''Whats The Truth'' James Bondage,ThugzDoCry
 

Truthfully. .
when you think of the word 'Friend', what springs to mind?
Someone on who you can depend, or a single written line?
I'd sit and type our adventures, to loneliness & back again
Its Saddenin`. See My only 'Friends' are My Pad and Pen. .

They've been there from the start, the broken hearted Years,
They were there when i opened up, confessing All my Fears
For every fallen tear i shed, they doubled w/ love & comfort
and served to guard my words from harm beneath the sunset.
Whenever im upset, and my lucks spent, its good to confide,
And indulge in my feminine side, then read between the lines,
i penetrated the paper with, This inked Liquorice Lace twist
thats reads Deep Beneath the Surface, but remains Faceless.
The waves of hatred expressed by those who Seek my End
are quickly surpassed by myself at the request of my friends.
We share a special bond, Me, Myself and my Pad Of woe,
That gives New Meaning To The term Pen 'Pal' as a Whole. .**
New erra..days passin me by,... makes it all a little.. clearer,
As time goes by,there no such things as real life time friends
Being fooled so much , people sayin they would never leave me
Wen it went wrong and I really needed them I was alone@the end,
Got to a point I'm considerin my pen..as my real life time friend
Inner wars destroyin me and my confidence,made me weak,
Multiple consideration's of suicide cuz I was afraid to speak
To all the years I was stuck that filled me up wit horrible pain,
And the harsh trouble I went tru, for so called friends to gain
The useless struggle's I faced to make them fake 'friends' to stay,
Believe me i'm lookin to the perspective of 'friends' in a differrent way




**Endin Of James, Startin Of Thugz.....

Whao!!!!!!!!!

This was a nice piece...No faults in there...flow, vocab blah blah

All in there^^

Dope read!!

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Cheah!

Uppin 4 some feed-back

nicely executed, original topic, smooth collab, a little low on multis but the content and vocab was solid, there were a few great one-liners in here as well.

i penetrated the paper with, This inked Liquorice Lace twist
thats reads Deep Beneath the Surface, but remains Faceless.

good work. 1ne.

Yo good collab dawgs,couldn't find tha corss over betwen emcee's,good shit,use of imagery and vocab,wordplay was very good,did lack a lil on multies but didn't really need them.
Good collabo peeps.

Peace.ps hit mines up please.

forsure all was good.......................had every catagory covered....................nice...............word

Thnx

VEry GOod From Both

This was a good collab.....no doubt i felt every conceptf it.......i enjoyed hope i can read more of yo works thanx

Nice fuckin work, man...

Now, imagine being 15 years older than you are...
Imagine being a husband and father...
Imagine having a so called "career"...

And feeling the same way.

Welcome to my world.

Very nice shit, man...

Sometimes all you can really count on is the pad and pen.

It helps for healing.

Tol Ya Ages Mean Shit.....Some Times............Thnx For The FeedBack....

yo....dope shit maynz....!!

let me know sumthin...who did what part..!?!?

anyway....dope shit....nice flow....well....perfect flow..!!
vocab was spot on.....wudnt think other wise from Cam anyway..!!

nice shit yo..!!! i always appreciate a DOPE verse sometimes..!!!

anyway....holla my shit..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77661

ohhh....and i appologoze for freespostin....but Cam...if its you.....go on your AIM.......or PM me......ill let ya know why....!! peace

its says......look at the ** says where who stops and starts......thnx for the comment.....

Yeah - i got you man.

I'll get on Aim later. .

here's your fucking reply: your fucking wack

Steezus

that kid is dope. .

?????Uppin....

This collab was fire , Both emcees cameout strong , Ya all kept the intensity up...........................James Had a tight rhyme scheme , and his flow was onpoint , his wordplay was HOT , ThugzDoCry's verse was also hot , Nice wordplay , Nice flow , Overall u had a HOT verse...........But why couldnt u just seperate the verses????????................Overall : 9.5/10

damn thnx for the breakdown......seperate well i thought the ** was well nuff seperated
lol

tight piece

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Asshole. = )

^^Werd.....does that count as a free-post....

Up

Yeah, that was a freepost. .

Damn death to freeposters....


^^Up

good shit...

liked the topic... imagery was good...
Cam came nice....
as always...

Keep it up...
both of ya'll

ok....

u had a good concept, nice floe
vocab could use a lill work, but over all it as good

that shit was fuckin phat, the vocab and all that shit was definetly there. good shit, keep postin dude i really enjoyed readin that.

^^i see





just wanted to up this^^

Why?

^^its a nice collab
Both dropped some nice verses, i liked readin it,
cant break down that well im not into open mics but it was a nice read

Feedback^^

'They've been there from the start, the broken hearted Years,
They were there when i opened up, confessing All my Fears'

I, and everyone else, is probably feelin' you on this one... nice

yup.
old as fuck
who upped this?