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real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 04:18 AM

QuIcKWiTtEd vs. real_1_skiddlez
 
u spit first
10 - 20 lines max
10 - 15 min to spit after set up
usual rules

check in and drop and i will drop after u

good luck man this is ur first battle get ur name out

im out
1

real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 04:24 AM

checking innniiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 04:39 AM

man r u goin to check the fuck in or r u goin to sit there with ur thumb shooved up ur fuckin ass like a lil bitch ass nigga
?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????/

im out
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real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 04:49 AM

ok i need a mod in here to close this shit cause this lil bitch ran

i hate when that shit happens

so please will some 1 close this shit
thankz

im out
1

QuIcKWiTtEd 09-07-03 03:08 PM

yo yo yo niggah chill chill, my comp fucked up last night n it was to late for me to restart n all dat shit....my bad niggah my bad!!we still gon' do this tho ima spit right now iight
good loooks one.

real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 03:28 PM

ok drop ur verse u have 10 min ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

QuIcKWiTtEd 09-07-03 03:30 PM

iight here we go

yo im "quick" wit "real" spitz, the "1" that has real "wits", chew u up like "skiddles", so how u gon' say u ain't feelin it/1
its like an ali vs tyson fight, the shit ain't happenin, u "shakin" while im spittin, the crowd like damn "quicks" crackin-him/2
im back again, never leave the scene befo the cops come, take all the whack emcees together n divide, it'd equal you, the average sum/3
u ain't garbage, but u ain't good either, this is "super ugly" beef, n quickwitted is spittin "ether"/4
leisurely i put the mic near my mouth, n make some hip hop sounds, pleasurely i pull the gat from my hip, n let loose well aimed rounds/5
1 nicks ya face, n 2 slam ya legs, 3 hit ya torso, n 4 punches knocked ya off stage/6
u couldn't have actually thought that the kid was gon' come out soft, im new to this, but to rappin..nah/7
its gon' be easy victories, when i spit "reals" feelin me, slugs fallin out the sky at "skiddle" projectories, usin "ol' school" shit thats disecting "thee"/8
"shake" ya frame, n do like natives n throw "spears" at ya niggahs, think im lame?, put the nine in ya mouth befor i press on the triggah/9
make ya "wonder" how i could kill ya "blind"folded, trip ya wit the key board, n hit ya wit the wordplay bolded/10
the "real 1" jus got merked cause im full of "flavours", they say jesus n god did it, but to rapbattle.com im the newest saviour/11
i ain't got shit on you to revearse around, ain't heard 1 thing ya said to put ya down, so im usin my own shit too kill u now, do it "merry" then watch you "go-round"/12
i could stop here but wait i got a bit left, ya dome n my piece is gon' be the best, make sure ya met, each one my slugs befo the tearin ya vest/13
leave you to "rest", tell i put an end to wats left, leave u "in" a coffin, with 14 "peace"s to ya chest/14

good looks
one.

real_1_skiddlez 09-07-03 03:54 PM

ok here it is srry it took so long i just keystyled this cause i didnt think u were showin but here it is

peep this

These facts are not for the "WEAK-STOMACH-TO-HEAR"/
like crack, when my crew's heated, "WE-SUMMIN-YOUR-FEAR"/
dont fuck around and get a broom stick "SHOVED-IN-YOUR-REAR"/
i could rape you with words, BUTT "FUCK-IT-YOUR-QUEER"/
and i dont want you "FALLIN-IN-LOVE"/
i wanna battle you & batter you and have you "CRAWLIN-IN-MUD"/
you wanna talk turfs? we can "BRAWL-IN-YOUR-HOOD"/
cant beat me spitting rhymes, but perhaps 'STALLIN-YOU-COULD"/
skiddlez make you "FALL-WHEN-YOU-SHOULD" defeat you in a "FATAL-WAY"/
your batteling an ASS-HOLE and you like it, are you "STRAIGHT-OR-GAY"?/
if the prior statement's factual, bumpin my tracks is "ANAL-PLAY"/
But your an amature, so after i fuck you up kid, the "PAIN-WILL-STAY"/
The most kurrupt cant fuck with Da BanditZ "PRICK-THAT-CREWS-LEGIT"/
each one of us packs heat and when it "CLICKS-BACK-YOU-FIDGETTE"/
you dont want to make these "DICKS-WHACK-YOU-MIDGETTE"/
i'll rip out your spine and make your "TRICK-STAB-YOU-WITH-IT"/

*Finisher*
this is "HOW U GET IT" like a 12 year old "VIRGINS-PUSS"/
once my rhymes go in you, tons of blood will "SPLURGE-AND-GUSH"/

not bad for being on block and shit nice battle may the best mc win

im out
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Split-eyez 09-07-03 04:01 PM

I think real got this... close on though. Both came out strong but real got betta punches to my opinion... only for that reason I've to go for real.

vote - real

could you drop a poll vote on this one? thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1747#post761747

QuIcKWiTtEd 09-07-03 04:08 PM

1-0 we still upppin for more votes dont sleep on this shit people vote vote vote.............................................. ....................VOTE.......................... ..................

real_1_skiddlez 09-08-03 04:14 PM

uppin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~``

Illynice 09-08-03 04:19 PM

I VOTE FOR REAL 1 SKIDDLES.. HIS SHIT WAS CONSISTEN THORUGH OUT.. THE NEW DUDE HAD A COUPLE OF TIGHT LINES BUT HSI SHIT WASNT CONSISTENT

CrazyE 09-08-03 04:22 PM

Real dropped the doper verse , his flow and punches were easy read and follow , .... good complexity and structure to boot.

Quick witted , your shit wasnt bad either , you may have stretched some lines out , which affected your flow in certain points but it a great verse

Good Battle , both verses entertaining
Vote Real skiddels ( sorry bout da spelling )

CrazyE
someone hit dese up please , voting is optional
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77171
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77520

Steelfist 09-08-03 04:30 PM

real 1's shit is better where the fuck you vote though............................................ .................................................. ..............

Dr.SeusS 09-08-03 04:48 PM

QwikWitted, your Verse was Way More Complex then Skiddelz.
it was longer Too..cuz you had Longer Barz By far. Your
Punches were ok, but your Ryme Scheme wasnt that Good..
if your verse flowed Better..(Multies/ryme)..it would of been
a much better verse...over-all pretty creative...

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Skiddelz, your flow was really Simple, but the Ryme Schem was
wasy better..Punches werent' really that hard but a little
better flow...
VOTE-SKIDDELZ...


FUCK SLEEPERS
THESE BATTLES HAVE BEEN UP FOR 2 WEEKS. POLL VOTES ARE NEEDED!

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77500
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77358

$pitacular 09-08-03 04:51 PM

yo real 1 took this, WAY better rhyme structure, flow

real 1 punches were better, but both had some OK punches

vote = real 1

yo both of you hit this up

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77495

COM 09-09-03 07:54 AM

REal one took this easily with a simpler better flowing verse, the other guy tried to be complex and tripped over his own rhymes, VOTE REAL 1 SKIDDLEZ

youngblood 09-09-03 08:40 AM

yo real 1 took this, WAY better rhyme structure, flow

real 1 punches were better, but both had some OK punches

vote = real 1


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