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$BiDdY$ v.s. OverDrive
15-20 lines max
he's spitten first 45 minute time limit from check in usual voting rules no feeding no recycling check in and drop dawg good luck |
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Hoe~I~kick~it Flow~Through~Ligquid No Spefiic Kill patterns Cos im Splatterin-Fiends
Crack~Napping~Cranimus Yapped Wit Titaniums And That For Shattering-Dreams My Sword’ll Grop I implore-This-Joke,Fuck He's Wack Not Even Quater Dope No Moral Hope The Board Will Cope, If Your Throwing Up Signs Here's Ya Horoscope Cus Im an Aguarius, Il Bury This Nothing Preacarious,Bitch Your THoughts Are Volatile Ya Shit Will Then Bledd When Hit With M3s Cus This Liquid Emcee Is Water Soulble What Driver'll Do? For Ya Fans of the cock Damn my Hands Ought Ta Talk My Rhymes Are Bluffs, Mind Ya Stuff Nah Time Is Up Like Dwa Grandfather clocks I Cease Ya Speakin-Man Dump Ya Reakin-Clan In Vietnam, Why Bury Yo Shit In Decent Lands When I leave The Net Vexed And Stretch Necks Long Than Stero System Speaker Stands Blow Out Speakers Like Dr. Bidy~Death I Bring Wreck, My Rhymes Are Guns That Bust Brains Bidy's a Fake Emcee Cant Step To ME Il Excute This Bitch..He'll Wonder Why He Came Get Ya Mans To Fend For Ya Pen And Ya plans To Win as I Slam Ya Shims Like Mandolin Quit Panickin I'd Have You choke With the String With Your Cropse Just Scene.The Drive Sin ..... |
damn son u jus did all that in like 8 minutes .. cough cough prewritten cough cough .......but whateva i'll drop in 15
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Nah.....Took Me 15 But i forgot to check in take all your time.............................................. ............
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~u like 50 u jus got shot 9 times/
~but in this one the victim don't live bitch it's death by rhymes/ ~40 minutes the time breath by breath i take ur soul and make it mines/ ~cuz this is the sesion of lesson 1 agression it's succesive/ ~nigga i aint messin tear u apart inside cuz i'm agressive/ ~ur rhymes suck they bring me pain like demonic rain eating ur brain/ ~it's isane and ironic the way i take ur fame while taking the blame .. don't even spit bitch i can't be tamed/ ~this faggot clings to me like static it's aratic... fuk it i had it/ ~i'm done bein nice to these fake vets that come out of the attic and wanna be the next stillmatic/ ~~i'm the ultimate rb grim reaper the the insane vet seaker/ ~straight suicide leaper the way i battle the top emcee and become his #1 defeater/ ~doubt me and i suprise u ... degrate me i mesmerize u .../ ~stick me in a corner watch rise above u and spit on u cuz i despise u/ ~i'm tired of hearing overdrives the best above all rest/ ~now he's put to the test stuck in a mess . buckles under the pressure cuz i'm the greatest nuttin less/ ~so fuck his record it's only a statistic .. look past the big words and he's only simplistic/ ~i'm standing here no fear middle finger up cuz i jus don't care battle me ? i wouldn't risk-it/ ~ur stuck wit incompantince and ur oversized personality/ ~like an army wit reconaisance i kill u quietly and overlies reality/ ~the greatest feelin in the world is when i look in ur eyes and u realize ur fatality/ ~so i'm gonna stop the pain now and let this bitch swallow his pride/ ~happy you tried/ ~i'll make sure i'm at ur funeral so i can tell every1 i'm the reason overdrive died/ |
Biddy...your lines seemed stretched...and had no inners,,,so it made it even more stretched..yes i no overdrive was a bit
But Overdrives lines made more sense...Biddy ya lines didn't hit Vote-Overdrive |
hey man close fight but biddy had the slight advtange nice verse those overdrive you got some skill just keep elivating... nice battle
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Wtf thats not a vote a DR.....................You Cant Explain Your Vote In 1 line,.............. .....................(Fucking dickriders) blah.......
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Ok Sureal Just Reset It .......Anybody else who' Dr's Or Doesnt Explain...................Same Happens Blah Etc............................................... ......
