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Born to Kill vs. SmokaJoka666
It's set up...
Come drop ya rules... I forgot them, man. This is a rematch. I got merked last time out on account of shitty effort on my part and a damn nice verse on his... Tryin ta correct matter this time out. |
^^lol...aight
10 lines max due date is tomorrow night midnight....(won't have time today...bout to get off....which is y i made that thread about 3 hours ago that said one hour due date....but i forgot to check back on it) no biting no playin off of verses no recycling no dickryde/hate/bias/crew votes peace 4:20 |
Cool...
Tomorrow night, midnight... I'll be here ready to deal out damage. Good luck, Smoka... Peace till then... |
I was feelin a flow and had ta use two extra lines...
It's way before the deadline (midnight) so that should be enough time to add two more to yours. Yes, these are stretched, but I know Joka stretches shit as well, so please forgive me. Call me Rambo the way I terrorize enemy lines cuz I'm droppin napalm like Vietnam all ova Joka's rhyme... Ya 'smokin' in this battle cuz ya burnin ta ash and a 'joka' with the ladies cuz ya got no fuckin cash. Ya disposition gonna be a kid's after a whippin, cryin with ya nose runny... Cuz in this battle ya gonna eat more punches than Oprah has money. Proppin '666' like you's the devil or somethin scary with ya cartoon demons lookin gay ya more like a D&D fairy...* Ya ain't evil, never seen the back of a police cruiser but not cuz ya smart ya just got no heart, a fake wanna be loser. Merked me last time but I was distracted, busy makin ends cuz unlike you I have a job, a family, and real-life friends. You's a mouse I'm an owl, it's why I'm sayin 'who?' cuz for real ya just another meal for my beak ta rip through. I mean, 'orange' you an herb? Ya get peeled and eaten so ya must be... Well I'm a only eat half, light the rest up and laugh then pass ya around RB. So fuck you, like Pac said, this revenge is gonna be sweet... And I'm gettin both cuz you's a pussy at most and I've beaten you with beef!** *D&D (Dungeons and Dragons) **Pac said, "revenge is the sweetest thing next ta gettin pussy" And since he IS a pussy, I'm gettin both, cold "fuckin" him. |
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^^lol....it was for tonight.....i said that yesterday....look up at the rules.....if u want to make another battle thread or something then coo.... peace 4:20 |
Why make another thread?
I just dropped early is all... Ya cool with that? Let me know what up, K. |
yeah it's coo...but i told u that because u said i was late...so didn't want any confusion....will post later when i have time though....
peace 4:20 |
b bak to drop a vote on this...
drop one on ma battle against overdrive http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3940#post753940 |
yo hit dis up wit an honest vote.......................................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77537 |
^^lame....and for that no......i will not vote....aight....
i'll "CRASH UR RHYMES" like "PINK FLOYD AND DALE EARNHARDT" ur "LAST HIT" will be "THE WALL"// ur always the one BENDING OVER in the game of LEAP FROG, u love "TICKLING ROUND OBJECTS" cuz u "PLEASE BALLS"// put VISINE on ur WORDS to SAY IT CLEAR, my rhymes are like AFRICAN TRIBESMAN, i'm SHAKIN SPEARS (Shakespeare)// i'll dissipate ur fears it's too late to adhere, like "HOMOSEXUALS WITH WARM MILK"......ur "FAKIN QUEER"// already ko'ed u once.......this time ur gone man, i'll RIP UR ASS like CAPTAIN HOOK WIPIN HIS ASS WITH THE WRONG HAND// i'll shoot u with an S-K, 8 (skate) ur rhymes like "HALF PIPES" ur only dissin "TWO/FOURTHS OF SMOKES" like WEAK LUNGS with BONG FANS// ur punches "AIN'T HARD like DISNEY WORLD AND VIAGRA" u gotta wait an hour for a "TWO MINUTE RIDE"// GIVIN SO MUCH HEAD u got a DENTED MIND, i got the VOCABULARY that's RUSHED like I SPRINTED RHYMES// ur destoyed like old buildings with a wrecker, i'll leave u TIED like ur RECORD, ur EATIN MORE DICK than a HOMOSEXUAL HANNIBAL LECTOR// kid ur rhymes ain't treasured, i'm BLASTIN MISSILES at ya like MORTAL KOMBAT TRILOGY IN DIVISIONS ur placed in SEKTORS (sectors)// peace 4:20 |
uppin for some votes in here.............................................. .................................................. .........
