spine my pen dropped~

^^trying to write while high....

~standing to couch is close~

^^standing to couch is close.....he sits

~notice what(s) is hellucination~

^^basis of story

~going away, turned looked mirror~

^^he looked to the mirror....while he was walking away and turning

should take care of some confusion.....

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i don't have enough braincels to comprehend that....lol


nah raw sawn liked the style lil complicated but i got it holmes....
vocab was off but still all the ish was hot...

ones

ILL SHIT Finally some worthy Open Mics i read.................


How u used the creativeness is wonderfull man

Yo Inventive dawg,liked alot of tha wordplay and abstract is a good word to describe this,alot of quotable lines,but most of tha peice was on balance good.
I'd give this 8.5/10 dawg.

Peace,yo hit mine up plz.

coo coo....appreciate it.....vocab had to be weak in this though....hard to talk backwords with big words...lol.....

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lol uppin for my anerxic cat her named sabastion

^^name is not sabastion.....lol

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like everyone else said it was tight nice work

^^think ur just trying to get posts up......

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man hot shit here, never seen that before, its like a fuckin murder mystery or somethin. nice references to the mirror, with the mirrored verse and shit. like the (S) hallucinations and shit. nice work could this possibly worthy of legends?

^^could be.....if people replied....lol

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ill drop,abstract shit sometimes tha illest,but not too abstract,keep droppin,peace

anybody else got this....

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lol....damn this bitch moved down quick.....

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page 2 already....lol.....

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THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST ONES I EVER READ ON HERE....IT WAS TOO CRAZY...THE BACKWARDS THING KILLED IT FO REAL...HUGE RESPECT

lol...that was funny the way you did it...but sick as hell...the creativity was ill as shit lol...i liked it it was hot...peace man killer drop

much appreciated u peeps still reply to this....hopin somebody puts it in the Legends...lol

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