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IM GOING TO HAVE TO SAY BIDDY TOOK IT, NOT ENOUGH WORDPLAY FROM NEITHER BUT OVERDRIVE TALKED ABOUT HIMSELF TOO MUCH
EVERYTHING WAS MOSTLY I THIS OR I THAT INSTEAD OF DISSING HIS OPPONENT SO. . . VOTE-BIDDY |
But A battle can be either way ...... WEll Biddys was not as complex as Overdrives ... Overdrive didnt punch as hard but his wordplay and concept was a lot stronger... Voacb and metas werent deleiverd by either person.. But because of better Flow i Give the vote to
Overdrive |
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~u like 50 u jus got shot 9 times/ ~but in this one the victim don't live bitch it's death by rhymes/ ~40 minutes the time breath by breath i take ur soul and make it mines/ That was very weak your structure was everywere... ~cuz this is the sesion of lesson 1 agression it's succesive/ ~nigga i aint messin tear u apart inside cuz i'm agressive/ Good punch...decent flow ~ur rhymes suck they bring me pain like demonic rain eating ur brain/ ~it's isane and ironic the way i take ur fame while taking the blame .. don't even spit bitch i can't be tamed/ ~this faggot clings to me like static it's aratic... fuk it i had it/ ~i'm done bein nice to these fake vets that come out of the attic and wanna be the next stillmatic/ Woah Nice Punches Good Decent Flow ~~i'm the ultimate rb grim reaper the the insane vet seaker/ ~straight suicide leaper the way i battle the top emcee and become his #1 defeater/ That Sucked...Came Very Weak ~doubt me and i suprise u ... degrate me i mesmerize u .../ ~stick me in a corner watch rise above u and spit on u cuz i despise u/ ~i'm tired of hearing overdrives the best above all rest/ ~now he's put to the test stuck in a mess . buckles under the pressure cuz i'm the greatest nuttin less/ ^....Falls Asleep ~so fuck his record it's only a statistic .. look past the big words and he's only simplistic/ ~i'm standing here no fear middle finger up cuz i jus don't care battle me ? i wouldn't risk-it/ ~ur stuck wit incompantince and ur oversized personality/ ~like an army wit reconaisance i kill u quietly and overlies reality/ ~the greatest feelin in the world is when i look in ur eyes and u realize ur fatality/ ~so i'm gonna stop the pain now and let this bitch swallow his pride/ ~happy you tried/ ~i'll make sure i'm at ur funeral so i can tell every1 i'm the reason overdrive died/ Ok Decent Punches Good Vocab i Spotted There Punches=Overdrive Mutlis=Overdrive Flow=Tie Creativty=Biddy Vocab=Tie Wordplay=Tie Very Close I Think Overdrive Just Edged This His Strcutre Was More vetish and biddy's was not.... I cant vote not enougth posts but overdrive took it |
Finnaly Somebody Who Broke it down Thanks Upin its 3-1................................................. .................................................. ...............
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Great Battle , I dug OD's stlye ........ But Biddys punches I think landed harder ...... Dis was real close .......... ,
structure - OD punches - Biddy Flow - OD Creativity - OD Complexity - Biddy multies - OD Vocab - Biddy wordplay - Biddy vote Biddy by a cunt hair http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77171 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77520 Peep one of dese or both |
Listen i cant vote but ill give feedback
Multis: Dose Wordplay: No Question DOSE Punches: Dose Flow: Niegher Metas/Similies: both Dose had a sick verse even tho it was probably pre written, His wordplay was ill, nice shit dog Eh please hit this up wit an honest one, its gettin mad sleeped cuz everyone thinks im a newb http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77357 |
IT Wasnt Prewritten took me 15mins but i checked half way.......its 4-2......Unofficaly ok il peep it................................................ ....
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aight check it....i know Overdose thinks i ride biddy's dick or somethin like that but im not a dick rider and im gonna vote honestly...........
Biddy- I HAVE SEEN WAY BETTER ShIT OUT oF YOU!! i think u underestimated this one... Dose-Damn that was a nice verse. Ill to the 3 power. Flow - Dose Punches - Biddy (Dose talked about himself alot) Structure - Biddy Multis - Dose Wordplay - Dose Humor - Neither Creativity - Tie Standout Lines - Tie Vote - Dose (biddy you should have came harder for real) couldnt help voting on this one.... and no i am not a dick rider i vote what i feel not what aint true |
shit my fuckin bad with the names i meant *Drive* not Dose im a fuckin retard............................................ .............................
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5-2......3-2 Polled.............Upin If You Voted and get 100 posts plz poll it................................................ .................................................. ........
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Ffs ............Sleeeep on your battle not mines*............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......................................
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punches: ov (he hit you more freqeuntly and harder than you hit him - 80 % of $biddy$' verse was kinda open mic, and not even impressive shit... just egocentric non-demean rambling)
personals: n/a multi's: more effective use from overdrive (biddy had as well no doubt) flow: tied metaphors: i rarely caught a glimpse wordplay: ov vocab: tied complexity: ov creativity: ov originality: i'm feeling ov opener & closer ov vote= ov best quote would go to ov but i can't be fucked to find the quote |
Great Battle , I WAS FEELIN BOTH..But Biddys punches I think landed harder ...... Dis was real close .......... ,
structure - OD punches - Biddy Flow - OD Creativity - OD Complexity - Biddy multies - OD Vocab - Biddy wordplay - Biddy vote Biddy by a cunt hair http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77315 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77580 Peep one of dese or both BENEN MAD SLETPED ON..pc |
o and overdrive STOP FUCKIN' CAPITALISING THE FIRST MUTHAFUCKING LETTER OF EVERY WORD... please for god sake.. i hate reading battles when people do that, it slows one's read down and makes it as if you verse is complexity when you're just freaking making it damn difficult to read... you also flow better... but i don't expect you to listen... most people online are goats... metaphorically speaking... peace to both... biddy diss you opponent more.... have more wordplay more personal and more wow punches rather the filler (i.e. anything tahts not setting up a punches or punches = filler), aight.... and the freakin' ~'s
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yea i think overdrive took this...heres how ima break it down...
flow-overdrive wordplay-overdrive punches-biddy multi's-biddy meta's-overdrive structure-overdrive creativity-overdrive complexity-biddy comedy-overdrive enjoyment-both overall-overdrive good battle...stay up.... yep... pz 1 |
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