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COM 09-04-03 06:34 AM

Evolution COM AND KING OF THIEVES COLLAB
 
KING OF THIEVES:
I was born as an illegitimate-kid as my pops just got hit-wit'-a-bid...
reminisce on all the spliffs-that-I-lit and all the evil shit-that-I-did...
parents used to call me hand-some...
pops bought me a hand-gun...
I been waitin' for the day to put a clip-in-and-spit...
cause I'm sick-of-the-shit...
I remember the dayz when I used to be young buck sellin' drugz-on-the-block...
empty wallet...with hidden money under-my-sock...
one-with-my-Glock one that will never be loved-by-the-cops...
hid my drugz-by-my-crotch...
sprinklin' dust-on-my-pot...
then one day a 13 year old named Tomas decided to write-in-his-rhymepad...
amateur lungz at the time...high-off-a-dime-bag...he just kept on writin'-as-time-passed...
he rhymed-wack...but then again...he was young and still new-in-the-game...
he grew-in-the-brain over the yearz to prove-he'z-deranged...
at the tender age of 17 he got arrested and neglected by cops...
I had to sell my favorite weapon-my-glock...
when I got arrested for snatching pursez the jakez even questioned-my-watch...
now I'm almost 19 with a job-of-my-own-and-some-cash...
but still pissed cause I ain't got a girl to give me some slob-on-my-bone-and-some-ass...


COM:
Born illegitimate; Torn from the tit-I-licked
Adorned with a lyric-stick but Scorned when I spit-a-bit
I’m going to do-this-properly; become the truest-prophecy
Ain’t no Judas-stopping-me becoming the purest-prodigy
My rhymes piss-on-thought; I listen-to-what-I’m-taught
Can’t remember December and I’m sick of missing-court
I got my eye-on-fame but dopes fried-my-brain
The dealers want my head coz I’m suppling-the-same
Now I’m suprising-the-game, my emotion is devotion
My motion leaves you soaking, causing waves in the ocean
Supposing I’m signed, my life will be aligned
I give you food for thought while I dine on your mind

DiverseSyndicate 09-04-03 03:08 PM

tight shit keep spittin.~1~

Otherwordz 09-04-03 03:54 PM

thanks...uppin'...

Verbatim 09-04-03 04:00 PM

Tight indeed

Flow, Vocab and wordplay was really good
it was all there.....this was a nice collab
keep droppin ya'll

please check out my latest piece
"I'll Never Quit"
the link is in my Sig
peace!

A.T. 09-04-03 05:12 PM

mad props to you both...
A.T.

Meks 09-04-03 07:57 PM

hott shit, dope as hell...........i liked it...........nice vocab wordplay metas and such..........nice job both props............uppn this for them

Provoked Images 09-04-03 09:20 PM

that was tight, i liked it, i bet COM like "OH SHIT THIS NOOB LIKED IT!!" yea i did, but it don't mean i like U, King: hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...

Otherwordz 09-05-03 04:09 AM

^^^lol...what happened?????? I'm lost in ya thought...

COM 09-05-03 05:30 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by AngellicalR
that was tight, i liked it, i bet COM like "OH SHIT THIS NOOB LIKED IT!!" yea i did, but it don't mean i like U, King: hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...


WTF is YOUR problem fag/bitch what eva

Otherwordz 09-05-03 03:54 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by AngellicalR
that was tight, i liked it, i bet COM like "OH SHIT THIS NOOB LIKED IT!!" yea i did, but it don't mean i like U, King: hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...


I still don't understand what that's supposed to mean...but uppin'...

COM 09-05-03 03:59 PM

he means he liked the collab but he doesnt like my verse and he also means you blew me into the sky or sum shit meaning you beat me, but this aint a battle ???? fuck knows

Otherwordz 09-05-03 04:11 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by COM
he means he liked the collab but he doesnt like my verse and he also means you blew me into the sky or sum shit meaning you beat me, but this aint a battle ???? fuck knows


oh that's what he meanz?????? nah...the versez were equal in quality...COM'z a dope mc...of course...he'z an OMEN...lol

Provoked Images 09-05-03 07:41 PM

no... i meant both verses were ill but i don't like COM as a "person", he called me a noob when i gave Meks a constructive comment in his open mic, and by: hit ur head on a cloud, it's my way to say elivate...

oh, and i ain't tha fag, y is u hopin/
i turn happy and gay so we can be elop'n?/
i won't bitch, jus shut ur mouth/
ain't my fault u labeled urself "able to gown down south"/

COM, shut ur face, shit...this was for u by tha way^^...

COM 09-05-03 07:50 PM

^^ for me!! wow you shouldnt have,, post in bitch slapped and i'll bitch slap ya wack self

Provoked Images 09-05-03 08:06 PM

how bout no? i have no need to waste my time on u wit tha fact i'm not a battler no more, i have a life, plus, my shit comes @ u in a few min. afta i read tha first post in tha thread, everybody else probably takes their time to make it, that ain't me, so go battle another person that has a bad record so u can make ur better...

Otherwordz 09-06-03 03:29 AM

^^^ummm...no offense...but 0-1 ain't exactly a good record nah mean man...

DªÖ 09-06-03 03:46 AM

^^dont hate because he lost his first match ;)

nah this peice had nice vocab/feelin
i wasnt discouraged by the diff lines
they all flowed well and there is alot
of things that u hit right on the head
-insert
.keepspittin.

Otherwordz 09-06-03 03:54 AM

^^^lol...I ain't hatin' cause he lost his 1st match...shit...I lost my 1st 3 when I came back to RB as Prolifik Prophet...and now his recordz 8-5...but shit...he said that he'z retiring from battling like he has some kinda name on the site...but that don't really matter to me... it's the fact that he said that COM only battlez newbz and was dissin' kidz with bad recordz although he himself doezn't have a good one...

COM 09-06-03 05:14 AM

i know, are DW, TREACH P, CARSONTJET AND PURPLE HAZE NEWBIES????? I DONT THINK SO, uppin this biatch

N.D.eva 09-21-03 11:31 AM

tight shit dawgs

aight wot wot.......................................

brainsurgeon 09-21-03 01:03 PM

yeahh... nice.... keep it up

rule 09-21-03 02:03 PM

definitly a hot piece both verses were ill, the metas an everything was there an it was nice ta read it an have nothing sound struggled...9/10 peace

N.D.eva 09-22-03 06:12 PM

good shit dawg, especially likin ya flo, but it was all good shit

P.S dont i know you from somewhere.......................HA DI FUCKIN HA

C-TownsFinest5 09-22-03 07:47 PM

ill shit.like wordplay and vocab.keep spittin yo shit dawg.holla


CTF(represent)

Ctownzfinest21 09-22-03 09:21 PM

that was tight rymes it doesnt need any improvements so keep dat shit up.holla


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