peace 4:20 |
Flow: SMoka
Punches: Smoka Metas: Smoka Personals: neither Complexity: Smoka Enjoyable: Smoka Similes: Smoka Vocab: Smoka Creativity: Smoka Overall: Smoka Ok this was a murk, Smoka had way more similoes, and nice punches with wordplay, Born all ya had was one Personal but it wasnt that hard hittin, keep elivatin dog Nice shit both of u Yo smoka i cant vote dawg, but please hitt hsiup wit an honest one, thanks bro http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77707 |
aight coo...i'll check ur shit....even though u can't poll vote....lol..................
peace 4:20 |
LMAO at the freepost.......i can't vote but nice ish by both but we all know who won .............peep my battle with Illunatic
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Nice drop, Smoka...
Didn't bring much else but wordplay, but it was tight. Speak up, folks... Ya got a battle ta judge. Thanks. Peace |
wordplay = good punches.......damnit....lol......this is suppose to be an ill battle and only one person has voted.....and he doesn't even have enough posts to vote....not unless somebody is voting while i'm making this post...lol
peace 4:20 |
Pretty close battle.....Breakdown..
Punches - Tie Wordplay - SJ Flow - B2K Multi's - None Really Meta's - SJ Personals - B2K Vote = B2K B2K got this cuz of his plethora of personals he threw in there and his verse flowed a lil bit smoother....Close Battle though Props 2 both.... |
iiight breakdown
Flow: SMoka Punches: Smoka Metas: Smoka Personals: neither Complexity: Smoka Vocab: Smoka Creativity: Smoka Overall: Smoka Smokas made me laugh my ass off.....i thought born had it at first but then joka pulled thru VERY ILL BATTLE props to both Vote-SmokaJoka |
Thanks for the votes.
Tied up now. But, Remix... How ya gonna say I had no personals? I worked his name, our last battle, the fact that I'm comin for revenge... Hello? Anyway... Thanks for ya vote. Drop more, people! |
ahhh....don't get mad Born....u came better than the last battle...this one should be close....nice battle though duke.....
peace 4:20 |
uppin for votes.....i think this is uppin number 2................................................. .....
peace 4:20 |
Lemme Break It Down...
Punches-Smoka Flow-Tied Wordplay-Smoka Overall-Smoka I Got Mad Respect for both of yall |
^^coo........i think u forgot to poll vote dude......lol..................................... ........
peace 4:20 |
ooooook.....same thing i said in the first reply on this page.......lol.............except a lil' bit of changes......
peace 4:20 |
Pretty close battle, punches and wordplay were pretty even from both sides in this battle, but B2K came with the personal lines and thats what i felt edged this one out for him.
Vote: Born To Kill ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ |
aight coo......let's get some more in this bitch............................................. .......................................
peace 4:20 |
this thread is getting very sleepy......veryyyyyyy sleeeppppppyyyyyyyyy.........lol
peace 4:20 |
smokajoka had this really it was close both had good flow and hits but he had the meta's and the wordplay which took it for me, I didnt like his small ass txt though?
Can you guys go vote on my crew battle with fundamentalz its important so think b4 you vote iight peace!!!!!!!! |
aight coo......let's get the last few votes in here....still a close battle.....me up three...Born up two.....unless somebody is voting now......
peace 4:20 |
Very good battle both of yall....
I vote smoke cause his format and structure composed nice wordplay, flow.. and good multi usage... His verse kept me enjoyed.... Both yaallll did good though........ |
aight coo...nice battle Born.....uppin for the last time...unless this is my fourth uppin....fuck i wished this bitch would hurry up and get to page three so it don't take so long to load....lol
peace 4:20 |
i think smokajoka took this...here's how ima break it down.......
flow-B2K structure-Smoka punches-Smoka personals-Smoka multi's-B2K meta's-Smoka Creativity-B2K complexity-Smoka comedy-both enjoyment-both nice battle ya'll....stay up.... ....yep.. pz...... |
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