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dw vs COM (crew battle- leaders)
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all rules i'll spit first! gud luk! CONTAGIOUS vs yak pak dw vs COM lets get it goin! |
COM vs dw crew shit, listen up,
try merk me wit non existent punches so I WON’T SEE WOT HIT ME/ u wud av 2 be an imatater to MAKE AN IMPRESSION so basically ur history/ breakin your skull by deliverin 'lines' in your ear, so u hear the CRACK/ you’d need a job at a FIRIN range just so u cud CALL THE SHOTS in an attack/ make my verse EChO in ya ear hole so u get wot I’ve sed/ nothin there so it won't hard 2 keep a CLEAR HEAD in this thread/ shud be dead wiv that shit record counter/ I have 2 throw cutlery around jus 2 giv u a CLOSE ENCOUNTER/ (flyin saucers) Bringin enough strong BARZ 2 arrest a lyrical CRIMINAL/ COM thinks hes dope but still can’t connect a SYLLABOL/ Buy u MARBLES so u can KEEP THE BALL ROLLIN in straight lines/ Then strap-a-rack of explosives 2 ya cranium so I BLOW YA MIND// Now you! |
Yo uppin for com's verse, your on now dawg so why dont you spit? dont go leaving and pre-writing yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just cuz dw has spit first so you know what you gotta beet, show ya skillz dawg if you can beat him like you say you can then do it now the proper way...freestyle that shit.......
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QUOTE]Originally posted by COM
^^^^yeah imma merk that verse...lol........... anyway anyone up for a battle^^^^^^^ COME ON PEOPLE [/QUOTE] go on then son................ |
^^DONT FUCKING FREEPOST IN OUR BATTLE THREAD FAG, IMMA BE READY IN FIVE MINUTES, HE COULD HAVE BEEN WRITING FOR DAYS AND I ONLY STARTED WHEN YOU TOLD ME BOUT THIS THREAD SO GIMME A FUCKIN CHANCE, AND DONT FREEPOST IN HERE AGAIN, IF YOU GOT SUMTHIN TO SAY THEN PM ME
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DW I’ll Trouble-You So You Gots To Behave-Man
Just Like Barney Rubble You’re A Second Rate Cave-Man You Made-Fam; You Think You A Vet-Whats-The-Deal? Sending Fags To PM Me Like Xl4Real I Roll Like A Wheel; You’re As Active As Stasis Ya Black Eye Spreads To Two I’m ‘Contagious’ To Ya Faces I’m Blameless; This Crew-Fight Is Due-Tonight Who’d-Ya-Bite? I’m Too-Tight Don’t Expect Hype Coz I’m Not The Loser-Type The Banks All Want Me From New York To Charlton The Only Banks You’ll Get In To Is Carlton I’m Starting, I’m Pissed, And You’re Next-On-The-List You’ll Find It Hard To Reply When Your Necks-In-My-Fist So Expect-To-Be-Dissed Coz My Rhymes Hit The Hardest I’ll Drop Yo Ass Faster Than Rodney King Charges |
overall theres not really any direct hard hitting punches
by either of the contentants...im well aware of what people would laugh at in real life...like a comedian hitting it off with his first joke successfully.. no pun intended......so im choosing for the flow and comedian had that without a doubt from the start....I know the attempts were made to punch your opponents out but it wasnt done be either one... barely.....Vote - Com |
^^^, yea i agree, i think COM edged it out by his punches...but here how ima break it down....
flow-both structure-both punches-COM wordplay-DW multi's-COM overall-COM..... good battle...stay up.... yep.... ...pz |
Pretty close battle here....But I think COM edged u out by a smidgen DW......Like most people said ya'll were about tied in punches but COM's flow and personals is what gave him this battle........
Vote = COM Hit up my battle against BrookLyn would ya...... |
best part of coms verse:
DW I’ll Trouble-You So You Gots To Behave-Man Just Like Barney Rubble You’re A Second Rate Cave-Man best part of dw's verse: make my verse EChO in ya ear hole so u get wot I’ve sed/ nothin there so it won't hard 2 keep a CLEAR HEAD in this thread/ Punches-both Flow-both wordplay-COM Multis-COM Metas-Neither Overall-Com |
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yo no more needs to be said.............vote=com |
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^^^^^^FREE POST IN THIS THREAD AGAIN AND I'LL GET YOU BANNED FAGGOT..... UPPIN.......... ...................... ...................
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Close battle but i got to give it to COM here is the breakdown...
flow-Com by a little structure-both punches-com wordplay-DW multi's-com overall-com Peace |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^, tru, COM edged it out by his punches, and shit like that ...but here i'll break it down....
flow-both structure-both punches-COM wordplay-DW multi's-COM overall-COM..... poll vote= COM good battle...stay up.... |
close battle, lmao^
you dumb newbs. comedian kicked that ass. ^haha. COM thinks hes dope but still can’t connect a SYLLABOL/ ^and you cant spell it. punches- com wordplay- neither had any you fuckin newbs! get a clue! metties- lol. com easily won, liked that shit bout ya nek in my fist. (yall dont know what a metty is, wut u think are metties are actually similies.) flow- com multies (multi rhyming)- com! |
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