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White-Virus vs. Mode
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no hate, dickride, crew, bla bla bla votes... Who eva spits first...spits first Deadline..TONIGHT! this is my check-in...waitin on you to check in then we'll both write our verse |
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"Oompa loompa" betta listen to Willy before he "Wonks ya"//(Wonka)
You say your ridin wit tha big dogs when ya still on tha porch playin wit tonka// I'm a lyrical killer when you like "Freddy" livin in "dreams"// This cat can't rap, hell he couldn't flow if he was goin down stream// How can ya brag about style, when ya rhymes look like they've went through a chop shop// Ya Rigged tha number of "911", just for another line to "cop"// Man stop please, he must be def, cuz them words are "garbage"// I'll loan ya a dictionary for sum knowledge, cuz ya brain's dyin of starvage// It looks like i've touched tha untouchable, Infected ya "cell"// Might as well call me Satan cuz i've put this lil bitch through hell// aight....waitin on you now |
Im the Cure to this White-Virus, Have this kid voting for me like my verse turned him Bias .
White boy made his new name Jahias, who you fooling with more Losses then Wins . Your verse comittin sins, your whole Rhyme Scheme is off balance like I just destroyed your Equalibriam . Your Voice Box turned down you need to Shout for your verse to actually Stand Out . Doesnt hurt coming into this battle knowing a win for you is 100 percent Pure Doubt . ~ New style ~ . . After this battle you will continue too run all alone My words speak legends, watch how he turns to stone . . In his sig the pic looks like a squinting chinese rapper . . I think its looking for wins, but thats something you cant capture Thats the end of this chapter, another loss on your record but your a quick adabter .. Ending this mode of destruction .. |
Lets get sum votes in on this yall.....come onVote on this...drop a link and i'll hit your battle up...give a honest vote though aight!
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Drop a honest vote, Drop a link...and i'll hit ya battle up....don't sleep yall come on............................
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lol, both hott shitt!!!
White-Virus --> "Oompa loompa" betta listen to Willy before he "Wonks ya"//(Wonka) You say your ridin wit tha big dogs when ya still on tha porch playin wit tonka// haha best lines!!! Great Flow and awesome punches!!! Mode --> . . I think its looking for wins, but thats something you cant capture Thats the end of this chapter, another loss on your record but your a quick adabter .. Good lines, vocab needs work ... vote = white virus |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78258
Check that shit out too please!!!! Peace ----------------------------------------------------- |
White , Man to be honest I thought you had it but Mode
took out your hand.But I'ma break it down. Complexity=Mode Flow=Tie Punchlines=White-Virus Vocab=Mode Structure=Mode Overall=Mode No hate , man just get better >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
3rd time uppin..........Lets get sum votes rollin in this shyt yall come on.....honest shyt though aight....drop a link, for us to return tha favor....
peace |
white virus wins this one better flow nd punches hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...57&pagenumber=2 |
doggy polll vote..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...57&pagenumber=2 |
4th Time uppin this....This battle has been goin on forever now yall...come on drop a honest vote..and a link and i'll hitcha battle up aight...
peace |
both verses was hot. mode took that shit. betta flows, and punches. but props to both niggaz
yall hit up my battles wit insert and eastside queen wit honest votes aight? hollla one |
iight lol hit this up now i keep the votes comin and hook it up on ur end 2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78890 |
good battle but I gotts to go with WHite V , he had better flow , better structure and more creativity , But Mode was no Floozy , he came hard , better vocab mioght have put him over the top ..
Vote WHiteV |
BlaH....imma go wit white virus on this one....
....to head betta punz.....some of the punz... in this battle waz childish...but overall.......... white took this one.....I'Ve seen betta from u WhiTe-Virus......... @ AJI.......KoNcEpT=Fracnhi$e............... i'm not sure if my comp will let me poll vote... ....................................... |
freepost again ur banned^
vote on my dawgs battle white virus and poll vote. vote fair tho im votin against u here. just thought he took it w/ better structure, u both lacked in punches big time, he had multies bagged |
UpPin....lets finish this battle off.....Vote then drop tha link and i'll hitcha back....Give a honest vote though and don't expect no dick ride shit.....i hate that....but i'm out............
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WV got this mainly b/c his structure was on point....
mode you came hard but ya flow was very hard to follow at times and your structure was for shit..plus your punches just didnt add up to WV Vote - WV |
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